Love story with a strange twist:Maaneet FF Climax - Page 60

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

268.8k

Users

103

Likes

4.1k

Frequent Posters

Audiwalia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Interesting. . . . But wat next.
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
part 13 b
nice part...
wow this time Geet has fallen for Maan and they are happily married...
ohho the family and Dev have come to know about Muskaan...
cont soon...
khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 14 years ago
hi...thanks 4 pm, lovely update
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

Love story with a strange twist:Part 14 {2nd version}

Geet:Dev!Please don't slap Muskaan.
Anand also slaps Muskaan.
Geet is shocked.
G:Dad!You also..?You are slapping her for the first time.
A:Yes.She deserves this.She deserves more than a slap.
Muskaan busts into tears.
Mus:Sorry.
D:Sorry?After spoiling my life and fooling others are you not ashamed to apologize?You fooled so many people.
He looks at Geet and weeps.Geet feels upset seeing his tears.
D:Geet…while supporting your sister to gain her love,you did'nt even think about me?Atleast once you could have thought about me..you did'nt think what my condition will be after knowing the truth.
Geet's eyes get filled up with tears.

G:I'm sorry Dev.I did a sin by fooling you.But please think from my position.
He wipes his tears.
D:You don't have to say sorry to me Geet.Because I know that to you did this to save your sister.
He looks at Muskaan.
D:Geet made a big sacrifice to save your life.But you selfish girl!While making your life happy you did'nt think about your sister's life.
Muskaan weeps:I did this to gain you Dev.I was not able to think about a life without you.
D:You said you love me..that's why you did this.But the truth is that you cheated me.If your love for me was true,you would not have cheated me like this.
Muskaan is not able to answer.
D:You can't love anyone sincerely.
Mus:What ever you say..the truth is that I love you.
D:Shut up and get lost.You don't have any place in my heart or in my house.
Muskaan and others are shocked.
Mus:Dev!I can't stay away from you.I love you that much.
D:This is not love.You are just crazy. I hate you.I hate you…
Muskaan's ears pain.
D:Get out of this house.
Muskaan is numb.
D:Get out.
Anand:Yes Muskaan.You should leave this house.One more thing.Don't come back to my house.
Geet and Muskaan are shocked.
Mus:Dad?
A:You hurt my daughter to make your life happy.I can't give you accommodation.
G:Dad..then where will she go?
Muskaan suppresses her pain.
Mus:Don't worry.I will stay somewhere.I will not commit suicide.
Muskaan goes to her room to take the luggages.
G:Dev..please don't desert Muskaan.
D:I'm sorry Geet.I can't consider her as my wife.So why should she stay here.
G:Dad..atleast you…
A:I'm not a saint like you.You are able to forgive Muskaan.But I can't.
G:Maan…please…
Cupping her face Maan says:Geet!Please try to understand.The people who do mistakes get punished.That's God's decision.We can't change it.

Muskaan leaves the house.
Geet cries:Muskaan..please don't go..
Muskaan leaves the house with pain.
Karthi cries:Oh God!Both the sisters spoiled my son's life.
Dev is upset.
M:Bro!Don't get upset.
D:We used to share everything with each other.When did a gap come between us?Why did you hide the biggest secret of our lives from me? Atleast you could have told me the truth.You also supported others for fooling me.
Maan becomes upset:I'm sorry bro.I knew that you will be shattered after knowing the truth.I did'nt want to see you upset.That's why..
D:But still…
Dev goes out of the room.
Maan and Geet look at Dev going with pain.
Dev thinks about meeting Geet,falling in love with her,getting married to Muskaan and his lovely moments with Muskaan.He gets irritated.He takes a glass and throws it.The glass breaks into peaces.Dev cries.
tanvi04 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
the update is awsome but nw reading this i like the first version of it
swetha10 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
nice update... felt bad for muskaan... where did she go?? continue soon
butterfly.tanu thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update...
loved it...
Muskaan leaves the house with pain...
feel bad 4 muskaan...
i hope nothing goes wrong between maaneet...
Waiting for the next update ...
monikaseth thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
aww i am feeling bad for dev and muskaan hope every thing gets better and no harm for geet and maan
KrishnaRukmini thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part.
loved it.
feel sad for dev.
but maaneet r helpless that time
all r done by muskan.
continue soon.
jasraj123 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.

love the way dev's feeling portray.

thanks for pm and pls update soon

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary

5 months ago

Punishment sequel to destiny of love ( Climax))

Hey there, readers , Just a quick note: I wanted to let you know that since the old module is now locked, I've created a new one for you. You...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

4 months ago

Friendship story

I am planning to write a friendship story. I will choose the love interest of Paras Kalnawat and Karan Kundra according to the choice of the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya and Raina ff - Love me like you do

Ritik Mehra : Business Tycoon and Elder brother of Raghav Shivanya Kapoor : Doctor and Elder Sister of Naina and love interest of Ritik

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya,Ishveer,Swasan and Shivika ff - Ishq wala love

Here are Characters of the Story Ritik : elder brother of Shivaay , Ranveer , Sanskar and love interest of Shivanya Shivanya : elder sister of

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya,Ishveer,Raina,Ragsan and Vikresha ff - My love is only for u

Let's me introduced the Characters Ritik Raheja (Arjun Bijlani) : A very rich business tycoon and elder brother of Ranveer and Ragini Ranveer

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".