AR - Hum Tum || Part 25 - Page 57

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Hello!I'm new on IF but I did visit IF before I decided to open up an account.I have read almost every AR FF on here.I wanted to write one of mine own FF.If this FF relates to anyone's I apologize because I never meant to copy them.This is my first FF so it may not be good.Who ever is on my buddy list will get a PM.The story is not based on the movie Hum Tum.

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Part 3 - Page 4
Part 4 - Page 6
Part 5 - Page 8
Part 6 - Page 10
Part 7 - Page 13
Part 8 - Page 15
Part 9 - Page 17
Part 10 - Page 19
Part 11 - Page 21
Part 12 - Page 24
Part 13 - Page 27
Part 14 - Page 30
Part 15 - Page 34
Part 16 - Page 36
Part 17 - Page 39
Part 18 - Page 41
Part 19 - Page 43
Part 20 - Page 45
Part 21 - Page 47
Part 22 - Page 49
Part 23 - Page 52
Part 24 - Page 55
Part 25 - Page 57
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hum Tum - Part 1

Armaan Mallik, has been living out of state for quite some time now.He has came home to visit his mother.For work he has lived in a different place otherwise he would never leave his mother. He still didn't want to go when he got this offer but left because his mother wanted him to achieve in life.Armaan did studied for the field he wanted to work in and now that he has studied and got an amazing job offer with a good pay, why would he reject it?Armaan's mom didn't want him to either but he did so much that he didn't want to hold him back.Armaan's father died when he was just a teenager.Ananya, Armaan's mom was devastated when she was informed about her husband's accident and how he died instantly.Armaan couldn't bare to see mother depressed and weak so he did everything to make her come back to normal and the only that helped was his love.


Armaan quietly opens the front door as his mom didn't know he was coming home because he wanted to surprise.He slowly and carefully walked towards the kitchen where his mom loves to be. Something kind of confused him because he didn't see his mother.In fact, he saw a girl that was probably three or four years younger than him.Her side was facing him so he couldn't really see her face and her long black hair was also coming in the way.Armaan wanted to know who she was and what she is doing in his house.Armaan saw her lips moving so it meant that she was talking to someone on the phone.He also saw her writing something down.

"Armaan," came a surprised voice from behind.

Armaan turns around and sees his mom looking at him with a shocked face.He gives her smile and leans down to hug her as he was tall.Ananya hugs him back still shocked about the fact that her son is standing in front of her.Armaan pulls back and smiles down at her.

"Tum ghar kab aaye?" Ananya asked still in shock.

"Abhi abhi ghar aaya hoon," Armaan said.Armaan remembers the girl in kitchen and turns his head halfway then looks at him mom."Mom, woh ladki kaun hai."

"Kaun ladki?" Ananya asked confused as to who was her son talking about.

"Kitchen mein," Armaan said pointing his thumb back to the kitchen.

After he said that, she came walking out when she heard voices.The first person she saw is Ananya.She smiles at Ananya but she didn't notice Armaan even though he was right in front of her.

"Aunty woh - " Riddhima stopped talking because she had noticed Armaan.She moved back walking away from him.Armaan stared at her in confusion because he didn't know why she was walking away from him.Ananya knew the reason and became worried.

"Armaan, please kitchen main jao." Ananya said.Armaan looks at her confused.He didn't know what was going on but he still went in the kitchen.Before he left, he noticed tears coming out of the girl's eyes and her breathing was getting heavier.What shocked Armaan is that he heard yelling from the living room.

"Riddhima, calm down." Armaan heard his mother say to her.He could hear Riddhima's screams and sobs.This also made Armaan worried.What did he do that caused her to behave like that?He is pretty sure that he has never met her in his entire life.Soon, it became quiet and Ananya walks in the kitchen

"Mom, what happened?" Armaan asked his mom as soon as she walks in.

