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Posted: 14 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: sumona_mona28

Dee this is not right kiyu rukh gaya ..I am angry...CVS se pahele tum SR to dekha deta...wesome updaet dear loved it and please continue soon...


Mona - Sorry sweetheart, main kal update post karongi, aaj hi complete kardongi, thoda baaki hain


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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

deee...loooks like the JMM news has snapped up everybody n made them think about only one thing...😍

u kno the negligee made me think about what?????????/ GUESS>>...
🤣
*runs off n hides b4 dee manages to peeto me*
🤣
dee ur OS has made me more restless...😉
u wont believe how long i have been grumbling for JMM...my FF writer frnds are telling me...itni shiddat se aur kuch maangti to wo bhi mil jaata...😆
loved it dee...it was😍


Aash ki bachchi tu peetegi mujhse, I know what the negligee reminds you of 😡

BTW our dreams are really coming true more so yours, one is JMM and the other is he's wearing a SBV in the jungle

Your training is paying off, we'll have to change the seating arrangements though, this is no longer in the room but jungle. I've reserved the first row, right in front of them 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: drdee142


Aash ki bachchi tu peetegi mujhse, I know what the negligee reminds you of 😡

BTW our dreams are really coming true more so yours, one is JMM and the other is he's wearing a SBV in the jungle

Your training is paying off, we'll have to change the seating arrangements though, this is no longer in the room but jungle. I've reserved the first row, right in front of them 😆

kyaa yaar dee...come to the 22nd century!!
me have booked a HELICOPTER!!!😆😆😆😆
all angles visibility😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
and SBV maan...😳😳😳😳
mai peetongi...moi??? me innocent little cutie pie?? how can anyone be soo heratless😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
superb👏

dusky rose colour😳 beautiful choice😉

pls continue soon ... not fair u left in between🤔


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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
awesome dee..waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
Awesome update
Plz continue
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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DEE..👍🏼
plzzz continue dear if u don't wanna get killed by me...😆
stopped at such a crucial moment.😉..plzzz update soon dear.😍
Edited by bobby13rocks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3 - Maaneet Milan


Maan lying on the bed next to Geet caresses her waist, then slowly leans over Geet slipping his hand to her back so he can pull her closer to himself, whispers "Geet".

Geet's heart is fluttering like a trapped butterfly, she shyly looks up into Maan eyes and is lost in the passion she sees there, she pushes herself closer to Maan and slips both her arms around him embracing him with all her love.

Maan slightly nudges her so he can hold her chin and groans and crushes her lips with his kissing her with all his passion and pent up desire.

Geet too kisses him back fervently, Maan is intoxicated by her soft lips and her unrestrained response and cannot seem to stop himself.

He forces himself to stop and looks at Geet, both of them are breathing heavily and then Maans tugs off his black vest impatiently and then slips off Geet robe.

He then slides the strap of her negligee and kisses her shoulders slowly trailing kisses from her shoulder to her throat and then the neck.

Geet shuts her eyes and is lost in these new sensations that she's feeling. She's flooded with all these feelings and emotions and seems to be drowning in them. She slowly opens her eyes.

She then places her hand on Maan's bare chest and caresses it with her finger tips, Maan sucks in his breath and holds Geet's hand pulls it to his lips and nibbles on the tips of her fingers. Geet whispers, her voice all hoarse with passion "Maan please''".

Maan looks her Geet smirking now with that mischievous look in his eyes and replies "Please kya Geet".

Geet all shy now buries her face in Maan's chest. Maan then tells her "Geet ab tum iss tarah sharmaogi to kaise chalenga, aaj, bas main, tum aur hamari pyar ka jashan hoga".

Saying that he slips off her negligee and crushes Geet to himself & then they lose themselves in their love.

Several minutes later, Geet with her hair tousled and face flushed is lying next to Maan with her face on his bare chest and Maan has one hand behind his head and the other holding Geet, a big smile on his face.

He kisses her and whispers "Goodnight Mrs. Khurana", Geet blushes and whispers back "Goodnight". They both then fall asleep with their arms around each other content and happy.

Next morning Maan feels droplets of water on his face and he wakes up with a jerk and looks up to see Geet in a pale pink Churidar Kurta, just out from her shower, with her damp hair framing her beautiful face.

