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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drmaha

sab se pehlay tu thanks a lot for updating it...as i am eagerly w8ing for tht.but wht would happen after 3 days...jab yeh finish hujayi ga...😭😭😭...aisa nai husakta k u iska sequeal start karoo...😉.kaisa idea hai...?/??😊😊...lash na...😆😆 pls think over it...

now cum to the update...

hmmm...it was fab, awsome update...🤗🤗🤗...anr 7 rounds was just mindblowing of mayank and nupur's...🤣

his is my humble submission to you that when you give me the responsibility of the home...food...taking care of the household activities...i promise you that i shall discharge all responsibilities for welfare of the family members and children...!!!

Mayank: isi baaat ka tu daar hai

Nupur: matlab..

Mayank: nupur n house hold just imagine

Shilpa hits her head'yeah loog yaha bhi serious nhi hosaktay'..

Nupur: acha' tu hum apny style mein promise laytay hain'as per ur wish ...mein ghar k koi kam akelay nhi kero gi...tum meray her kam , her responsibility mein mera sath doo

tht was awsome...😆😆😆😆😆...i loved it...
and mayank dad uff...wht a chracter he is...swettt...😊😊



Mayank: i do sweet heart ...

ND: threw a flower at him...rukh jao yahi per..

Mayank: ab ap kyun gabar ban gay

ND: bolo'tum single minded ..single hearted ..n single eyed raho gay '

Mayank: tu kya zindagi bhar is ko ek ankh se dekho ga'.

ND: mayank'

Mayank: oki oki'.I do'tumahry elawa sapny mein bhi kis k bary mein na socho ga '.na dekho ga'.

ND: better'wran kuch bhi dkhny k qabal nhi raho ga

Mayank: putting his hand on his waist ..ap ko mjhy per trust nhi

ND: hai'per why shud I wont b part of this fun'im liking this style

and this part...🤣🤣 🤣 i am through laugh while reading this...i can imagine this scene as well..k kiya hurah ahugarouds laitai time...😆😆

and child wala part bhi buhat zabardast tha...

this update was really really amusing...😃😃


now m eagerly w8ing for tomorows update...😊

thanks a lot for ging us such a beautiful ff...

love ya lot...😊

yar i missed u lot today...😭😭


🤣

thnku sooo muc dear
ahh u know how much i have bothered u valiyahn jiya for this update...
thnks for liking n enjoying this part
yaar im missd u tooo...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

Cute update😳
Mayur and their whole family is havng fun durng the marriage..😆😆..aur dono kitna dramatic hai😳
Update the next part soon😊

hey thnks dear
thnks for loving it
ya i want u alll to have fun till this ff end...n glad u r having to
nex part hopfull 2morow
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

Simply amazing update sis

each vow was fantastic n beautiful words
my fav is this 1Bride...My beloved i will decorate you from feet to head with lots of happiness of different flowers...garlands...ornaments and fragrance...i will please you in every way i can...!!!
thank u so much hun for updating 🤗
n sure will remember u in my prayers
but sad this wonderful FF is going to end 😭

thnks dear
the words for vows credit goes to valiyah it was her search...though jiya n maha also helped to find me tht...baqi mayank nupur are mine..tu i'll take tht credit
thnks for the prayers yaar...thnks aloot
i know frst the feeling is sinking in me too...but i'll cu up with new...there is loads of thngs im planing just nt geting time
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

fantastic update Fiza!

very well written 👏
finally mayur married 😃
in ki nautanki to mandap mei bhi khatam nai hui 😆
loved their cute nok-jhok 😳
update the next part soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊

thnku so much ear
im so gald u all r enjoying the wedding u all waited so long for it
next part is very soonn
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Posted: 14 years ago
this is the best marriage...aise pagalpan hum sirf mayur se hi expect kar sakte hey...more than love it...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

this is the best marriage...aise pagalpan hum sirf mayur se hi expect kar sakte hey...more than love it...

thnku soo much dear
yeah tu hai pagalpan hum sirf Mayur se ya un k fans se hi expect ker sakty hain
thnks for more thn loving it 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
mindblowing , suparb. mayank and nupur are the most lively couple
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Posted: 14 years ago
lolz...

cute n funny

lovely yrrr

best weeding till date...on ff world :P
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Posted: 14 years ago

this a bad thing abt me😆...whn i wrote sumthng i cant stop my self from updating...so here is the most awaited😳...

THE WEDDING NIGHT

CHAPTER 26 B

Standing in front of his rooms door…he was smiling like stupid love struck person …….just to imagine the view infront of him..she his…only his…waiting for him …he opened the door n was in shock….

It was empty….no one was there…..lights were dimed due to the candles been lighted by him to make the ambiance romantic…..to wch whn he was buying candles…nupur made face like" koi mjhy bachy"…to wch his eyes said" haha…in ur dreams"…….

But to his shock there was no sign of nupur…"ouch" the sound made him reliefed she is here….but wht she is doing ther…the voice camed from the dressing room….he went there n winced

Mayank: nupurrr…..u were supposed to me my bride

Nupur: mayank are u suffering from demesia…im still ur bride…stupid shrama

Mayank: so u shud be wait for me…..nt doing this..

Nupur: she was untying her hairs..n removing 2000 pins from her hairs….finally..after roemoving her last pin…already she had removed her jellwery apart from earimgs as for tugged sumwhere in her hair

Mayank: wht finally….this isn't nt fair

Nupur: wht do u thought..i'll b waiting for u in center of bed with my veil pulled on my face….she said dramticlay n dreamingly……

Mayank: yes….he said putting his hand on acroos his chest

Nupur: mayankkk…she laughed

Mayank: cant u do tht for me….he pounded

Nupur: I cant believe it….