"Tum yahan kyun aaye?" Ananya asked kind of rudely.Armaan was taken aback at his mother's reaction of him coming.He thought she'd be happy that he came home.Tears came in Ananya's eyes which shocked Armaan even more.She didn't cry this much since his father passed away. Ananya looks up at Armaan then hugs him holding onto him.Armaan hugs him mom because the only way to stop her crying his having him, her son, in her arms."Tum upar kamre main jao aur fresh ho jao." Ananya said after she calmed down.Armaan pulls back and was about to walk out."Armaan." Armaan turns and looks at Ananya."Please Riddhima ke samne se mat jaana." Armaan nods and walks out.

Armaan saw Riddhima rolled up in a ball in the corner of the living room.He saw her moving back and forth kind of worrying him.He tried his best not make noise so she doesn't notice and start to scream and cry again.He made his way upstairs and starts to walk towards his room but he takes a glance downstairs before continuing.Armaan took a shower and came out of the bathroom still in the thoughts of what made Riddhima act like that when she saw him.Ananya walked in with his coffee along with hers.Armaan sat on his bed as his mom sat in front of him and she handed him his coffee.

"Mom, woh hai kaun aur usne mujhe dekhe aise react kyun kiya?" Armaan asked his mom.

"Armaan, mujhe Riddhima orphanage main mili thi." Ananya told Armaan.

"Orphanage?" Armaan said.Armaan knew his mom went to the orphanage to go meet the kids but it looked like Riddhima was too old for that place.

"Maine ek din Riddhima ko wahan dekha," Ananya said.

Ananya walks over to Riddhima, who was hiding behind bushes.Ananya bends down beside Riddhima and Riddhima moves away from her scared.Ananya was shocked to see a girl in such a bad condition.Her clothes were torn and she looked weak.

"Beta, tumhara naam kya hai?" Ananya asked.Riddhima looks at her and felt that she can trust this woman.Otherwise, who else would come and ask her this.

"R...Riddhima," she replies.Ananya smiles when she heard her voice.It was so sweet and soft along with the name being beautiful.

"Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?" Ananya asked Riddhima.

"Mere paas kahin aur jaane ko hai nai," she said with tears forming in her eyes.She looked back in front at the kids.

"Kyun nai," Ananya asked.Riddhima saw a man that walked over to the kids and she became scared and her breathing started to increase.Ananya saw this and became worried."Riddhima! Riddhima!Tum theek ho!" Riddhima looks at Ananya and hugs her tightly.

"Woh...woh...woh," Riddhima kept on repeating as she held on to Ananya tightly.Ananya hugs her back and tears had also started to form in her eyes too.

"Kaun woh?" Ananya asked still extremely worried.

"Mere Papa aur unke bhai aur unke dost...mera...rape," she said.Riddhima didn't know why but she said her feelings to this woman.Ananya was now extremely shocked.

"Kya?" Ananya exclaimed.Riddhima looks up at Ananya.

"Mere papa, unke dost, aur unke mera rape karte the," Riddhima said breathing heavily as she cried.

"Lekin kyun?" Ananya asked wiping Riddhima's tears.Riddhima shrugged and cried more.

"Meri Mama ke jaane ke baad Papa ne yeh sab shuru kiya tha," Riddhima confessed crying harder.It all made sense why she hid.She was scared of men because of what her dad, his brothers, and his friends did to her.Ananya thought to take Riddhima to her home so she will be safe and no one will harm her.

"Isiliye main Riddhima ko humare ghar le aayi thi," Ananya finished off the story.Armaan was shocked as much as his mother was when she found out.

"Lekin main aisa toh nai karuga," Armaan said.

"I know beta lekin please jitna ho Riddhima ke samne mat aana," Ananya said.Armaan nods and looks down.

"I think main wapis chala jaata hoon," Armaan suggested.

"Nai beta.Itne dino ke baad main tumse mil rahe hoon aur tum keh rahe ho ke tumhe wapis jaana chaiye," Ananya said.

"Mom, Riddhima phir comfortable nai rehe gi agar main iss ghar main hoon," Armaan said.

Ananya smiles at her son being worried for Riddhima.She knew he never meant to do anything on purpose.He didn't even know about Riddhima living in their home.Armaan came here to give his mom a surprised but he found himself a surprise.

