FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 - Page 9

Wonderful update. Finally the submission that I was hoping for came! I also hope it's not short lived though.

I have a feeling Geet is pregnant but the suspense is getting to me! Can't wait for the next one!

Part 69: Stairway to Heaven: This can only mean good things! Firstly, I was stranded on the train for 3 hours so happy I brought along my laptop b/c I got to read the next part….lucky me!! YAY!!!! Okay…stairway to heaven…this is setting my hopes real high, I hope you don't crush them b/c someone is gonna be upset (hint hint…that someone is ME)!

Loved the comparison between the cold weather….cold snow...and the cold Maan…and the coldness in his eyes…super poetic…love it!!! And geet…how amusing…playing along to get the fun and playful maan back!!!

saw her undress herself in my presence, as she ran towards the shower, I was overtaken by my primal cravings-this is hot…can't believe she would do this…it blows my mind! And the primal-ness sinking in….YES!!!

HA! "Different hungers"…..me likes! Me likes a LOT!!!

For once I felt like clay; she was molding my emotions gently and unknowingly. –AWW! Where you come up with metaphors like this? I love metaphors…so beautiful!

Ahhh!!! He loves her more of his "meandering life"….that's gotta be one of the most heart melting lines ever! I wish he could say all of this to her! Oh MEN!!! His little temptress….I guess her nickname ain't Mishti anymore…or Mishti is for the sweet Geet and Temptress for the wild, Rihanna-influenced one…gotta love Rihanna (listening to SM while reading this so you may see many more Rihanna references…my apologizes)

OMFG!!! Her description…so angelic and he phrased it (well you, but you know what I mean) perfectly…so hot and sexy!!! This is getting warmer and hotter and sexier by the paragraph…no correction, by the sentence!!!

his iris darkened and glowed as smoldering hot coals-awesome imagery…a simile I love and might even use in the future….def will credit you ;)!!!

Hugging and kissing and tender feelings…Love it!!! TO DEATH!!!! The fire is blazing in the background..so symbolic…the fire outside and the fire within…nicely captured!

AHHH!!! Swollen lip…paradise baby!!!! That was so epic…the whole scene and the diction and syntax and all that jazz…seriously I loved reading between the lines as well!!!!

Now she's on top…oh my god….awesome!!! She is shocking me and surprising me like no other!!! And gave him a swollen lip….revenge is sweet and quite sexy too!!!!

"What if I wanted you more than you did...And I do...I always did" –AWWW!!!!! This is another epic line…I almost fainted…but compised myself to read the rest…hahahahaha!!!

The woman said Kiss and not wavering for an instant. Was I dreaming?-My reaction likewise….I can't believe he said that…I laughed a little…so true and quite a funny reaction!!!

MAKING LOVE….she said that!! WHOA!!! Someone slap me…no really someone…I can't believe this!!! I must be dreaming, but I'm not! Thank you H!!! This is probably the most epicest update eva!!!! Landamrk….you put quite accurately!!!

It was a mesmerizing pleasure as I made love to her...A stairway to heaven.-Bringing it all back to the title…genius! Seriously…so beautifully done!!! She wanted more of him and he finished her sentence….so chweet!!!

Wrapped in nothing but a blanket and his steady arms, resting behind on a sure, ever present shoulder, the serene beauty of the Alaskan sky, came alive as his assuring kisses whispered promises of enduring love into me.-beautiful….immensely gorgeously depicted!!! Kudos!!

I love her monologue at the end and how she has grown….amazing update/chapter to portray her character growth and change! Seriosuly it was so clear and she was so bold!

Love the ending…an "everlasting want"…aww! So gushy, but so uff!!! Poetic beyond words and belief!!! Amazing chapter…and loved it to bits and pieces!!!

Seriosuly…hope more scenes like these to come…def not disappointment at all b/c this was truly a masterpiece!!!!

Originally posted by: 6thElement

@ pixie and sweet coco...your terse comments are getting to me 😲

Originally posted by: -pixie-

Hasini, I am firm follower of the KISS principle!

KISS= Keep it short and sweet 😆

Will try and leave behind an unterse comment soon😃. Happy? :*