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Posted: 14 years ago
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Love story with a strange twist.Part 16{2nd version}

Dev enquires about Muskaan and comes back with disappointed.
Geet runs to him:Dev...did you get to know about Muskaan?
His face is dull.
D:No Geet.
She becomes upset.
D:Maybe we are not destined to live together.I only pushed her out of my life.So God won't return her to me that easily.
Maan:Don't be a pessimist bro.I promise you..i will find out Muskaan for you.

Dev is surprised.
D:Really Maan?
M:Don't you trust your brother?
Dev smiles:I trust you more than myself.I'm sure that you will do that for me.
Maan smiles:Yes..i promise..i will bring Muskaan to you.

D:Thank you so much bro.

He hugs Maan.Maan smiles.

D:Ok Maan...i'm going fresh up.
M:Ok.
Dev goes.
Geet can't believe Maan's promise to Dev:Maan!Why did you promise him that you will find Muskaan?Last 6 years we tried our best.But we did'nt get any news about her.Dev tried a lot to find her.Still he could'nt find her.Then how will you find her?Even Dev could'nt succeed in finding her.
Geet is upset.
M:Geet...trust me.I will find her.Dev's come back itself is a good sign.So i'm sure that God will show us a way to find Muskaan.

G:Now Dev has hopes and is very happy also.I'm scared whether DEv will become upset again.
"No doubt!Dev will become upset again.So don't give him any Hope".
They hear a female voice and they turn back.
A stylish fair girl is standing there.
M:Sasha!How come you are here?
S:I came here to give you some files.
She hands over the files to Maan.
M:Thanks.But why did you say that Dev will become upset?
S:Because i'm sure that Muskaan can't be traced.Last 5 years you people tried to find her.But there was no news about her.So how can you find about her whereabouts now?
M:I'm sure that i will be able to trace her and reunite bro and Muskaan.
Sasha is irritated.
Maan looks at Geet.
M:By the way Geet..this is Sasha.My new PA.
Geet stares at Sasha.
G:I know her very well.
M:How?
G:That i know.
M:I'm confused.
Maan's mobile rings.
M:It's from the office.
He goes to another room and attends the call.
S:How do you know me Geet?
G:Dev has told me about you before our marriage..tht you used to be after him in the college.
Sasha is shocked.
S:But how do you know that i'm the same Sasha?
G:If you were not Sasha,you would not have said that Dev will have to be upset and Muskaan can't be found.You are irritated with Dev as he rejected you.You want Dev to be alone without Muskaan.So that you can join him.That's why you joined Khurana indistries.Right?But your dream will not work out Sasha.You can't conquuer Dev Singh Khurana's heart.Because Maan Singh Khurana will help him to get his love back.

Sasha stares at Geet.

S:Let us Geet.
G:Yes.
Sasha goes away.

Geet tells this to Dev and Maan.
They are shocked.
D:What?Sasha is Maan's PA?
M:I never ever thought that she was the same Sasha who was after bro in the college.I will put her out of the office.So arrogant she is.
G:No need.She is talented and our office needs such talented people.Personal matters and professional matters should not be put together.

Dev goes to the office and goes near Sasha.She is shocked.They are facing each other after many years.
S:Dev!
D:I know what your intention is.But only Muskaan will be there in my life.
S:Nonsense!First you loved Geet.But Muskaan replaced Geet in your life.So you can easily replace Muskaan with me.
D:Stop it Sasha.I hate to see your face.
He goes away with irritation.Sasha is irritated.

Nainital...
A 5 year old boy is about to play football.Muskaan wishes him "Best of luck" with her thumbs.
He is playing football with other kids.Muskaan is enjoying watching him play.
That boy wins the game.Muskaan jumps with joy and claps her hands.

The boy receives the prize.Muskaan watches it emotionally with a cute smile.
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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love the 2nd version of u ff!!! great job indeed 👏
poor dev he needs to find muskaan as soon as possible. ugh sasha is sasha yet again 😡... awww muskaan n dev have a child 😳 cant wait for the next update!!
Edited by Maaneet_09 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
love the 2nd version
so the boy is son of devkaan
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Posted: 14 years ago
dev have son awww please update soon sasha ki toh
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part...

hope they find her soon...

dev n muskaan have a son..thats gr8...

continue soon...

thnx for the PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful part.
loved it.
so dev have s son and muskan and their son is in nainital
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!!! nice update and I like this version better. Though in this Dev and Muskaan look like lead pair but truly speaking I don't mind.
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Superb Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg i knew muskaan would b preg
my guesses r coming right
woahhh

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