👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 I read the parts,you simply left me astonished and literally my eyes were wet,the only point which I am not able to understand is how do you manage to write all this,please tell me also so I will do the same while reading it,so that will make my heart strong too as hard as stone and it won't be tore into pieces every time.I read this after which the paper was quite wet at few points,as I just couldn't control no matter how much I tried but I failed miserably...!!!!!!!!
Khabi Khud Pe Khabi Halat Pe Rona Aaya'
Baat Nikli To Har Ik Baat Pe Rona Aaya'
Hum To Samje The Ke Hum Bhool Gaye Hain Un Ko'
Kia Hova Aaj Yeh Kis Baat Pe Rona Aaya'
Kis Liye Jeete Hai Hum Kis Ke Liye Marte Hai'
Baarha Aise Sawalaat Pe Rona Aaya'
Kon Rota Hai Kisi Aur Ki Katir Ae Dost'
Sab Ko Apni Hi Kisi Baat Pe Rona Aaya'
I haven't read quite from long as you know the print out system my sis got me as I asked her to bring some and once again I was in my bus reading it.For truly magical it was many parts I even read it during my class as always there was no point where I could stop especially when I know I have further parts in my hand itself.
The way they rescued her was just amazing,and even in such a bad condition she never fails in recognizing him his touch is far way,his presence is all enough to give a knock to her senses,the way he cocooned her in his embrace and she felt safe as always giving a glimpse of assurance of everything will be alright from now and all the wretchedness shall be washed away from their lives completely.
The part in which she was drowning into the deep pool of death to never return back and everyone asked him to go and let their soul be parted for always,as he just couldn't let her go far from him he just couldn't resist that his soul get drift way from him that too forever and leaving no ray of hope to meet again,that was yet painful how could he that too after so many years when he so wanted too end her miseries but not her life...As his princess led his way to his angel even in her drowsiness she answered all his calls and all she could ask for was never to let her go away from him,never to let her drift away from him as this torment agony anguish is just unbearable than the pain she went through all these years of not those worthless pain but the pain caused by the distance between them especially when she knew how much he loves her...!!!!!!!!
The life saver 3 words I LOVE YOU,all he had to do was just spill that to bring back life to her as this was the only reason or objective of her life other than that all is just meaningless worthless completely,I simply loved the way u marked her feelings that was just awesome was amazed where did the actually blood run from to her cheeks to make her blush no matter in what condition or situation she is,she was on her almost dead bed yet she was blushing and shy being with him his presence itself makes her shy as her innocence was never gone even she was the mother of his child they had long broken all the barriers between them but every time when he confess her his Love she used to shy as this was the first time every single time he gets her in his embrace she use to blush as this was the first time every time he kisses her to leave his marks on her his signature of she is only his she use to be flushed and get butterfly in her tummy as this was the first time,truly fails to understand what actually effect he had on her...TRULY MAGICAL,true by yours words magic is something not easily understood by normal peoples same here just can't understand the MAGICAL effect they had on each other their MAGICAL Love which has no boundaries and unknown to limits MAGICAL bond which is their sweet daughter which will now or never let them drift away ever and ever...!!!!!!!!!
He did all his best that he could do for her showered all his care and love on her as it meant only for her,he unfortunately couldn't undo what all happened but surely could make much better life ahead,which lead to happiness and only happiness.He took her away from all her pains to a world of their own,world of their love which they always dreamed of but couldn't make it.
As he is trying his best to take care of her still hurting her at times,as his presence hurted her more his being way hurted her more.Loved the way she asked him to take care of your daughter he would even die to listen this,she simply couldn't resisted herself around him she just couldn't be in her control at all,not at all no matter how patient she was all these years but around him she cannot have even 1percent.
His all decisions always meant to her so much she being a true obedient wife never argued him always glued to his decisions,she never questioned him all the faith and trust she had on him was enough or shall I say more than enough,she didn't even asked once why he did,there was no need he did it has to be correct and right for her,as the belief she had in him she could not doubt him at any point she could never harm her harm!!!!not even in his wildest dreams...!!!!!!!!
She was the hurted soul she wanted him only him his love his embrace more than anything else she needed him,his being still around her but the distance between them was hurting it more and somewhere making the situation more worse.But if they knew the confession of past years could make it more worse they wouldn't have opt for it.
The confession which was needed indeed for the distance to be covered so that the so called misunderstanding be removed so that he could come over his guilt which was eating him inside,which broke her completely more of her faith she had in him,the base was left shaken until the life was broken but now seems as someone has put her whole world upside down,to be true her breath was taken away in a jiffy,but he didn't meant intentionally he all wanted was to just confess all his remorses to her but at times decision are taken to get it back at place or just to start as a new beginning...!!!!!!
