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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
@ Afsha - Thanks dear, will do 😊
Edited by drdee142 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: ahujatanvi

loved it👍🏼
u did a fantastic job👏
of course continue pls😃
thanks for the PM😊

Glad you like it Tanvi 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2 - Geet Seduces Maan

Geet walks into the bedroom her face still flushed thinking of how she was planning to surprise Maan in her new negligee; she looks up sees Maan pacing the floor and calls out to Maan.

He looks up at her impatience and irritation written all over his face "Geet, itni der kyu kar kardi, pata hain main kab se tumhara raah dekh raha hoon, tumhe toh meri kuch fikar hain hi nahi".

Geet secretly happy in her mind seeing Maan getting impatient for her but as she had something else planned she pretends to get angry with Maan.

She looks at him angrily and says "Maan aap bhi na, maine itna mushkil se jaldi se apna kaam khatam kiya aur main hi jaanti hoon ke maine Daadima aur Annie se kaise peecha chudakar aayi hoon aur aap hain ke mujh par naraz ho rahe ho" saying that she picks up her clothes from her cupboard and walks off to the bathroom.

Maan trying to stop her "Suno Geet, mera yeh matlab nahin tha'." But she had already gone into the bathroom, before he could complete his sentence.

Maan sits down on the bed and chides himself, "lo ab kya kar diya maine, itne din ke baad hum akele hain aur mere ghusse ke wajah se sab baat bigad gayi" He sits and waits for Geet to come out.

Around 2o minutes later, Geet is still not out of the bathroom and Maan is now worried as to what's taking her so long.

He's just thinking of calling out to her when the bathroom door opens and Maan looks up stunned.

Geet steps out of the bathroom dressed in a Dusky Rose Neglige, her hair damp from the shower, her face flushed with excitement, a soft hesitant smile playing on her luscious lips, her gorgeous eyes sometimes glancing up at Maan to gauge his reactions and every other second looking down with shyness.

Maan is blown over by this vision of his Mishti, it's like all his dreams and fantasies have suddenly come true and is walking towards him.

He stands rooted as if in a trance hypnotized by her beauty all the while gazing upon her.

Geet walks up to Maan and shyly reaches up with her right hand and caresses his face and he then lets out his breath that he didn't realize he was holding so far and grabs Geet hand and kisses her palm.

She calls out his name "Maan", that was all he needed, he tugs her close to him and pushes back the stray strands of hair that were on her face and looks at her with those intense eyes and says in that husky voice filled with passion "Geet, tum sach mein mujhe paagal kar dogi, tum jaanti bhi ho ke tumhe aise mere paas meri bahon mein dekh kar mujhe kya ho raha hain"

Geet looks up to him shyly and says "Ha, wahi jo apke bahon mein aakar is waqt mujhe ho raha hain" Hearing this Maan loses all vestige of control he had and lifts Geet's face up and smoothers her lips with his, he kisses her with all his love and passion and the pent up feeling that he had buried in so far during their separation.

Geet too loses herself in the kiss, she slips her left hand around Maan's waist holding on tightly to him and while her left hand creeps up to Maan's nape where she buries her fingers in his hair.

Seeing her give herself up to him Maan just looks at her for her second then he picks her up in his arms and carries her to the bed. Geet suddenly feels shy and buries her face in his neck.

He gently lays her down on the bed and lies down next to her still holding on to her and whispers "Geet'.."

To be continued

Please let me know if you like it so I'm encouraged to continue, I really appreciate your comments

Edited by drdee142 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW!!!! DEE...that was so grt...loved it...naughty Dee!!!
Edited by khushi_4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushi_4ever

WOW!!!! DEE...that was so grtr...loved it...naughty Dee!!!


Thanks Khushi, what to do our Maaneet has made me naughty, I know it was a short update but the next one will be the big one 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
When to be continued?????😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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surely, u should continue. awesome udate.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dee this is not right kiyu rukh gaya ..I am angry...CVS se pahele tum SR to dekha deta...wesome updaet dear loved it and please continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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deee...loooks like the JMM news has snapped up everybody n made them think about only one thing...😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

u kno the negligee made me think about what?????????/ GUESS>>...
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
*runs off n hides b4 dee manages to peeto me*
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
dee ur OS has made me more restless...😉😉😉😉
u wont believe how long i have been grumbling for JMM...my FF writer frnds are telling me...itni shiddat se aur kuch maangti to wo bhi mil jaata...😆😆😆😆
loved it dee...it was😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
@ khwaishfan - Thanks dear

@maanluvsgeet - will post update tomorrow, still working on it


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