Mayur FF- Love will find a way#2 Epilogue Pg 80

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Fantasia.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#531

edited my comment on pg 75 .. 😳

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kirti123

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#532

wow i just love this ff

feeling sad that u ended but it is one of my fav mayur ff

really loved the story very much

please do start a new mayur ff soon

😊

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Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#533

i feel sad that its ended. but all good things come to an end.it was a wonderful journey altogether.

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Supriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#534

omg payal... such an beautiful end!!!!😍
😳dis is d sweetest story i hav ever read...😍
luvd it 2 d bits...
n i must say... u write romantic updates also soo brilliantly... 👏
wud miss dis ff loads...
pls keep writin more...
luv ya loads...🤗

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Mini4

@Mini4

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#535

👏hey...dis was 1 of d cutest n romantic story on MAYUR...

loved it completely RIGHT FRM D START TILL D END..hats off 2 u fr writing such a beautiful story...

i would lik 2 appreciate ur consistent updates during d journey of dis story.CONTINUE writing...

nw abt d last part it ws quite romantic...

thanx fr d PM..

❤️

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mayuloveu

@mayuloveu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#536

payal what a beautiful ending. plz payal start a new Mayur ff. plzzz . we request you

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dua

@dua22

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#537

Awwwe payal i will miss this one alot...i loved each n everything about this ff...n shilpa aunty was my fav character...the way u presented her was just too good...this was the sweetest ff...u gave a perfect ending to it...do write more ffs...

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Pradnya

@Prada_176

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#538

Beautiful ending... Payal

I like the beautiful journey of Mayur in your FF.

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-Annu-

@-Annu-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#539

pallluuu...luk Whose Here... 😃😳
Remember Me...😃😳
okay Jokes apart...😆
🤗🤗🤗
i finallyy Completely read ur FF ...the Last Four Parts that i Left...Finsheddd reading them...😉😆
i know Zyada Late Hogaya Na...😆
Soorrryyy...😳😆
okay nw cuming back to ur Updates...Palluuu...😳

Part 47:
Hayeee...mayu is sooo cute...us ne usay Roses Plants Gift kiye...it was quite Cute Actuallyyy...😳😆
i luvd how shilpa was teasing Them...😆
n there Conversation at night was Cute...😳they r opening Up...😳😍
Luvlyyy update...😳👏

Part 48:
Luvly start With a Beautiful Morning...i really luvd the Line...😳

He silently took another picture of his sleeping beloved in his mind before he left...

this was Actually verryyy Cute...😳

n the Bathroom Scene...he took her Inside...gossshhh..Nupsieee...Kya Soch rahi Thi...😆
but she was sooo touched by seeing the Smilyes...😳this was The Best part of the Update...N actually veryy Adorable n Cute...😳
Mayuu is a Darlinggg...😳
But he Understood...What she was thinking...😆
Gosshhh palluuu...the Rain wala Part...☺️
he was splashing water on him...n he...OMG...picked her n swirled her...hayeee...😳 😍
Hayeee...Mayu went sooo Close to Nupur...n they Kisseddd...Ufff...Ultraaa Romanticcc...☺️😍
but then the phone call...😳
lolzz...they were embarrassed...😆
nupur...actually was being a typical Biwi at night...😆he wanted her to sleep...n she...que pe que...but she wanted to talked to him...😳
the Gudnight kiss was Adorable...😳😍
Such a Romantic Part ...palluuu...☺️😍

Part 49 & 50:

hayeee...mayu planned a weakened...or shall i say romantic weakened...😉😆
lolzzz...Nupur's Shortcut...😆
awww...they were walking hand in hand...😍
n mayu suddenly was romantic han...😳under the Tree...n saying to her...that she is jan bhoj kr doing this...😆

lols at midnight they ate Maggi Noodles...😆
oyee hoyeee...nupur ka gussa...but mayu...ne usay man he liya...😳😆
the Swing Romance was...i m speechless...hayeee...☺️☺️😍
n Ufff...the way Mayuu Asked...that can they be more Close...mujeh...PBM yaad a gaaya...☺️☺️😍
it was Luvlyyy ...cuteee...Adorable...n Then a ROMANTICCC..update Sweetyyy...Luvd It ..palluuu...☺️☺️😍
pallu i really luved it...that how u made a progress in there relation day by day...👏
the awkwardness was gone..day by day...they were Opening up...n there luv for eachother was growing day by day...😳😳😳
Beautiful n Luvly n adorable Ending...palluuu...😳👏
written Sooo well...😳👏
n ya as all r sad...n me too...that this FF is ended...
n ya...i vl seriouslyyy miss ur FF...😳but waiting for u next one...😳
palluuu u r an amazing writer...n u write beautifully...😳👏👏
Seriouslyy waiting for the Next one...😳🤗
luv yaaa...😳🤗
Muaahhh...❤️🤗🤗
ANNU😳

Edited by Annu_Arti_Mayur - 14 years ago