FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13

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Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#311

Part 86 -- part 1 --

loved the portrayal of rishab's n naini's feelings...👏

both r lost but still reliving their moments...its like they want to go back but something is restricting them to do so...

geet is also reliving their moment of passion...to make sure he is with her...their day has also been tiring...but near ur loved one...makes it all better...

The instinctive kisses were what she often called her panacea.😳😳

Part 86 -- part 2 --

omg...naini was lying there unconscious...😲...

good that cricket came on time ...n brought them here...

rishabh froze..seeing ehr lying there...well what can u do...when u c ur life lying lifeless...u dont know what to do...ur thought leave u..u realize whether u r just having a bad dream or is this reality...

good that maan was in his senses...n brought her inside ...

As if she recognized the hold of her own blood, that she had been devoid of for the last nine years, she cuddled in the assuring arms of her brother. Without his knowledge, like it was only natural to follow the next second, his eyes moistened at her unconscious gesture, while she scooted closer and felt the last reigns of consciousness leave her, right after she felt safe in the net of sibling love.👏👏

maan realized that these two idiots still love each other😆...good...now he will b able to help them...

loved the way maan explained to him..the words...the lines...were just amazing...👏👏

Part 87 --

maan left her in the care of rishabh...😳😳...but the main point is that he actually talked to her...😃

rishabh wants her back...he wants to talk to her...but he is having trouble letting words out of his mouth...mayb dreading to know what she might say...n it would shatter him...

even naini wants to give in...but she is stopping herself...

i am still not able to grasp what went wrong between them???

what is naini upto?? the message hidden in plain sight?? i think only rishabh would understand that...

Part 88 --

maaneet r back in this one...😃...

a drive to napa valley...how romantic...😳😳

so the siblings r talking again...n maan blames all the changes on her...😆😆

baby beech me kahan se aa gaya...😳...maan bhi naa...thinking what not...😆

love it...when he calles her nautanki...😳😳

wow...crushing the grapes..i so want to do that...seems like geet was enjoying every bit of it...n maan by seeing her like that...

It was the last place on earth he would have ever thought, to make love to her. Although when she had broken so many core rules in his life before, this was nothing worthy of a mention...☺️,...😳...👏...😳

continue soon...

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libra25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#312

awesome part...
loved the romantic italian setting...and love in winery...
sounds so intoxicating...
while reading it i am feeling high and trying to visualize the height of ecstasy of such an experience
superb...

continue soon

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zaara2212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#313

loved this 😛

beautifully written, well i remember my days in california, when i went out first with my husband...great one 😊

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-Aarya-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#314

R! for Winery Love!

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I guess wine isn't just about drinking the stuff.😉

I have fallen in love with the winery scene, to me a real lover is more insidious as the effects of wine slowly desiring the passionate love! 😳 It's the journeys and memories of love which can never be measured up, thus they will remember this moment for eternity!

Thank you writing my fav! part, it was very sensual and passionate, filling my every desire just as I had imagined it. I leave the rest to my imagination as you have shed new light into my night!

ps.. I think I am starting to like your Maan.:)

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 14 years ago

#315

Yay, a full Maaneet update. Loved it.

My God, they are such a passionate couple. It was so well written that I could picture the entire scene as if it was playing in front of my eyes. Brilliant Hasini. 👏

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scorpiodreams

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Posted: 14 years ago

#316

awesome update and hats off to your imagination and writing skills.

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topsyturvy23

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Posted: 14 years ago

#317

hey just read ur latest update ...it was fabulous as usual...the you tube link in italian was a great one...

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Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#318

Wonderful update!

One day at a time, she was crushing the wrath of sour grapes...that had formed a part of him. At least, marriage was making fine wine out of him.

Loved this line especially.

They were enjoying themselves to the fullest without any underlying worries plaguing them. The entire description of the winery and all was great! There was again a mention of a baby, seems you are trying to hint at something. 😉

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#319

Thank you for another amazing part.
When I read the title itself i guessed the visual this time as i had seen the movie.
I could imagine the whole scene with Maaneet.
Only you could describe the whole scene so beautifully that too in Napa.
Your writing always makes me see the places i have most often visited in new light.
I am sure next time i go to Napa i will be blushing like a fool.😆
Geet brought a lot of transformation in Maan i should say.
His talk with rish and naini romancing anywhere and everywhere are surely Geet's effects.
Their love in the winery among barrels was superb. 😳
Maan wanting to cherish the little time they have to the fullest was great.
The last few lines of making Wine out of Maan were awesome 👏.
I so want another update soon but i am scared as it will be drawing closer to the end.
So continue at your own pace.

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arabianpaki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#320

I had so many updates to catch up with...all were amazing.. but the best was Chapter 86: Four States- update 2 & Chapter 88: Crushed Grapes.
Glad Maan accepted Rishab! Maan playing cupid... I definitely didn't see that coming!👏 Maan has definitely changed ... positively though!
chapter 87...Rishab and Naina.. I know it must be hard for her to forgive and forget.I wish they would make up... but I like the letter game better...very interesting! Now I wonna see where this leads them too!
and chapter 88 😍..lol

Thanks for the updates Hasini :D

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