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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

arya wah ur my sisi...u know i hate weddings...my mom scold be for nt atending ome...she always said tumhari mein kaun aay ga...n i sadi agar bychance mein ny kerli tu...hum dodno he kafi hongay😆..n bechai meri maaa

anyways
thnks for liking it
thks dear really i need ur prayers..i even cant understnd why just this is happening😕



ek baat bato duniya ki sari mom ek jaise hote hey kya...main kaise samjayu ki shadi main jane se assa hey ki main thori der ke liye so jayu...aur mera toh by ka koyi chance bhi nehi...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello GUYS

This all because of u all tht ur prayers hit so hard….i hve written this chp 5times before but I wasn't satisfied n whn I asked u all to pray … very next day I was able to write it into 2hrs…..thnku so much for ur love n support…n pls do always rember me in ur prayers always,,,,,

As we are proceeding towards the end of the story …..here r the final three updates….ya no more thn tht….i thought of posting it together but whn I strt writing ..it turn longer thn I thought so its divided in three parts…the updates will be very frequent..almost 1 everyday…..one today the other hopefully 2morow….n last on sat or Friday…….

I hope the most awaited wedding is worth reading

Lov ya

Fiza

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited:

thankoo thankooo for updating the part...🤗🤗


love ya dear...😊

aab mazay se three days guzray gai...


u sweet of u...😊🤗
Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

CHAPTER : 26A

SA: bs smarat itna kamosh kyun hai yeah samhj nhi araha

Vivek: woh itni door hai k in dono tak us k saaya bhi nhi askta ..

SA: she looked at him in surprise….matlab

Vivek: he is with my people ….far awy from india…mayank us k saaza nhi dayna chata tu kya mein nhi day sakta us ko….roo maat shilpa…aj humary eklotay bety ki shadi hai

He hugged her knowing wht pain she is going..wht so evr he is her son there son…..

……..

Nupur… decent down n mayank was already siting in mandab…..feeling her presence he turned around n found his dream decent down ….he took a deep breath..uff this feeling is non definable……

Standing up he offered his hand to her …looking up in his eyes….she raise her eyebrows in wht….he looked in surprised n thn got closed n grap her hand by himself n pulled her in mandab….proundly expressd…"this wht"….bth giggle a bit …….

The exchange warmalla…n sat down..complting the mantars…..the pandit ask ND to ca,e fwd for kaniyadan….

He sat between thm n took nupurs hand n placed it in mayank's hand but stoped

ND: day do

Mayank: daaad…

He smiled n palce it …complelting it he kissed nupurs head…..

Mayank: mein ap k beta nhi hoon kiya…..

ND: mer majal ap ko bhool jao…he kissd his head to …

thy stood up for pehras after ND did the kaniyaadan…..holding her hand before proceeding he announced

MAyank: pandit ji…dekho ap k vaaday tu ap jany….u continue tht…n we r gonna take our vows' oath our self..oki

PAndit: ji

Mayank: ji

Nupur: mayank…..yeah kiya hai….

Mayank: yeah agni hai..yeah pandit….tum nupur….aur ab hum lay ga 7 waaday….

5 min dayta hoon apny soch loo…..

Haaan…

ND: tum se tu shock k hi umeed rekhni chaiy

Mayank: thnku sasur ji…..

Shall we…

Nupur: kya koi aur choice hai

Mayank: han..ap ni mani tu mein utha ker bhi yeah kam kersakta hoon…..

FIRST VOW:

PANDIT : Groom....My beloved our love became firm by your walking one round with me...you will offer me food and be helpful in everyway.i will cherish you and provide for the welfare and happiness of you and our children...!!!

Bride.
...This is my humble submission to you that when you give me the responsibility of the home...food...taking care of the household activities...i promise you that i shall discharge all responsibilities for welfare of the family members and children...!!!

Mayank: isi baaat ka tu daar hai

Nupur: matlab..

Mayank: nupur n house hold just imagine

Shilpa hits her head…yeah loog yaha bhi serious nhi hosaktay…..

