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Posted: 14 years ago
wow you're on a roll today.
awesome updates.
loved them absolutely.
if possible please do pm me.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 84: Seeing and Believing Update 1: What exactly are we seeing and believing…hopefully only good things...please good things only!!!!!!!

First, I thought it was a RisNi scene, but then read the words Mishti and was like, "nope! That's totally Maneet!" BTW: I'm missing the inner monlouges way too much…pretty please for some Maneet ones…preferable Maan ones! Those are my personal favs!!!

Oh boy…she's so playing when with the whole food poisoning thing…and Maan the detective...totally pointing out how Dadima and the others don't have it!! Chalo chalo…deducing time geet puttar! He flew 3000 miles…only khushkhabri only pleases…only of this nasty bowel talks! LOL!!!

Maan as the marshmallow…perfect description…to the T!

And then Maan the jaan….nicknames galore…I wish she calls him dusht danav…LONG time ago, but still the original lines!!! And the affect her love names have on him—"cage her in his arms"….so cute!!! Love that line!!!

Holy shipples!!!!! My god…dadiman walks in on them….my eyes! My eyes!!! The pain in my eyes…and my brain! I didn't need to imagine that plus Maan kissing her across her mid-riff…def not cool at all!!! Ewww! I need a breather….so awkward…to the MAX!!!

The title was quite appropriate now that I think about it…okay I need to calm down before I read the next part!😆😆😆

This seeing was definitely not to be believed.—well they are married, but still not how dadima show catch them!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok people, thank you so much for the support...I mean you guys really come back to read even if I disappear for long periods of time.

With no intentions to crib and only to keep you all informed, work is crazy and apart from this, I have started a few writing workshops.
The reading and writing assignments are innumerable and taking a lot of my time away from writing. If this was not cutting it, the block had kept me from writing the assignments too, let alone anything for the FFs here.
So determined to shoo my block-demons away, I sat a worked on just writing yesterday. And what do you know, it actually worked. So today, I'm starting the short story I will have to write up for my class. I will post it once NY times is over.
I know its like crying wolf, when I talk about ending NY times, but I'm thinking of a writing marathon this long weekend and see if I can take myself closer to the denouement.

Couldn't help a few mentions here:

Night13: Aarya, you can't feel bad for Daadima. She is very content that, what her heart desires is brewing in two bedrooms, opposed to just one. I was dreading to hear back about Maan and his signature arrogant text messages of wooing his wife, without being sorry and you ended up calling them cute?😲 You are a shocker girl.

Pushpi: Long overdue girl, I will catch you on gchat, later today. But thanks for stopping by.

Pixie - Matt Farell 😳 Meee tooo. But imagine what happens to one's image when you are eons away from getting published and write silly, cloying and unbearably mushy scenes. Wish there was some way to redeem my image. I guess Chandini will help with that (Hopefully!)
<edit> I think your glasses are the best part about your pictur. They are cute girl </edit>

Sweet Coco: Thanks for the long post. Glad you are back and like Rishabh too...Trust me there are a few here who like him more than Maan.

Hasini
Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet coco

Part 84: Seeing and Believing Update 1: What exactly are we seeing and believing'hopefully only good things...please good things only!!!!!!!

First, I thought it was a RisNi scene, but then read the words Mishti and was like, "nope! That's totally Maneet!" BTW: I'm missing the inner monlouges way too much'pretty please for some Maneet ones'preferable Maan ones! Those are my personal favs!!!

Oh boy'she's so playing when with the whole food poisoning thing'and Maan the detective...totally pointing out how Dadima and the others don't have it!! Chalo chalo'deducing time geet puttar! He flew 3000 miles'only khushkhabri only pleases'only of this nasty bowel talks! LOL!!!

Maan as the marshmallow'perfect description'to the T!

And then Maan the jaan'.nicknames galore'I wish she calls him dusht danav'LONG time ago, but still the original lines!!! And the affect her love names have on him'"cage her in his arms"'.so cute!!! Love that line!!!

Holy shipples!!!!! My god'dadiman walks in on them'.my eyes! My eyes!!! The pain in my eyes'and my brain! I didn't need to imagine that plus Maan kissing her across her mid-riff'def not cool at all!!! Ewww! I need a breather'.so awkward'to the MAX!!!

The title was quite appropriate now that I think about it'okay I need to calm down before I read the next part!😆😆😆

This seeing was definitely not to be believed.'well they are married, but still not how dadima show catch them!!!



Just wait and see why that crawling awkward scene was there...Daadima's racking headache starts.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Trying to understand where all this is heading too ?? 😕 Coz its sounding tooo much too me... You're outta writer's block at least thats a good news 😊 Take Care.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

Trying to understand where all this is heading too ?? 😕 Coz its sounding tooo much too me... You're outta writer's block at least thats a good news 😊 Take Care.



Welcome back from your exams. Your inbox was full, the last I tried to respond to your PM.

I don't get you Shabnoor. Which part is confusing? And which couple is sounding too much?
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Posted: 14 years ago
H: Should I hang around for an update?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement



Welcome back from your exams. Your inbox was full, the last I tried to respond to your PM.

I don't get you Shabnoor. Which part is confusing? And which couple is sounding too much?


Thank you sooo much !!!
Don't temme u forgot my name ??? 😲

I mean I don't get Rishab and Naini...what is he trying to do exactly..he din wanna reveal himself and ended up being so damn closed to her...Maan and Geet...gosh why don't they stop fighting..ok ok...i know what all is happening its just i wish it were some other way...sometimes msgs n calls r completely blocked...n sometimes thy over flow...I guess more than the characters im a confused mess...in fact the recent poem i wrote i myself din know what i was trying to convey...had to ask a frnd so jumbled tumbled

And yeah my inbox was full...now its thodu khali khali...u can send me a pm now or gmail is always welcome :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
All prts r too gud,both couple r trying to solve their misundrstng,beautifully written.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

H: Should I hang around for an update?



No..Pixie...Sorry Gurl. Will start writing only after 2-3 days. Thanks for checking.
Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago

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