"Main Riddhima ko dekh kar aati hoon," Ananya said.Armaan nods as she left his room and closed the door behind.So if Riddhima happened to pass by his room and see him, she won't start screaming and crying.Armaan's eyes filled with tears as he remembered the story his mom told him a few minutes ago.He wanted to help Riddhima but couldn't as she would just scream and cry if she sees him.The problem was how was he suppose to get around the house when she was home and she is always home.

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How was the first part?!
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Hey loved it add me into ur PM List Thanx
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oh.. my god...

poor rddhima... itz so heart renching...

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Awesome start.. Can't wait to read more... Update soon do add me to you pm list...
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heyyy
the first part was really good
plz do continue soon
i wud love to read more!!!
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Loved it
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wow nie concep wish armaans mom makes ridhhima understqnd that armaan aint like that
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Hum Tum - Part 2

"Ahhh!" came a scream from downstairs.Armaan woke up with a jerk when he heard someone scream.He got up and grabs his shirt.Armaan runs downstairs as he puts on his shirt.He looked around but couldn't find his mom.Armaan runs to the front door and sees Riddhima moving back from the door because there was a man with box.It was the delivery guy and by the look on his face he was terrified.Riddhima kept on walking back and she bumped into Armaan.As she turned around her hair hit Armaan in the face.Armaan turns his head as her long, soft, silky hair hit his face.He turns and looks at her and noticed her hazel eyes.Riddhima's scream brought him out of his thoughts.Armaan rushes to the man and signs the paper.

"I'm really sorry," Armaan apologized to the man who was freaking out.Armaan took the box and slammed the door shut.He threw the box on the floor and turns to Riddhima.She was crying and screaming.Armaan wanted to know where his mom as he was furious as to why his mother would leave the house with him and Riddhima alone.Armaan grabs her arm and pushes her against the wall."Chup!" Riddhima quietened down a bit after hearing his loud voice.Fresh tears ran down her face as she looked up at him.Armaan realizes what he is doing and slowly lets go of her arm.Armaan was actually shocked that Riddhima listened to him. Riddhima ran to the living room and sat in the corner of the living where she was yesterday.

Armaan walks in the kitchen still mad at his mom for leaving without informing him and then Riddhima screaming and crying.He grabbed a cookie and took out some milk for himself. As he drank the milk he tried to figure what to do next.He walks out and sees her there moving back and forth.Riddhima heard a noise and her head jerked up.She saw Armaan opening the package that just came.Riddhima was scared to approach or talk to him.She moved further back but couldn't as there was a wall behind her.She saw him yesterday and the same reason she started screaming and crying today is because she always thinks a guy is going to rape her because of her dad, his brothers, and his friends.Riddhima had to know who is and what he is doing in the house.Riddhima had no clue of who is and she didn't know that Ananya had a son.She got up and took tiny steps towards him.She stopped a good two to three feet away from him.Riddhima didn't want to get too close unless he did something at least she'll have a head start to run.

"Aap...aap...kaun hai?" Riddhima asked stammering.Armaan looks at her and was surprised to hear her talking to him.Riddhima stared at him waiting for him to answer her question.Armaan turns back and continues to look through the box.

"Jiske ghar main tum rehti ho, main unka beta hoon," Armaan answered her question.

Riddhima was shocked.She thought Ananya just lived alone in the house but didn't know she had a son.Riddhima turns towards the mantle above the fireplace and sees Armaan's picture placed on it.Armaan turns around and sees Riddhima staring at him.He looks at her the looks away but when he looks back she is still staring at him.This time Armaan couldn't look away from her eyes.Both of them stood there, gazing into each others eyes.Riddhima had never seen eyes like Armaan's.Usually, if she took one look at a guy she would scream and cry while running away from them.She scream,cried, and ran away from Armaan when he came to the door but now she didn't.They heard someone clear throat making them tear their gaze from each other and turn to the person.Ananya stood there with some bags in her hand looking at them.When Armaan saw her his anger came back.

"Aap kahan thi?" Armaan asked walking towards Ananya.Ananya looks at Riddhima then back at Armaan kind of surprised.

