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Maitree

@..Maitree..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#771

Awwh It was Adorable! I loved how put this through...It was just beautiful! The starting was one thing that I loved the most,Riddhima watching her parents sit and hold each other in the porch swing in silence..Beautiful. I loved how you described Abhay,and her love for him.

The next part was quite a blow but it was astoundingly well-written, that was showing in your words. You described her turmoil wonderfully. I loved it. And Ofcourse Armaan was right in his way, asking her if she even wanted to give them a chance. The thought,picturisation and the end was So good...Loved every touch of it <3

Lovely OS Aanya, do write well Soon!

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Rhea

@Rhea.KaJen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#772

Comment edited on Pg 105 :)
All the best for tomorrow's exam! :D

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ARKJ_4EVER

@ARKJ_4EVER

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Posted: 13 years ago

#773

Wow...this is just flawless!!! Really Aanya this is one of the finest OS...it's sooo beautiful...have no words to describe how amazing n incredible it is...the words, the feelings, everything in its right place n sooo heartfelt words...

The flow of this was perfect from curiosity to pain to sadness then relief n happiness...Brilliantly n beautifully written!!!!!

Thanks 4 the pm

Take care

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Pranishta

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Tooba

@-Euphoria-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#774

The OS was LOVE. <3

All the best for your exams. :)

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558278

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Posted: 13 years ago

#775

Aw superb os! So cute! Sometimes moving on is for the best.

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#776

Suprise!! LONG comment edited on page105 ;)

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_Mannat_

@_Mannat_

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#777

aww...that was mindblowingg!!!! it was so cute...u really did a fantastic job!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Thanks for the pm!:)

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desikalakaar

@desikalakaar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#778

aww that was so cute <3

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soundsofcedar

@soundsofcedar

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#779

So while I was rereading your latest OS :P *3rd time :$* I realized I had said that I would comment on all your OS's and never got around to doing that :\ I blame finals! However now I thought since I have time to reread I certainly have time to comment on all the other OS's. LOL you don't have to read/reply btw I just have way too much time on my hand to blab :)

Ours: Cutest thing ever <3 I loved how they were celebrities 😍 it kind of reminded me of Tara Rum Pum. God I hate hate hate Shanky -___- always kaba mein haddi :( I felt bad for Armaano the worst thing someone can do to you is make you doubt yourself :\ If you lose faith in yourself there is not a lot you can do in life then haye. Riddhima's idea of knocking some sense into the dude was perfecto :P My favorite part has to be when she proposed him :$

Beautiful: This OS I have reread like so many times :| It's so so so so good! You got all the emotions spot on without really using dialogues. It really goes to show how talented you are man! The concept hasn't been used by many on this forum and I am glad you did :)

Isa: I LOVE LOVE LOVE when Armaano is bad 🤣 though in this one he wasn't really bad but still Riddhima thought so. His childhood :( was sad psht! But I loved how after hearing him out Riddhima knew that though she loved him they couldn't lead a life together so she stepped out of the way <3 Ending as always was love <3 (sucker for a happy ending talking here 🤣)

Armaan's Girlfriend: If I was called that :) I would never complain 🤣🤣 jokes apart this concept was so hatke and cahute! I love how she felt bad for taking her gussa out on Armaan :( and then the scene with and the kid was too adorable :$ OH OH and the bball court and the rain 😍 sigh so perfect. I loved this OS mucho <3

The Paradigm Shift: This was sad :( too sad hmph! But again you described everything SO WELL! The flashbacks of AR and their daughter were heartwrenching but sweet at the same time. I read this one often as well.

There done :D now I think another update is in order ;) 😆