FF: U n me!! PART 4 pg 16

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#71

U changed d story lil bit but i think copy paste mar de yaar story start karle jaha par chodi thi. . .lol. . See i m again reading d story.

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

awesome update...
n ha u add much more of geet maan once she know maans intentions... u didn't write much in old parts..

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

loved both the updates...

seems u hv added some more scenes which were not in the prev one...

pl cont soon

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swetha10

@swetha10

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Nice FF.. very interesting.. plzz add me onto ur pm list...

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Durga

@mrk-1

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

wow awsome yaar...loved it !!!do continue soon ...

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

lovely update... waiting for next part... expecting something u know☺️

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beautiful_life

@beautiful_life

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56
U changed d story lil bit but i think copy paste mar de yaar story start karle jaha par chodi thi. . .lol. . See i m again reading d story.

i wantd 2 do d sam bt ek post new add kar k maaneet monemts i l copy d read parts n start new...

stry chnge nhi ki bas adition kari hai thodiii

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beautiful_life

@beautiful_life

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
awesome update...
n ha u add much more of geet maan once she know maans intentions... u didn't write much in old parts..

wel kyunki school days k bare main likhna is little boring heheh...bt i l add parts ki afta geet noeing d truth raectn unka 10 ka mks n ol dat

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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Wow!!!

Loveee the part!!!

Continue soonnn.

Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

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Chelsha

@Chelsha

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Great update yaar.
Maan in the story is typical attitudewala Maan as in the serial. He wants Geet to approach him first!!!
But as usual he is the one who tells her his love first. Hehehe...Maan thum bhi na!
Geet talks too much with her diary. Her diary has all her secret thoughts about Maan.
Lucky diary!!
Hey I laughed nonstop when i read that paisa aur tax wala dialogues. Bravo Geet...What a reply!
Loved the cute way of Maan asking Geet to become his Girl friend.
Awww...more romantic scenes to come!! Waiting eagerly for the next part. Chelsha.
😛

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