FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 - Page 19

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

I'm sorry I feel awful. Been missing out a lot havent I?


God! No that was not what I intended at all...No need to feel awful.
No worries now that you are back. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Poor Geet got disappoint wif the flower's real sender.
She was expecting it from Maan but it turn out to be RIshabh.
I think Maan is a man wif few words. His action speaks louder den his words.
But I see he had changed a lot from before marriage life.
Geet is really notty. She dress up so seductively to tease him n ask for a walk wif him.
I really wondering if this is d same from the beginning. She seems to be totally different.
She seems to be aware of her ability to pull her man towards her.
Wat had she planned for her Man. Is she planning to pay BlindFold. If yes.. Tat really sounds interesting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Really really curious to see what game Geet has planned!😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement


Oh! you liked the video too? I did. And I was considering to have her play a part in one of my FF not sure, but then I'm hung for now as I checked out her voice and its such a turn off. If your muse is not impressed, not a word is coming out on the paper/laptop, trust me.
Maan was under her spell and more in awe of the changes in her. Its blind fold but not the traditional kind. She has an hidden agenda and its all about driving the message home.
Thanks Ramhari, I have been loving your analysis and all your long comments. Though I'm unable to respond back to your feedback, please understand each one of your comments are cherished.

Hasini



Thank you so much for taking time to reply Haasini.
You made me feel so special.Thank you 😳
I read once in one of your updates "I dont want to be the only one with long posts on this thread"
That was what inspired me to make long comments
I least expected you to respond back as I know you have your hands full.
You write so beautifully you deserve the longest comments possible which sadly I cannot write.
Long or short I will keep commenting as long as you keep posting.
BTW I loved the way you described catalina or sausalito.
Those are going to be our next vacation destinations for sure.
Thank you once again for the wonderful FF

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 71: Mayday: Okay I'm listening to Character Dheela while reading this…please don't judge!!! LOL!!! I hope it's not a sad chapter….I'll take sappy, but please no SAD!!!!

Maan's description of her anger is ravishing….no seriously…the silent treatment…what are the in the 4th grade…still kind of cute the way he describes it and his mental Tai-Chi….HA!

CHOR!!! Ha that was a good one! Maan's reaction was hilarious…oh Geet…leave it to her to take it to the next level!! Oh and Maan and his "sadistic pleasure"…so hilarious! I guess all forgiven! She broke first, but poor soul! The sister is HERE!!! Yippee! Drama to start!

Naini sounds like she has matured and ah man…the awkwardness! There was no amount of preparation that can take away the disappointment when your own brother disregards your presence-Beautifully written….nice attention to her pain and agony!

So glad we get Dadi's monologue….she sounds just as confident and stubborn as her grandchildren!

I loved Naini and geet's ist interaction…good thing naini isn't a class one bi*ch….so glad she's sweet!!! But Maan…UGH! He can be so chweet at times, but sometimes he can be just as arrogant!

Geet was following Maan bhaiya like a puppy while he roamed with the laptop. –awww! What a cute visual…so totally loved it!

Hmmm there really was something about relationships that I was missing. I smiled as I watched bhaiya pull Geet close to feed a mouthful and she had turned away. He had forcefully opened her mouth and stuffed the roti and subzi.-What a cute maneet scene…so much better than what the CVs are doing nowadays….seriously…they should hireyou!

HA! Mayday for sure…but ending with such a bang!!

So sorry, I've been away…but 8 days till MCAT and I truly needed a break today! So glad I read this…made my heart flutter! And I read this while listening to Adele's Rolling In the Deep….heard it yet?! It's really good!!! And so totally sorry it's not that long...I miss I could say more...but Maan just made me mad...I hope it gets better and can't wait to find out what she said and what's gonna happen to Naini!

Amazing job like always…I miss you so much and the thread too!! Will be back in full force post-the 26th….can't wait!!!!

Edited by sweet coco - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I just have one question...you might finish NY Times before May 26th...can we just chill out here afterwards too...b/c I'm no where close to catching up and I still gonna be apart of the after-party. So will you keep responding and keep the thread goin'?!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement



Hey...you have been missing from the thread for quite a bit. Hmmm Ok, now that you are back, welcome again.
I made sure R & N didn't get to watch the whole sensual drama unfold 😉 atleast in my mind. They will have their time to realize and get back.
Yes there is blind fold part 3. Well the game has its purpose and I believe the seducing part comes later.
Sure will post soon...only I don't know when 😆
Thanks for your comments Gurl. Hang around often.
Hasini



Me? Missing? ..nahhh! Look harder, you'll find me 😉 I always read you updates, wouldn't miss it!! ..but I know I'm slacking on the comments. Its just that, I usually read the new chapter, before I head out in the morning, which is around 7am, and I always tell my self, I'll comment later... but then I forget! I'll definitely start making a better effort at commenting!😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet coco

I just have one question...you might finish NY Times before May 26th...can we just chill out here afterwards too...b/c I'm no where close to catching up and I still gonna be apart of the after-party. So will you keep responding and keep the thread goin'?!


I dont see NY Times finishing up by May 26th gurl...I think its going to take a long time by the time I get to the denouement of this story. Work is whopping my rear 😊. And I'm actually planning to stay away from everything IF for a while, for the next week to be precise.

I just logged back in , and see you have left another comment. I will get to it shortly.

Hasini

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Sweet coco,
All the very best for your exam. Then you really shouldn't be here, writing anything at all. All is good, the length doesn't matter (although they put a wide grin on my face) either, as long as you show up regularly.
Thanks so much for that long comment, even when given your hectic schedule. I appreciate it.
Maan is arrogant and so is Naini...you will get to see that in the later parts. But yes Maan and Geet will make sure they get her to the destination, getting a glimpse of their own strengths and weaknesses.
Hire me! Oh! Lord...i really don't want anything to do with Geet anymore. Any association for now, cannot be a matter for pride. The track is hopeless.
Either ways, keep it coming and I will catch you soon.
Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arabianpaki



Me? Missing? ..nahhh! Look harder, you'll find me 😉 I always read you updates, wouldn't miss it!! ..but I know I'm slacking on the comments. Its just that, I usually read the new chapter, before I head out in the morning, which is around 7am, and I always tell my self, I'll comment later... but then I forget! I'll definitely start making a better effort at commenting!😃


Sure...I love to hear all your thoughts and the more the merrier ain't it? That's all. So hang around with patience and let me know on what you think.

Thanks for all your wonderful comments so far.
Hasini
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Really really curious to see what game Geet has planned!😉😆


Thanks Gurl for leaving behind a comment. Wish i can get you people out of your curiosity soon, alas work beckons. Just hang in there.

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