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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanksss dear🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gopi06

awesome updt maria
wating for next updt...cont soon
thanks for the pm

Thanksss gopi🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

part 3 ..

felt sad 4 MN...very emotional!
luvd d update
luv ya!🤗

@Pariii🤗 Thanksss sis🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

Maria congorts sis loved to read ur new ff it's Brilliant stort

i'm feeling their pain
they secrifice their love
but bever ended they still could feel each other's pain
but can't do anything right now
mayu so sturbon i think he should listen nups n mom
coz she still in her sasural
sorry coulcn't comment b4 but after 2day i'll be comment regular insha-Allah
update soon 🤗 n thanks for the pm

@samira🤗 Thanksss sis🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u sooo much everyone for appreciating n liking previous part...🤗🤗
Love
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Posted: 14 years ago
brown part=Mayur flashback
Part'4

Nupur did not utter a word'and she did not try to stop him..

He was expecting she will say something but she did not'

Bye Nupur'he said looking at her'

Bye'she said trying to avoid his gaze'.

Mayank gave a last glance to her and she could see hurt and pain in those eyes'she loves him to the core of her heart but sigh she was helpless..Mayank I don't see you like this as I love you but I cant do anything..please don't try to meet me..it will increase your pain..and I cant see you in pain'please try to forget me'please forget me..

Bhabhi'.what happened to you'Gunjan asked her shaking her shoulder as she saw him in deep thoughts,,,

Nothing Gunjan'.she tried to hide her tears ,her emotions'

Bhabhi'ap mujh se kuch chupa rahi ho'Gunjan tried to know what was cooking in her mind..as she noticed something strange between Mayank and Nupur..

Nupur koi baat nahi hai'.tum ase hi pareshan ho rahi ho'She said with smile

But Gunjan was not satisfied at her answer'she knew there was something which she did not want to tell her and she was determined to know what was truth'.

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Mayank returned back home but he was hurt ,sad to see her in this condition'he never thought in his life'he will see her in this condition...

Mayank opened the drawer of his cupboard and took out photo album'there were lots of his and Nupur pictures in it'

Nupur agar tum five min main ready ho ker bahir nahi aye toh main'main ander aa jaon ga'he was irritated now as she was taking lots of time to get ready'they had to go for date and Nupur was getting ready'he was waiting for her past 30 min'

Mayank'sirf 5 min'.she replied her

Nupur..half an hour se yahi keh rahi ho'kitna intezar karvati ho'.he was angry at her'

Mayank kya tum mere liye thora sa intezar bhi nahi ker sakte'she said while coming out from room'

Tumhare liye toh main apni pori zindagi intezar ker sakta hoon'he looked into her eyes and pulled her towards him'Nupur could feel seriousness in his tone'she hugged him tightly'he tightened his gripped around her waist'she whispered while hugging him tightly'I love you Mayank..

I love you too Nupur'He placed his hand on her picture and kissed her'Tumhare liye toh main sari zindagi intezar ker sakta hoon'per pata nahi ye intezar khatam bhi ho gay a nahi


Kismat Ka Yeh Khel Hain, Milna Tha Humne Kabhi,
Hathon Ki Lakeeron Mein, Likha Tha Yeh Sabhi,
Koi Jaane, Naa Maane, Yeh Saath Hain Kitna Haseen,

Kaash Yeh Pal Tham Jaaye, Aapke Hum Ban Jaaye,
Jannat Bhula Ke Hum Teri, Aaankh Ke Ashq Ban Jaaye

Tum badal gaye ho Nupur'meri Nupur toh kahin kho gaye hai'jo her pal muskurati thi'hansti thi'Tumhari hansi toh kahin gum ho gaye hai'

Nupur I want my old Nupur back'my sweet ,bubbly,innocene Nupur back'he said while looking at her picture'

Janam Janam Ka Yeh Saath Hain, ChhootTaa Yeh Aise Nahi,
Pyar Tera Aisa Mila Ki, Ab Koi Bhata Nahi,
Baahon Mein, Aake Teri, Saanso Me Simat Jaaye,

Kaash Yeh Pal Tham Jaaye, Aapke Hum Ban Jaaye,
Jannat Bhula Ke Hum Teri, Aaankh Ke Ashq Ban Jaaye.

Ashq Ban Jaaye, Pal Tham Jaaye
Ashq Ban Jaaye, Yeh Pal Tham Jaaye ...

I promise you'I will back my old Nupur'I will give your happiness'I promise I will your smile back'

I can't see you like this'.i promise you'you know na what I said'I mean it'''

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Bhabhi maa is calling you in her room'.Gunjan told Nupur '

Maa ne kyun bulaya'kuchg zaroori kam ho ga'she thought

Gunjan main abhi ati hoon'she replied

She entered in Mansi(Adhiraj's mother) room...

Maa'ap ne mujhe bulaya'.Nupur said..

Nupur yahan aao mere pas baitho'mujhe tum se kuch baat kerni hai'Nupur felt changed in her behaviour,in her tone'she was confused to understand anything,,,

Ji maa'she said while sitting close to her'

Nupur ye Mayank kauun tha'.she said in strict tone'Nupur looked at her in disbelief..she never thought she will ask her about Mayank

Who'maa he is my ..friend'.Nupur said not looking into her eyes'

Tumhari zubaan kyun larh khara rahi hai'..Nupur could feel rudeness in her voice'she was shocked at her behavior'she never expected this kind of behavior from her'

Maa'main sach keh rahi hoon 'he is just my friend'.Nupur tried to clarified herself..

Dekho Nupur'mujhe tumhare doston ka tum se milne pe koi aitraz nahi 'lekin ye baat yaad rakhna..tum Adihraj ki widow or is ghar ki baho ho..she said in strict,ordering tone..

Ji'main---- ainda is baat---- ka khayal rakoon gi'her words were chocking due to her tears'

She said and hurriedly walked out from the room

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Mayu'shilpa came in his room,,taking cup of coffee for him..

Ji maa'Mayank said and hurriedly placed the album in drawer and closed it

Here is your favourite coffee'.shilpa aunty said while giving him a cup of coffee

Thanks Maa'

He sat besides her'.

Mayu tu kahan gaya tha beta'bata ker toh jata'.

Main Nupur ke ghar gaya tha'he said looking at her'

Jis ka darr tha wohi hua'she thought

Mayu tujhe Nupur ke ghar nahi jana chahiye tha'Shilpa aunty said'she knew what will happen if they get to know about Mayank and Nupur..

Kyun maa..Nupur bhi yeahi keh rahi thi'per kyun?main kyun us se nahi mil sakta'he said angrily

Mayu who Nupur ka sasural hai'agar us ke ghar walon ko bura laga toh'she was trying to convince him..

bas maa..main ab thak chukka hoon ,,,ab mujh se aur saha nahi jata'he said while putting his head on her lap..

She could feel her son's pain'she knew he loves her so much but what he was doing it was not good for Nupur'it could create problem for her as she was already in miserable pain'

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here is next update ...i hope u ll like it...plz do comments n press like tab if u liked it😳

Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update maria👏
feeling bad for nupur n mayank😒
continue soon
thnx for de pm
~jiya~
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update dear...but it was rude from adhiraj's mom to say those words to her...
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 update...
jst superb...
yuppy!!!!!!!!
m 1st 2 tel u dis..
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Posted: 14 years ago
no...
nt fair..
m 3rd 😒

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