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Aaliya

@Dedivol

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guyz I am new to India Forums .. I actually had an account long time back but I just got time to visit it right now. I read all the amazing FF people have wrote about all the couples. They are really really sweet & romantic I must say. Also they have been written with deep feelings and love. Excellent Job but now I would also like to write a fan fiction to see whether I can do it as well & how many ppl actually like it :) Please like and comment if you like it so that I get hope and write more full FF's. For now I will explain a bit of the story. Hope you guyz ENJOY:) <3

So here it goes ...

A young 21 year old girl was running down an alleyway while being chased by a few thugs. She was wearing pink shalwar kameez.She reached a dead end. She screamed but the thugs just laughed and started coming closer and closer. A voice came from behind "Leave her at once, or else you wont be able to leave from here". The thugs turned and saw a guy standing. "Tu hame mare ga?" a thug said while laughing hard as he moved forward to hit him but the guy stopped him and punched him in the face really hard and he fell on the ground. The other thug attacked him but he also failed. Then one of the thug placed a gun on the girls head and said "Chup chap yahan se chala jaa, warna yeh larki apni jaan kho bethe gi". The girl started to cry and told the guy to leave but he stood there and started moving closer. He said "larki ko chod de warna aisa haal karoon ga ke yahan se jaane kabil nahi rahe ga". The thug told him to stop and leave but he continued to move forward. The thug changed the direction of the gun and pointed it towards the guy but he didn't stop. The thug shot him and the bullet went through his shoulder. The guy came more close and beat the s**t out of the thug. He didn't stop 'till the thug fainted. The other two had already ran away. The guy comes close to the girl and hugs her. When someone shoots the girl from behind and runs away. The girl falls down. The guy tries to follow but seeing the condition of the girl stays with her but after a while faints as the poison of the bullet slowly spreads around his body. They lie there slowly fainting, trying to reach each other but faint

Also one last thing .. if you want a pm for the next update please add me to buddy list :)

INDEX

Intro - up ^

Part 1 - pg.1

Part 2 - pg.2

Part 3 - pg.4

Part 4 - pg.5

Part 5 - pg.7

Part 6 - pg.8

Edited by Princessangel - 13 years ago

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Diyan

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Posted: 14 years ago

interesting one indeed

do send me a pm when you update

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Nina

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Posted: 14 years ago

Want to read more
Wen u update please pm me

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Aaliya

@Dedivol

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Posted: 14 years ago

Okay guyz so here is the first part. Enjoy reading and I am looking forward to the comments. Critism is always allowed, I wont mind as it will help me do better in the next part but please don't use words that can hurt. Thank You. EnJOY :D

WORDS IN BOLD are dialogues. Words in Italics are thoughts.

JUST A DREAM

She woke up in the middle of the night, scared and confused. She looked outside the window and the sun was rising. She got out from her bed and stood by the window. She looked at the beautiful sunrise and forgot all about her dream. After a while, she headed towards the washroom and changed into a black dress.

This is Riddhima Gupta. The top businesswoman of Canada. She is the daughter of Padma and Shashank Gupta. She also has a sister named Anjali who doesn't want to get involved into the family business so she decided to become a doctor. Riddhima is a fun-loving and out-going girl. She loves to meet new people and explore new places. She also loves talking. The most important people in her life after her family are her two best friends that have been with her since childhood, Atul & Muskaan. They live in India, Riddhima had moved to Canada after finishing college. Atul is married to Anjali while Muskaan is getting married to a guy named Rahul. Riddhima loves her friends & family. She can't imagine her life without them.

Padma - Riddhima beta tum aaj khud hi uth gayi? Aisa toh pehli baar hua hai.

Riddhima - Mom, woh mujhey aaj office jaldi jana hai koi naya project mila hai.

Padma - acha chalo jaldi neeche aa jao, mein breakfast ready karwa deti hoon.

Riddhima - okay mom, just two more minutes.

Padma - okay jaldi ana.

Riddhima picks up her purse and some files and heads downstairs.

Shashank - Good Morning Riddhima

Riddhima - Good Morning Dad

Shashank - Beta aaj itni jaldi office jaa rahi ho?

Riddhima - Yes Dad, woh eik naya project aya hai na, usi waja se thoda jaldi jana padh raha hai.

Shashank - ah, yes beta, the new project. This is a very important deal for us Riddhima. We must get it at any cost. Mujhey aaj kahin jana hai isliye mein aaj nahi aa sakoon ga. You will have to take care of everything.

Riddhima - of course Dad, yeh deal hume hi mile gi. You don't worry about it. Mere pas sari details hain.

Shashank - okay, ab mein chalta hoon. Mujhey dair ho rahi hai. Good Luck. Bye

Riddhima - Thanks Dad, Bye. Mom mein bhi chalti hoon mujhey bhi dair ho rahi hai.

Padma - lekin beta sahi se breakfast toh karlo.

Riddhima - Nahi mama, dair ho rahi hai. Bhook lagi toh mein office mein hi kuch kha loon gi. Driver take out the car.

Padma - okay beta. Take Care & good luck. Bye.

Riddhima - Thank you mom, Bye.

Riddhima quickly sits in the car and leaves. On the way to the office her car stops.

Riddhima - What happened Driver?

Driver - Maam I'll just check.

Driver opens the bonnet and sees smoke coming out.

Driver - Madam the engine has broken down.

Riddhima - What? Ohmigod, how long will it take to be repaired?

Driver - Madam at least an hour.

Riddhima - one hour. Mein pehle hi late hoon. Ab kya karoon? Okay Driver take the car to a mechanic and get it fixed. I will take a cab.

Driver - Yes maam.

Ohmigod, ab mein office kaise jaon gi? Mujhey toh wahan ab tak pahanch jana chahiye tha. Ab mein kya karoon? Yeh deal bohat important hai mujhey wahan kisi bhi halaat mein pahanch na hai. Oh GOD please HELP ME.