Nupur: acha… tu hum apny style mein promise laytay hain…as per ur wish ...mein ghar k koi kam akelay nhi kero gi...tum meray her kam , her responsibility mein mera sath doo gay

Mayank: i do..per ap ko bhi meri her KAM..mein sath dayna hoga…aur meri her wish k paalan kerna hoga

Nupur: define….

Mayank: really..he came close…yaha sab k samny…

Nupru: mayank…agay chalooo..

He chukled

PANDIT: Groom....My beloved now you have walked the second round with me...fill my heart with strength and courage and together we shall protect the house and children...!!!

Bride.
...My beloved in your grief i shall fill your heart with courage and strength...In your happiness i shall rejoice and promise you that i will please you always with sweet words and take care of family and children...In return you shall love me alone as your wife...!!!

mayank: spit in to laughter...sweet wordss...so no more stupid sharma

Nupur: really mayank. dramtically...oki jee...ab mein ap ko kahabi asa kuch nhi bolo gi

Mayahnk: dont u dare to ….he was looking disgustingly surprise..our oath..no matter wht how wht so ever happen ...we r gonna stay thy way we r …thy way bindas vr…nt thinking once before speaking our heart out

Nupur: she smile…I dooo…

PANDIT
Groom
...My beloved now you have walked three rounds with me...By virtue of this our wealth and prosperity is going to grow...you shall be the only woman to whom i shall love and respect as my wife...together we will educate our children and may they live long...!!!

Bride
...My beloved i will love you with single minded devotion as my husband..i will treat all other men as secondary...my devotion to you shall be of a chaste wife and you shall be my joy...this is my commitment to you...!!!

nupur: yeah cheating hai tum ny tu kaha nhi k tum single minded raho ga meri tarah...

Mayank: tu kya hua...multiple mind n single heart ...kasa

Nupur: mayankkk...

Mayank: i do sweet heart ...

ND: threw a flower at him...rukh jao yahi per..

Mayank: ab ap kyun gabar ban gay

ND: bolo…tum single minded ..single hearted ..n single eyed raho gay …

Mayank: tu kya zindagi bhar is ko ek ankh se dekho ga….

ND: mayank…

Mayank: oki oki….I do…tumahry elawa sapny mein bhi kis k bary mein na socho ga ….na dekho ga….

ND: better…wran kuch bhi dkhny k qabal nhi raho ga

Mayank: putting his hand on his waist ..ap ko mjhy per trust nhi

ND: hai…per why shud I wont b part of this fun…im liking this style

Mayank: n I love u ….proceed half way MRs sharma

PANDIT
Groom.
...My beloved..it is a great blessing that you have walked four rounds with me...you have brought auspiciousness and sacredness into my life...may we be blessed with obedient and noble children...may they live long...!!!

Bride...My beloved i will decorate you from feet to head with lots of happiness of different flowers...garlands...ornaments and fragrance...i will please you in every way i can...!!!

Nupur: ek baat batooo...tumhara her promise "children blessd" se shoro ho ker unhi per khatam hota hai...mein kaha hoon

Mayank: tu..meray bachay hai akhir...mein un kayal rekho ga…just like a proud father…

Nupur: tum mera kaun rekhy ga...dkho tum abhi apny promise se hat rahy hooo

Mayank: mein kaha hat raha hoon…nupur tum apny bacho se jealous horahi ho…how mean

Nupur: je nhi mein koi jealous nhi ho rahi…per tum mjhy kyun side line ker rahy hoo

Mayank: ufff meri HUM tum ki rani mukerji...mein sab se zayada aur sab se pehly sirf tum ko pyar kero ga...

PANDIT
Groom.
...My beloved you have walked five rounds with me...i know wife is the best friend and well wisher...you have enriched my life...may god bless you...may our loved ones live long and share in our prosperity...!!!

Bride
...My beloved i share both in your joy and sorrows...your love will make me trust and honor you...i will carry out your wishes...!!!

SA: ab is per tu agree kerlo pls...

OK..I DO...thy said in union...


