Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
nooo

kamini deeepu teri wajah se!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: euphoric
eshu double dhamaka😆

Indeed...😆

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Esha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: euphoric
eshu double dhamaka😆

Kal teri thi...aaj mera hai...FKK saath hai toh chinta ki kya baat hai🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Good night aashu...sweet MWC dreams with ur PWPD🤣...kal subah tak mar nahi jaana kamini apne sapnon mein...waapas aaio jaroor🤣🤣🤣...wuww juuu🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

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awesome parts soni... loved it!! lets see wht happens now...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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finally the fireworks...we were waiting for...
ohh so the next update probably would be some talk or consoling each other...
i really liked the way how he got to know the truth about her marriage and the rest hopefully geet will tell him...
i am curious to see how will maan react on revelation about arjun and is it going to happen at the time engagement...as you have set the stage for the engagement to take place in mumbai...
two updates was a treat and itni dhamakedar was the icing on the cake...
both the parts were awesome...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#807

Omg! Double update 😲 *jumping wid joy*
wow! 😃
yippy 🥳
thanks 4 double dose 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

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so finally it's over. they both know they can trust eachother...aahhh

thank u for a nice update. geet crying in maan's arms was very satisfying. they've been hurting for so long.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I know this will soung rude...but, please please please update another part

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Posted: 14 years ago

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thank you sooo much for a super long and a wonderrrful update!

SO maan finally knows!I

cannot believe How evil Brij is!😲... He murdered them himself! his aunt and uncle! Cannot begin to imagine what Geet must be going through right now... the pain of losing her parents, her PARENTS in such a cold and violent manner!

The mere thought that somebody could have such rancor towards someone you love is terrifying in itself.. but to actually know that they were successful in their horrible intent and ... god.. I could soo feel her pain and heartbreak.

You wrote this part brilliantly.. Maan and Geet both were restless today though for different reasons, both in their quest for finding their truths.. could feel every accelerated heartbeat, the nervous tension from anticipation.. The shock , of knowing the one thing that turned their world on its axis..

I was also taken by how Sasha picked up on the angst of the lovers, the tension, and felt insecure about her own love, hugged Vicky closer. That was such a natural reaction.

A very well written update, both parts. Please please do update soon.

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