She has on pretty pearl Jhumkas and loads of pink and silver glass bangles on her hands which daintily jingle as she moves her hand closer to Maan to wake him up.

Maan gazes at her mesmerized and holds her hand and tugs her close to him.

Geet not expecting his, this move, loses her balance and falls on top of Maan, he then smiles brushes her hair off her face and whispers, "Good Morning Mishti".

Geet smiles but feigns anger saying "Maan yeh aap kya kar rahe ho, neeche sab aapke breakfast ke liye raah dekh rahe hain, Daadima pooch rahi thi ke aaj aapko kya hua aap itni der tak so kyun rahe ho"

Maan smirks and replies "Toh tumne kya jawab diya Mishti, tumne Daadima se kaha nahi ke der raat tak main tumhari wajah se so nahi paya tha"

Geet blushes and playfully hits Maan on his chest and says "Maan aap bhi na" and before he could react she pushes herself off the bed and laughs and says, "Maan main neeche ja rahi hoon, aap jaldi se tayyar hoke neeche aajayi ye" and blows a flying kiss to him and runs off all the while looking back at Maan.

Maan splutters "Geet, Geet'" but she has already run off. He smiles and goes off to get ready.

Maan all dressed in jeans and a soft cream cashmere turtle neck pullover climbs down the stairs and walks to the dining table where Geet is sitting with Daadima and Annie.

He wishes everyone and takes his seat looking at Geet when Daadima asks him "Kya hua Maan aap itni der tak kabhi nahi soote aapki tabiyat toh teekh hain na"

Hearing this Geet blushes and Maan is all flustered, he stammers "Woh Daadima, main kal raat bahut thak gaya tha isiliye thodi der hogayi uthne mein", he's looking at Geet from the corner of his eyes and sees Geet blushing furiously. He looks down and smiles.

Geet then smile her mischievous smile and looks and Maan and with a very innocent look on her face says "Maan main bhi wohi soch rahi thi ke aap itni der tak so kyun rahe hain, kal aisa kya hua jo aap itne thak gaye"

Maan looks at her as if he could strangle her and wonders what to answer, looks at her and then at Daadima, who waiting for his reply and then says, "Kuch nahi Geet, who kal raat bhar tum neend mein badbada rahi thi aur bar bar mujhe pukar rahi thi isiliye main teekh se so nahi paya"

Geet not expecting this answer blushes furiously and looks angrily at Maan, Daadima then realizes that something is cooking between these two doesn't want to embarrass them more so she just changes the topic.

He then tells Daadima, "Daadima humare London operations ab bahut expand ho gaya hain aur hum bahut waqt se waha gaye nahin toh agle hafte main soch raha tha ke Geet ko leke main London 15-20 dino ke liye ho aaon, waha ke operations bhi hum dekh lenge aur Geet waha ke staff se bhi mil sakti hain"

Daadima is very happy and replies, "Yeh bahut achchi baat hain Maan, aap dono London ho aaon aur waha se aap dono apne honeymoon ke liye Europe ja sakte hain, ab toh thode dino mein aapke naye staff ke saath aapki office bhi settle ho jayengi aur aap bahar ja sakte hain aur waise bhi Adi toh hain hi"

Maan agrees and tells Daadima, that he'll start making the preparations as he has to work on their visas etc.

Maan then tells Geet to get ready, they'll leave for office in a few minutes. She looks up at him trying to gauge his mood to see if he's angry.

Then she tells Maan that he said he won't be going to office today to which he replies that yeah they will just stop in the office for a few minutes as he has to give Adi some instructions then they are going out shopping.

Geet is very excited hearing this and looks happily at Maan, but our munda too will not give up that easily, he has other plans in mind.

He gestures with his eyes, that come out then I'll deal with you, Geet too pouts and strides off to change, Maan seeing her pout smiles to himself anticipating their Nhok-Jhok which he has grown to love.

To be continued''..

I hope you liked this Maaneet Milan, will continue soon

Edited by drdee142 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i was about to comment for part 2 but saw part 3
both parts were beautifully written
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
really liked 'em 😳
do update soon and thanx for the PM
wid love
Noor
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago

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