Groom...My Graha Lakshami you have filled my heart with happiness by walking six rounds with me...may you be filled with joy and peace for all time...!!!

Bride
...My Pati Parameshwar in all acts of righteousness...in every form of enjoyment and divine acts i promise you i shall participate and i shall always be with you...!!!

nupur: mera pati sirf pati parameshwar nhi...

Mayank: nupurrr...

Nupur: han tu ….

Mayank: yahi tumhain lagta hai…k mein sahi nhi hota …matlab im wrong

Nupur: mayank mein ny yeah thori kaha …mein tu

Mayank: mein tu kya

Nupur: uffu..prahboo…I do …n will always doo…

Mayank: hmm..he smiled…proceed

PANDIT
Groom
...My beloved as you have walked the seventh round with me our love and friendship became eternal...we experienced spiritual union in God...now you have become completely mine therefore i offer my life to you...our marriage shall be forever and ever...!!!

Bride...My beloved as God and Holy scriptures i have become yours spouse whatever promises we have spoken in pure mind we will be truthful to each other in all things...we will love and honor each other for ever and ever and ever...!!!

Maysnk: finally…congrats MRs Sharma

Pandit ji: beta sindhoor tu laga do…

Mayank: ohh..woh tum mein bhol hi gaya

SA: kahmoshi se bahat jao aur rituals pora kero……

He filled her maaang…nt tied the magulastar..n was pronounced husband n wife…..took THE BLESSING FORM HIS PaRENT HE PROCEED TO ND…TOUCHING HIS FEET…HE THN HUGGED HIM TIGHT

MAYANK: thnku soo much dad…thnku u…for being my guardian n guidline

ND: zayada emotional kerny k zaroorat nhi…ur my son na..so thn …..

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Posted: 14 years ago
sab se pehlay tu thanks a lot for updating it...as i am eagerly w8ing for tht.but wht would happen after 3 days...jab yeh finish hujayi ga...😭😭😭...aisa nai husakta k u iska sequeal start karoo...😉.kaisa idea hai...?/??😊😊...lash na...😆😆 pls think over it...

now cum to the update...

hmmm...it was fab, awsome update...🤗🤗🤗...anr 7 rounds was just mindblowing of mayank and nupur's...🤣

his is my humble submission to you that when you give me the responsibility of the home...food...taking care of the household activities...i promise you that i shall discharge all responsibilities for welfare of the family members and children...!!!

Mayank: isi baaat ka tu daar hai

Nupur: matlab..

Mayank: nupur n house hold just imagine

Shilpa hits her head…yeah loog yaha bhi serious nhi hosaktay…..

Nupur: acha… tu hum apny style mein promise laytay hain…as per ur wish ...mein ghar k koi kam akelay nhi kero gi...tum meray her kam , her responsibility mein mera sath doo

tht was awsome...😆😆😆😆😆...i loved it...
and mayank dad uff...wht a chracter he is...swettt...😊😊



Mayank: i do sweet heart ...

ND: threw a flower at him...rukh jao yahi per..

Mayank: ab ap kyun gabar ban gay

ND: bolo…tum single minded ..single hearted ..n single eyed raho gay …

Mayank: tu kya zindagi bhar is ko ek ankh se dekho ga….

ND: mayank…

Mayank: oki oki….I do…tumahry elawa sapny mein bhi kis k bary mein na socho ga ….na dekho ga….

ND: better…wran kuch bhi dkhny k qabal nhi raho ga

Mayank: putting his hand on his waist ..ap ko mjhy per trust nhi

ND: hai…per why shud I wont b part of this fun…im liking this style

and this part...🤣🤣 🤣 i am through laugh while reading this...i can imagine this scene as well..k kiya hurah ahugarouds laitai time...😆😆

and child wala part bhi buhat zabardast tha...

this update was really really amusing...😃😃


now m eagerly w8ing for tomorows update...😊

thanks a lot for ging us such a beautiful ff...

