It Just Took Time |AR OS| Removed |

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desikalakaar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1

Due to personal reasons, the author has removed this piece.

Edited by kajenkashkriya - 14 years ago

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Mahek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#2

loved it
awesome OS 😊

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Sej

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Posted: 14 years ago

#3

awww this was sooo goodo i loved it and i think you should write more OS's your a very good writer and this was very very cute loved it :D

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Shivani Dhawan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#4

oh my god that was sooo good... good is not even a word to describe this it was too cute, too adorable and oh my god... i was actually blushing when i was reading this :) it was wonderful.. pls make a second part for this hehehehe

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BABY-GIRL7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#5

One word. Beautiful.
Loveddd it. Plz plz write some more. It was really really good. Realistic. Natural and taking place with time. Just like real relationships

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lakshmi

@meow23

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Posted: 14 years ago

#6

hey kriya,

luvly prt.. way u explained d transaction from stranf=gers to best freinds to nwly wed couple n finally becmng one..

wen u started d story i thogt ridz was preganant.. d way u mentioned her dng yoga nt likng d orange juice..😆😆😆

luvly os.. thnx 4 d pm

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Nina

@Stupidcupid1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#7

love the os
should write another one

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#8

awww tht was soo cute :)

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Usha

@alaipayuthey

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Posted: 14 years ago

#9

luved the OS!

it was too cute!

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shaaz_91

@shaaz_91

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey
awesome one...luvd it
n it felt so real...d emotions dey shared
totally adorable
tc
shaaz

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