Just close your eyes and you will see,
All the memories that you have of me,
Just sit and relax and you will find,
I'm really still there inside your mind...!!!!!
I can't be with you today
but if you close your eyes and think;
I'll be beside you in the kitchen
wearing your shirt - standing by the sink.
I'll be with you in the bedroom
waiting quietly on your bed;
Just close your eyes and think of me,
relive those memories in your head.
I'll stand by you in the bathroom,
an unlikely place to meet;
I'll smile at you so playfully
as I let you brush my teeth.
I'll be your light in the darkness,
shining steady through and through;
You only have to watch it glow
to know I think of you.
I'll be the music that you listen to,
I'll be there in every song:
I'll laugh with you and sing with you,
and comfort you when your day's gone wrong.
I'll be the wind that ruffles your hair,
I'll be that warm embrace;
I'll be the hand on your shoulder,
I'll be the tender touch on your face.
I'll be the clock gently ticking,
reminding you of the times;
We've shut the rest of the world outside
we're in our own world - yours and mine.
I'll be the moon as it dances
on the water cold and still;
For I have loved you always
and I know I always will.
Just close your eyes and you will see,
All the memories that you have of me,
Just sit and relax and you will find,
I'm really still there inside your mind...!!!!!
The search started again but this time he atleast knew he might had some clue the pain was more,the moments were more sorrowful this time and he had to find her this time no matter what but all those sweet memories in which he is not present but all those had a shade of him which was more painful than anything he wasn't there at any place at any joy of her or at any pain of her, the thought itself was killing him deep inside toring his heart into pieces...!!!!!!!!!!
He finally reached to her first destination,I believe this was truly needed he got to knew her first word everything about them into detail which was yet painful for both,the life she couldn't give her she blamed herself,all the events narrated by mother just filled up my eyes...her love she didnt even asked if she is girl,and her pain was all gone away just seeing the replica of her maan and as it was so obvious as if its her baby it couldnt be anyone else no can dare touch her even except him,seems like all her happiness just meant from him to him by him as the life just revolve around him even the torture she was happy about as even the pain was associated with him so even the pain torment was pleasant for her
Ab to hain tum se, har khushee apanee
Tum pe maranaa hai, jindagee apanee
Jab ho gayaa tum pe, ye dil diwaanaa
Fir chaahe jo bhee kahe, hum ko jamaanaa
Koee banaaye baaten, chaahe ab jitanee
Tere pyaar mein badanaam door door ho gaye
Tere saath hum bhee sanam mashahoor ho gaye
Dekho kahaa le jaaye, bekhudee apanee
All the pain she went through all had a part of making her so stubborn being far away not only from her love but now her soul tooo,anyone would naturally have become like this but the best was she never changed for him she was always the same.
He got to knew all her miseries hardships all that she had to go through all alone as he wasn't there at all,he could just wonder about her angel as has become just for him what he has given her and what he has received as rewards he still wonders how could some one on earth love some one so much how could some one be so naive how could some one be in so love with him how was that possible that too what he has done to her and she is least bothered about that she don't even care all what she went through and because of whom he is guilty and she can't even hear his sorry...!!!!!!
Mere rang mein rangne waali
Pari ho ya ho pariyon ki rani
Ya ho meri prem kahaani
Mere savaalon ka jawaab do
Do na
But finally he will find his angels as the king brains actually worked this time on his princess words and don't even have to work hard this time...!!!!!!!!
Kuch log Muhabat ko gham samajhte hain
Jo gham samajhte hain wo kam samjhte hain
Kesay guzrta ha waqt teray bina
Ye koi aur nahi hum samajhtay hain
Muskan now I shall write for you what tremendous work you have done outstanding dear simply outstanding.I realized laughing infront of people was not that embarassing than crying you actually made me cry with last few updates as it was indeed painful for both as im not a crying person at all but when it comes to you you never fails and make me fails to cry.They both surely went through a hell pain,but your writing makes the emotions come in real way the feel we all get is just like we could see by our real eyes moving infront of us the vision seems so realistic ooo dear loved it I still wonder how you manage to right it so beautifully yet so emotionally HAT's OFF to you dear a sinple standing ovation goes to you by me...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Extra immense impact was added by swati and rachna what beautiful poems they both have added its just wonderful and delight to read them with your updates as giving a kind of summary loved them tooo...!!!!!!!
Atlast sorry dear for writing so much couldn't help it as you have that MAGICAL effect on me...
Thnx 4 the pm dear and for giving us such a beautiful ff
keep writing
God bless you
Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 14 years ago
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