Mayank: plss..pls..pls….he pushed her back too room…..

She sat ther…

Nupur: im nt gonaa put the veil…..

Pls pls

Aww I so hate u…

He put of the veil n slided his hand on her face….

Lagta hai chand zameen per agaya….

Nupur: tht was sooo

Mayank: yuki chessi….

N thn bth shared a high five…..

So finally we r a cheesy couple..BY GOD

Jumped on the bed he sat infront of her…..

Mayank: u know wht u look the most beautiful bride evr

Nupur: now ur gonna say dialogues also

Mayank: u think im joking…..i mean it..his tone from fun suddenly changed to love filled …..

Nupur: she control the blush….i know…

Smilingly he took her hand n sliped the wedding band in her ring….

Thnks for being mine….he kissed the ring…..

Moving towards her..he went on back n hugged her….n put her chin on her shoulder….he looked at her…n crawling his fingers from near her forehead…to her chin…feeling her soft skin warming with his touch……she tighly closed her eyes ….he remove her hairs..touching her neckline…n placing thm on other shoulder…

Mayank: uffuuu….i just cant still belive it

Nupur: y…..

Mayank: it feels like a dream….

Nupur: obviously itna dhooa( smoke hai yaha…..she suppress her chuckle

Mayank: hmm…he tighten his grip more….to her surpise..sorry Mrs stupid shrama….if u thnk ur gone irritated me…n thn im gonna leave u…he dip his head in her neck….ur mistaken ….he kissed there n abruptly move away…..

Slowly caressing her ear he removed her ear ring…she gasped n closed her eyes in anticipation…n opened thm whn she found her hand in his hold….he was smply playing with her ring….n thn gigled

Mayank: just went back to our first meeting….did we for a mere second thought in future we will b like this ….he chukled n nupur to joined him……n thn the Eid festive…..n

She was so surprised of his behavior at moment make her skip her heart beat n other holding her intimately…..

Nupur: hmm n u lost ur heart….hooo

Mayank: kya kero ap lag hi asy rahi thi….he tighten his grip

Nupur: n thn u an ur anger ..

Mayank: wasy im liking adi ..na woh hota na mjhy gussa ata…aur na mjhy pata chalta…wht ur for me

Nupur: aur woh stage per kiya tha….

Mayank: nuzzling inside……lost myself completely….if it wouldn't have been the claps….

Nupur: I would have hided my self in ur arms…..she puted her head back on her his shoulder…..n closed her eyes

Mayank: y ru slepping

Nupur: im nt sleeping stupid

Mayank: y nt ..its 1am nupur…he said mischievously …

Nupur: really she get off from his hold…..uff..itni dair hogi ..gud night….

He looked at her standing figure intently with a bit surprise wch changed into a grin alarming nupur sumthng is Cuming her way ….HE Stood up n pulled her in his arms

Aatay aaty agay pass hum jaaty jaaty lagy tum sanam

Meri neendain meray sary sapny ….

Sanked his hand on her bare waist…he made her shiver….

Tighting his grip her around her waist he slided his dupta off her head…...nuzzling inside her…he dip his head…

Lay chalo mjhy ko bhi sath apny ,…

Tum na mano tu tum ko kasam…..

She bow down her head to hiding her face beneath the veil of her hairs…diping his head ..he played with her hair with his nose n lips…n move inside her hairs..to touch her skin….

Her grip turn into shiver…..

He kissed her shoulder deep…n remain there for longer …sliding uo without removing his feel on her he move to her cheeks….he turn her to face her himself

Chahy dil mang lo

Chahy jan mang lo

Na je na na je na….han je han mang lo

Aj hum se tum sara jaha mang loo

Mayank: I told u im nt gonna leave u …..

She smiled n didn't said anythny neither looked in his directon…

He took her in his arms…n place her to comfort her more….

Findng space he digged his head in her neck n kissed her sensuously …causing her to turn her face towards him….he moved up n kissed her jaw line….leaving a trail of kisses…moving away he looked at her …closed eyes…beetroot red cheeks…..he kissd thm …n whn his eyes fall on her hand..she was clutching the side tightly….

Mayank: nupur….am I doing sumthng…he stoped in between….n looked at her with guilt n fear

Nupur: she slowly opened her eyes n was surprised at hs question….shyly she smiled…n noded in no….placing her hand on his cheeks n moving in his hair he slowy pulled him closed n captured his lips …his all fears n questions where answered by ths..soflty he responded to the trust n love she showed .griping her more close…he hold her more deep n deeper…moving apart …he kissed her eyes n forhead…n proceed down to her neckline…..kissing the marks he left

His evey touch was as soft n gentle as he can…with all his love n passion ….he told her how much he loves her n craved for her closeness……her tight hold n moans express ….the extend of her desires n love for him….

Making her completely his he was lying beside her..possessively holding his precious posseion in his arms…..resting his head on her shoulder…tickling her neck with hs breath n guarding her eyes with his hairs..slowly she moved towards him n kissed his forhead….he smiled n digged himself more in her …kissing n placing his lips on her neck…..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
O dear that was really the Most beautiful Weeding of this world
so different thought
i love it
thank u so much For this Lovely Ff
thanks For pm
cont soon

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