::|Ur Luv's Amazin|:: SaJan OS~ Pt2 Pg5[18/05/11]

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: mars14
awseome os..i read both parts..n realy it was really v v romantic n wonderfull os...mindblowing amazing superb rocking os loved it to the core thanks for pm...

Hey Meri!🤗

I am really very glad you liked my OneShot!😃

Love from Nivriti😳

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Bidz_cutegal

Hey Nivriti.. 🤗

Well, school is more important.. So concentrate on that now.. Good luck with that.. 😃 And yeah I agree that it was kinda short but still loved it and you didn't disappoint me at all..😊 Waiting for the epilogue.. 😳 Its better if you take your time and write it perfectly.. 😛 I want the perfect, okay? 😉 Hehe.. 😆

Take care.. 😊

Hey Bidz!🤗

I am glad you were not disappointed!😊 Even though my vacations start from today, I have bundles and bundles of HomeWork with very less time!

Therefore, I will take some time to write the prologue!😛

I will try my best to make it perfect!😃 Can't promise you know!😆

Take Care!

Love from Nivriti😳

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Sumbul Qaiser

@sumbulqaiser

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

very nice update , continue soon

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Awesome part Nivi...!!👏 Its too good yaar...👏 short but,very-very sweet part.😊 Very well written Part.👏'GuNur' conversation is very very touchy.😭Marriage scene was short but,presenting so...perfectly.I loved it.👏 😊

Study is important...I understand very well to your situation...but,if,you have some time... Please,continue...😳Thanks for PM...and very sorry for my very late reply.😳 😳 😳

Joseph❤️

Edited by Joseph_A - 14 years ago

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Joseph_A

Awesome part Nivi...!!👏 Its too good yaar...👏 short but,very-very sweet part.😊 Very well written Part.👏'GuNur' conversation is very very touchy.😭Marriage scene was short but,presenting so...perfectly.I loved it.👏 😊

Study is important...I understand very well to your situation...but,if,you have some time... Please,continue...😳Thanks for PM...and very sorry for my very late reply.😳 😳 😳

Joseph❤️

Hey Joseph Bhai!! I am glad you loved it. I am really sorry for the short part but that was all my schedule could allow! And it is okay!! Late replies are forgiven!😃

Love, Nivriti

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: mjiJ
very nice update , continue soon

I am glad you liked it.😳 Will update soon!😃

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RICHA

@ar_sajan4evr

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

lovely update nivriti
realyyy nyccc
thnx 4 d pm
n
cont soon

Edited by ar_sajan4evr - 14 years ago

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: ar_sajan4evr
lovely update nivriti
realyyy nyccc
thnx 4 d pm
n
cont soon

Hey!🤗

I am really glad you liked it!😃

I will try and update soon but circumstances don't allow me to update!

So Keep WAITING😉

With Love,

Nivriti😊

P.S:: What is your name by the way?😳

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sara ifteqar

@princess_sara

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Heyyy
Welll waooo it was a fantastic update.
And if u want us to be free,so its a little request from me.
As in this update thr was less romance of sajan,its was just a Passionate kiss and cuddleing,
U would have written the last part in a bit detailed way or a bit longer way,so that we will all be seeing sajan "suhagrat" in a romantic way,
But overall.
it was a Greattt part,seriouslyyy it was very nyc as it was
"THE MARRIEGE OF OUR SAJAN"
If u would have little more exxagrate it,it would have be Outstanding update among all ur updates till now,
Plzzz don't mind,thr is no heart feeling,i just told u as u told us to say.
okay
and plzzz do pm me whenever u update the next part,eagerly waiting for ur next update aur iplzzz update it soon.as i really want to see the "Fresh,and a new bigning of our SAJAN life after marriege.

Sorry if i have hurted u with my cmment...plz don't mind.😭
luv u
sara

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: princess_sara
Heyyy
Welll waooo it was a fantastic update.
And if u want us to be free,so its a little request from me.
As in this update thr was less romance of sajan,its was just a Passionate kiss and cuddleing,
U would have written the last part in a bit detailed way or a bit longer way,so that we will all be seeing sajan "suhagrat" in a romantic way,
But overall.
it was a Greattt part,seriouslyyy it was very nyc as it was
"THE MARRIEGE OF OUR SAJAN"
If u would have little more exxagrate it,it would have be Outstanding update among all ur updates till now,
Plzzz don't mind,thr is no heart feeling,i just told u as u told us to say.
okay
and plzzz do pm me whenever u update the next part,eagerly waiting for ur next update aur iplzzz update it soon.as i really want to see the "Fresh,and a new bigning of our SAJAN life after marriege.

Sorry if i have hurted u with my cmment...plz don't mind.😭
luv u
sara

Hey Sara!!🤗

Thank you for your lovely response!😊

I am glad you put in your views!😃

I'm sorry I had to put a very little part of "Suhagraat" but that is all the time I had would allow!

I will try and make it up in the prologue!😃

You have not hurted me with your comment, I am glad you took my advise seriously and added critism..

Now I know what shall I do in the prologue!😉

I will try and continue soon! Let's see how much my time allows...

I wanted to update ASAP but under some circumstances I can't and plus I have to update 2 of my SS too... Currently I am going to update Love Is Always Complicated😃

Thanks again!
Love,

Nivriti😳

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