"Main grocery karne gayi thi," Ananya replies holding up the bags with grocery filled in them.

"Bata ke toh jaa sakti thi," Armaan said raising his voice.Riddhima moved back when she heard his voice raising.

"Armaan," Ananya said then looking back at Riddhima.Armaan turns his head and looks at Riddhima.He saw her scared as she moved back.She hit the wall so she ran back to where she was sitting before, in the corner of the living room and curled herself into a ball moving back and forth.Armaan looks down sighing and walks upstairs.

Ananya walks in the kitchen and puts the grocery bags on the counter.She was surprised that Riddhima didn't' scream or cry when she was standing in front of Armaan.Every time Ananya has seen Riddhima with a guy, she is crying and screaming.Ananya started to take groceries out of the bags and put them in their respective places.She heard the doorbell ring and went to go get the door.Ananya smiled as she saw her best friend standing at the door with a smile.

"Aao Padma," Ananya said moving to the side letting her walk in.Padma and Ananya go long back when they were in college.They have been friends since then.When Ananya told Padma about Riddhima, Padma felt miserable even though she did nothing wrong.Padma is a sweet, kind, woman.Ananya and Padma walk in the living room and Riddhima is still curled up in a ball.Padma looks at Ananya and Ananya sighs."Kitchen main chalte hain."
Ananya told Padma what has happened since Armaan has arrived yesterday.

"Kya zindagi ban gaye hai uss bechari ki," Padma said sighing sadly.Ananya nods agreeing with Padma.Armaan walks in the kitchen and sees Padma.

"Padma aunty!" Armaan said happily.Padma gets up and gives Armaan a hug.

"Kaise ho?" Padma asked as she pulls back from the hug.

"Ab aap ko dekh liya hai na toh aur khush hoon," Armaan flirted with Padma.Padma giggles and shakes her head as she lightly hits Armaan's head.

"Badmaash," she said and Armaan laughs along with the both of them.Riddhima was standing behind the wall watching them talk and laugh.She noticed that isn't like the guy she thinks he is but still she doesn't know him well enough to trust him.Ananya saw Riddhima's head peeking in.

"Riddhima, aao jao beta," Ananya calls Riddhima in.Riddhima walks in playing the hem of her shirt.The only seat that was vacant was next to Armaan.Armaan was about to get up when he saw her apprehensive look but Padma puts her hand on his hand.

"Usse tumhara samna karna padega," Padma said in a voice level that Armaan could only hear but Ananya knew what she said to him.

They have been trying to get Riddhima to face men because all guys are not like what she thinks they are.Armaan looks at his mom and she nods.He sat back comfortably in his chair.Riddhima slowly came around the table and sat on the chair next to Armaan.She scooted the chair over so she was at the end of the table.Armaan, Ananya, and Padma talked and joked around while Riddhima sat there quietly.Sometimes her eyes would go up to Armaan and she would stare at him for a while but then look down.Padma had seen Riddhima few times looking at Armaan and so did Ananya.

"Ananya," Padma said.Ananya looks at Padma."Maine Armaan ke liye ladki dhundi hai."

"Phir se," Armaan said whining.His mom and Padma have been after him to get married even after he specifically told him that he doesn't want to get married right now."Main kitni dafa kaha hai ke main abhi shaadi nai karna chatha aur aap log mere liye koi dhanki ladki bhi nai dhund the.Woh hamesha flirty types ya sharmili hoti hai." Ananya and Padma laugh.They heard another laughing voice and it wasn't Armaan's, they knew that for sure. Riddhima was laughing too.Armaan looks at Padma, Ananya, then back at Riddhima.

"Oh my god!Tum hans thi bhi ho," Armaan said acting surprised.Riddhima looks at him with a smile.He said that to enlightened the mood more and it worked.Riddhima actually smiled in a very long time.Ananya and Padma look at each other then back Armaan and Riddhima who were looking at each other with smiles on their faces.

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Just to let you guys know on weekends I can update more than once and during weekdays it depends if I have time but I surely will update daily.
Edited by KSG.JW - 14 years ago
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Please update daily
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