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Posted: 14 years ago
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they live in so much different worls...how they will meet

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey very nice and interesting update...
maan from hoshiyarpur...
geet in sydney...
well i think this rachna might b playing some trick...
but how r they going to meet...
is this sunny trying to take advantage of geet?
hey pl add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice concept
Plz can u also ad me to ur pm list to this ff esle. Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3

Sydney, Australia

sunny: so geet...tell me...u will do it or not?

geet: sunny...first tell me what i have to do...then i will decide...

sunny: if u don't agree...then the loss is urs only...not mine...in case u forgot...today is the last day for fee payment...

geet: sunny...u r taking advantage of my situation...i asked for ur help because u were my friend...now i came to know that i did a big mistake by thinking like that...just go to hell...i don't need ur help...

Said these words geet started to leave...sunny stopped her

sunny: geet...geet...just wait...ok fine...i already transferred money into ur account...now happy

geet looked at sunny suspiciously...

sunny: geet...stop giving those looks...i knew u are stubborn...that's why...i chose this way to get ur help...

geet slapped sunny...

sunny: ouch!!!!!!!!!!

geet: is this the way to ask help...?

sunny: what to do geet...u will not agree if i ask normally...

geet again slapped sunny

sunny: ouch!!!!!!!! sorry...sorry...should i hold ur legs this time?

geet was still angry...

sunny: plz geet...u can only help me in this situation...thats why i did like that...iam sorry

geet: get lost u idiot...

sunny: geet...geet...plz...plz...yaar...

geet: ok fine...tell me what i have to do?

sunny: thank u...actually my friend is coming from india next week...u have to provide shelter...that's it

geet: friend? male/female

sunny (a bit scared).:hmmm

geet: sunny..iam asking u? male/female?

sunny: male..(with dull face)

geet:male...u mean a guy...no way...forget about help...by today evening u will get back ur money

sunny got disappointed...

sunny: plz geet...he is my girl friend's cousin...i tried but i couldn't get any flat for him...then ur flat came to my mind...moreover it is very near to his college... plz geet...if u will not agree...iam not going to leave ur feet...

geet: sunny...stop it...how can u think like that...u know about me...in my flat only 2 ppl can live...no space for third person...

sunny: but ambika is leaving for india tomorrow...so anyhow u have to find another room mate...if that is the case...my friend will be the best option

geet thought for a second...

geet; but still...me staying with a guy...impossible...

sunny: what if he pays double amount for rent? ur problems will be solved...u can complete ur studies...what do u say?

geet (monologue): double amount...is it right to charge double amount...geet stop thinking about right/wrong...right now ur priority is to complete ur education...

sunny was waiting curiously for geet answer...

geet: ok fine...but he has to agree for my conditions first...

sunny: thank u...thank u...thank u very much...i will talk to him...he will agree for all of ur conditions...ok then we will meet on sunday...

geet: by the way when is he coming?

sunny: next sunday...he will be here...bye

sunny left happily...geet was in dilemma that whether she did right thing/not ...

geet: oh...no..ambika is leaving...i have to help her in packing...

geet rushed to her flat to help ambika...


Leelavathi hospital, mumbai

avinash: what ? geet is with u?

rachana: don't get shocked avi...still many shocks are waiting for u...tomorrow morning me and my daughter geet will be coming to the office...so keep all the papers ready...

avinash lost temper with rachana's words

avinash: ur daughter? what rubbish?

rachana: cool avi...yes my daughter...my husband's daughter is mine only na...

avinash: husband? chi...u had an affair...that's all...don't dare to call that a husband-wife relation...

rachana laughed...irritating avinash

rachana: poor avi...come to office tomorrow...u will get all ur doubts clarified...bye...

said these words rachana cut the call

avinash: rachana...u started playing ur dirty games again...yeh bahuth baari padne wala hey tume



Hoshiarpur, India

mohinder: maan!!!!

maan stood before his dadaji...with head lowered

maan: ji dadaji

mohinder: aaj tum kaha the?

maan: woh mein...mein...adi...adi...

mohinder got very angry...

mohinder: chup ho jao maan...kithne jhoot bologe tum...kithna dil dhukayega humara...kya kya sapna dekha tha mein ne tere liye...lekin...ab mujhe lagraha hey ki mein bekaar mein tumpe umeedh rakha tha...

maan got hurt with mohinder words...he stood there silent...

savithri: woh ghar agaya hey na...ab kya hey...chodiya na ji...

mohinder: savithri!!!! tum ander jao...agar tum aaj ek shabd maan ke baare mein bola tho...patha nahi mein kya karunga...jao...andher jao...

savithri got scared with maohinder words and went inside crying...mohinder turned towards maan...

mohinder: maan...tere maa baap ghujar ne ke baadh mein ne tumhe mere haatho mein rakh ke paala hey ...aaj thu ek laaparvah ki tarah ...cha...

tumhare mehnath se humein khana khilane ki bagair...tum issbudde logon ki mehnath se bana hua khana ko besharam ki tarah kha rahe ho...

maan self respect got deeply hurt with those words...he couldn't take any more...he went inside took his bag and came before mohinder...mohinder got shocked seeing maan with his back...savithri came running...

maan: aap sahi keh rahe hey..dadaji...mein besharam hu...aaj aap mere ankhe kholdhiya...mein jaa raha hu...naukri doondne...aur ...kamayab hokar hi ghar loutunga...

savithri: maan beta...aisa math karo...hum tumhare bina nahi reh sakthe...mat jao maan

mohinder stood there speechless...actually he thought maan will realize his mistake...but maan decided to leave the house...which is like a death blow to him

savithri: aap boliye...maan ko ...usse jaane math dijiye...(crying)

mohinder could not get any words due to shock...

maan stood there for a while with tears in eyes...

maan: aaki khamoshi...ko mein aapka izaazath maan letha hu...mein jaa raha hu...ek aur baath dadaji...aapka iss potha...aapko kabhi bhi sharmindha nahi karega...aapka sir hamesha uncha hi rakhega...
daadi...apna khayal rakhna...dadaaji ka bhi...

savithri: maan beta...math jao...

savithri attempts were in vain...maan left the house with a strong determination to find a job...mohinder stood there speechless..


to be continued...


Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I 'ill read first 2 parts n then comment u back on all parts at once

thanks 4 PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey the gur coming to live in geet's flat is maan na

plz reply to this post and answer my question
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

hey the gur coming to live in geet's flat is maan na

plz reply to this post and answer my question


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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow loved it yaar ...awsome one !!!

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