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Posted: 14 years ago

My Favorite...

The Pitbull song I had mentioned in the update. 😊.


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EPo5wWmKEaI&feature=related=player_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
4 parts back to back...
hasini you are on a roll dear...
what a way to celebrate the weekend...

i loved the 3rd update to core...
the way you used the maaneet relationship for naini to retrospect and walk down the memory lane...
also help her understand their relationship...increase her need for love and for her companion...
loved the maan and geet moments...
the update truly celebrated love and bonding...

the next was even better...
her instincts noting only her love in the crowd..
she telling herself that she has finally managed to appreciate somebody else before reality dawns on her and she chides herself that how can she even think that she can be away from rishabh...
what play of emotions ...awesome...
then inside the lounge...loved naini rishabh and snow ...
and then the dhamaka...
loved ut...finally the last string is pulled and i feel rishabh will now take charge...or will this might trigger naini to finally speak up...
eagerly waiting for a heart to heart convo from both...
plz continue soon
Edited by libra25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
A lovely update thank you so much x x
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Maaneet...I really love how Maan handled Geet and the sense of shame she was subjecting herself to. She will come out stronger from it, Maan has no doubt about it ...and so do we.

@Naini-Rishabh...loved the four parts so far. The small progresses they are making...the one-step-forward-one-step-back routine...the past and present contrasts albeit the similarities. Wonderful!!

And...loved both the songs...they are part of my current "dance-away" playlist.
Edited by jazzerette - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry dear for not coming up here for past few weeks..I had been really caught up with some work.I had joined up for a new job,so I was pretty busy trying to cope up with the new office.I hope you understand.

well,coming to the updates,it was all so beautiful.Actually,I was a bit surprised to see Dev entering the scenes.But then I loved it when Rishab ended up punching him.hehe.

Last parts had put more light on to the inner feelings of R-N.I hope nothing would stop them from nowon.

Okay dear,I have ended up giving my first longest comment on this ff.Please forgive me for not showing up earlier.Insha Allah,next time onwards I'll be regular here.

with love
Sam

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow so many update back to back
I didn't even get time to blink once between ur updates
I loved it to the core
Especially how geet and maan's present made Naini reminiscence her past with rishabh
The way rishabh is trying to get back Naini in his life
Being there for her and yet giving her space
I hope things go well for them now
Especially when Naini has accepted the only way she was surviving till now was on the knowledge that he was there somewhere near to her
Do continue soon
Ps I love ur ff though it's not the first time I am stating it
But what surprises me is that I have never ever been so much interested in any other characters of any ff it was only maan and geet that held my attention but rishabh and Naini is the only exception where I wait for there story too...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow reading so many updates seems to be a dream ❓ . that too about naini and rishab.
anyways i liked everything you wrote👍🏼, poor naini. why is she bottling up her feelings like this?
Its too much pain to even imagine😭. 😭.😭.😭.😭
Rishab is truly short tempered😡, god his response scared me😲!!!!!!!!!!!
please update more
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks a lot for another one.
Naini is trying her level best to run away from Rishabh's thoughts and piercing gaze.
Guess the club's deafening sound did the trick,
Rishabh subtly trying to impress her was so sweet.
He was also so desperately trying to draw her to him.
Little did he know that she was super ready and desperate more than him.
Naini nicely escaped with her animal shelter friends.
Guess that was not too good an idea after all.
Rishabh was so jealous and possessive.
He thought she did it on purpose 😲.
No wonder he was so furious and dragged her out giving one solid punch to her friend.
Wonder what Naini has to say and how she is going to make up.
Waiting for the next one.
Hope i commented before you woke up 😃
Edited by Ramhari - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Wow what a fantastic treat for me!! I was away for the weekend .Came back now. Took a peep at IF and voila!!so many updates from my favourite writer!!yaay!!!What more can one ask for..

Anyways dear,read all the updates in one go!! Fabulous work!! One more push..that's all what Naini needs !! Loved the way Maan took care of his wife...I'm happy that their story got the required closure...Very very interested in Naini and abhi now..
Love the way you portray their emotions dear..You are truly very special.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 3- I loved the update! Everything around her was reminding N of R. I loved the way you described N's emotions. Maan and Geet are so cute. lol I want to know what happened in Geet's old room! And whenever N and R are going to get
together. It's going to be craziness.

:)

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