love ya lot...😊

yar i missed u lot today...😭😭


🤣
Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Fiza
it was fantastic update
hehehehehee mayur were too funny...- loved mayus nautanki
loved they way they were taking shaadi wala promises...it was damn cute...
loved the whole update...
i've enjoyed it a lot

fantastic job dear
keep updatng

Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Cute update😳
Mayur and their whole family is havng fun durng the marriage..😆😆..aur dono kitna dramatic hai😳
Update the next part soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Simply amazing update sis
each vow was fantastic n beautiful words
my fav is this 1Bride...My beloved i will decorate you from feet to head with lots of happiness of different flowers...garlands...ornaments and fragrance...i will please you in every way i can...!!!
thank u so much hun for updating 🤗
n sure will remember u in my prayers
but sad this wonderful FF is going to end 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yaar yeh double treat dena Mayur aur Mayurians ka fav game hai right😉...Mayur ne double promises liya n tumne double update ka treat diya 😊...thankyou...!!!

Mayank's father is really a devoted father...maybe he is wrong to some extent to Mayank which he too don't denies but that ddin't over shadow him as a good father...he defo is very much concerned for his son...he loves him way too much...though Mayank restricted him in every way to interfere in his life still he made sure to be there always for him...we can't deny that if it was not him then Sam would have been succeeded way back...he made sure to help Mayur in all possible way though not being on focus...Good to know Sam got the punishment he deserve...if not Mayur but someone had to punish him n who else would be better than his own parents...u covered up this particular part with such smoothness...brilliant work...!!!

Now comes the most awaited shaadi...dreamy n funfilled...arre yaar Mayur n Fun ka choli daaman ka saath hai...both r incomplete without each other...aur yeh double promises wala shaadi tou we can only expect from our beloved Mayur na😆...ab hatke jodi hai tou hatke shaadi bhi to honi chahiye...!!!

Full on masti masti mood wala Dulha aur Sasur ho to shaadi rukhi sukhi kaisey ho sakti hai...aur hum kitni baar kahe I LOVE this duo...waise i don't mind saying it agn n agn😉 ...jaisa Damaad waisey Sasur...Kanyadaan bhi kiya tou puri filmy style mein..."Day Doon"...hahahaa...!!!

7 waday aur 5 mins sochne ko...LOL...Mayank n his shock giving nature...well very much expected...akhir Mayur ki shaadi hai...the craziest couple who makes ppl go crazy without much effort...bechare Pandit ji 😲😆...!!!

Their self promises were so much fun yet it reflects their Love...Care...Concern...and above all Trust...!!!

Those punches in between pheras are damn hilarious...."Ab aap kyun gabbar ban gaye hai 🤣..."To kya zindagi bhar isko ek ankh se dekhon ga"🤣🤣...ND bhi kuch kam kahan after all partner ka saath tou denge na😆...aisey fun filled shaadi ho tou he won't be a part of this fun kya..."Kuch aur dekhne ke qabil nahi rahoge".😆...!!!

Ab Nupur will feel left out akhir shaadi uski bhi tou hai😆...so why she won't be participating in those masti..."Tumhari saari promises bachon se shuru hokar...n mujhe side line kar rahe ho😆...well his Hubby is always soo ready to annoy her she should know 😆..."apne bachon se jealous...n meri Hum Tum ki Rani Mukherjee🤣🤣...God his sense of humour...!!!

Thank God they atleast agree on 1 promise for a change...soo much relief for ppl around them😆...!!!

Pati Parmeshwar n Prabhoo...I DO...was no less😆...!!!

LMAO Mayank ki soo excited that forget sindoor n Mangalsutra rasm...!!!

Aww how sweetly he thanks ND for being there everytime they needed...so touchy n emotional...!!!

Aisey Rocking shaadi sirf Mayur ki hi hosakti hai BY GOD 😳...JAI HO Mayur n Mayurians ki...!!!

Now blessing time guys...May they live happily ever after...!!!




Edited by valiyah27 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
fantastic update Fiza!
very well written 👏
finally mayur married 😃
in ki nautanki to mandap mei bhi khatam nai hui 😆
loved their cute nok-jhok 😳
update the next part soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊

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