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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: smallville

Awesome update!!!!
Can't wait till maan and geet meet !!!!
Wondering wats gonna happen at the airport !!!

thankyou
keep guessing😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: sharmake11

love the song

uff nivi too much now
i hope they dont meet
good that geet avoiding
him
awesome update
pls cont soonnn
thnaks pm
thank yu so muchhh

thankyou. guess now u wd be happy that she is avoiding dev
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: preethia

i am hating this nivi to core now...cant she stay away from geet...

uff i dont geet to meet dev pl...
pl cont soon

thankyou
and well get happy nxt few updates wd be nivi free😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

maaneetsangel, preethia . Radhika Shah, 9n9i9s9h9u9 , sonali_N, Dreamy_Mystique, gangesegb, seemamary, teju2292, ambeern, shah10, -dia-, smallville, bobbydoll, sharmake11, monikaseth, misti.muna thankyou for giving lovely comments.

maaneetsangel, preethia, monikaseth, this update is esp for you guys . hope u 'll be happy now😉

here is the update

PART 10:

6PM:

Geet tu itni jaldi andar kyu jari hai

Abhi to 6 bje hai flight 8 30 ki hai

Well mere piya mjhe bulare hai so me chali

Geeettt

Stop using extra e and t in my name

Geet .a voice came out of nowhere

Oh shoot he is here

Bye nivi see ya in Chicago

Per geet mere baat to sun

But geet already had ran away towards the checkin counter

She had her eyes close so that she doesn't see dev and she bumped right into a solid wall

Hangon it's not wall it's a man oh my God is it him

She slowly opened her doe like eyes to meet deep chocolate eyes

She could have just stood there immersed in the moment when she heard dev's voice again

Oh not again she just ran again

Geet... geet bro aap? Dev came panting

Maan came out of his trance.and realizd that he was just standing there looking at the retreating figure of that girl.

Oh ha dev kaise ho

I m good aap yaha kaise

Aap kab ae India

Me bus pchle hafte he aya tha

Dev bro vickey came dragging all the luggage which include his as well as his bro's luggage.

Vickey tub hi yaha hai

Ha.. he is coming with me

Good luck vickey dev said while controlling his laugh

V funny bro

And bro atleast hold your handbag

Well you were the one who was boasting infront of those silly girls at car park that you can very easily handle all so now handle all

Dev started laughing.and maan smirked.he just loved acting big bro.

Tum yaha kia kar rahe ho?

Who me I just returned from malasia.

From the deaparture section? Maan asked bewildered at dev's attire and manner

Oh no wo I came from arrival ofcourse. Vickey started laughing

And?

Oh I just came to see off a frnd

Who was leaving tonight. He dared not mention geet or else vickey would be laughing at him rather than him at vickey.

Hmm ok then see ya later gotta go have some important emails to do before boarding.

Vickey u can join anytime

Yes bro .

Ok bro takecare. See ya later

Bye

Bye

Maan went in after checkin and sat at the coffee table at the farthest table possible.

Geet was meanwhile chatting with a lady and thought why not eat something before boarding so she went to the cafe area as well.but got rooted at the spot.

Omg babaji seriously kitna fit munda hai . gora chitta gabru jawan . hae me marjawa kina sona munda hai Punjab tha shair lgda hae babaji plz yeh wohi ho mere wala

She kept on staring at him and started thinking bout their future together. Meanwhile a little boy came and started tugging maan's pant.

Papa. Papa.

Maan looked down. the kid was such a sweetheart. He immediately picked up the boy and make him sit in his lap and started pinching his chubby cheeks.

Geet mouth formed a big o . he is married ha babaji mere sath he kyu her changa munda kisi aur ka ku bna daite ho me nazar nahi ati apko.she went away cursing her luck towards the canteen counter.

When she had her back towards maan the child's parents came and took the child away thanking him for taking care of their son.

Maan was about to turn back towards his laptop when his eyes fell on geet .

What a beauty. Why is she looking familiar. He kept on looking at her . her innocent features. Her petal like lips. Her beautiful smile.how adorable. His eyes kept on tracing her movements

Geet was clueless about maan's staring. She kept on moving from one place to another.muttering to herself while eating chips.maan was so absorbed in looking at geet that he did not noticed that his younger bro had come.

Vickey could not believe his eyes. His elder bro the MAAN SINGH KHURRANA was checking out a girl no no no oogling at a girl . Oh my God am I going insane? Did I just see what I think I saw?

He moved toward his bro and cleared his throat..no response.

He again tried to catch his attention but of no avail.

Finally he tapped his shoulder and Maan broke out of his trance.

Vickey had a big smirk on his face which clearly indicated that he had seen him looking at the girl.

Oh '. Ummm ' u came.. hmm'. I was just thinking about a deal

I didn't ask u anything bro' he said while grinning.

Oh hmmm

Waisey bro she is cute

VICKEY'. So you want me to ground you' he said through gritted teeths.

Vickey just looked away

Grounded grounded grounded. No vickey singh khurrana u can't spend your life in fear. This untamed horse gas to be tamed.if he gets busy with this girl he won't find time to make my life miserable. Yes vickey that's it you have to play cupid.

He got up with enthusiasm. I am going to find something to eat.

Hmmm

As soon as maan diverted his attention to his laptop vickey looked for that girl. There she was walking randomly in the lounge. He quickly moved towards her.he took out his phone and pretended to talk and dashed into her .her purse and his cell fell down.

Oh sorry didi. I didn't see

That's ok she said while bending down to pick up her purse.

Array didi. Don't

I'll pick up

Nai me karlo ge

Didi me kehra ho na I'll pick it up

He bent down and quickly looked at her boarding pass to see her seat no.

He gave her the purse.

There u go didi. Waisey I am Vicky. Vickey singh khurrana.

Hi vickey . I am geet handa.

And y r u calling me didi.

Well didi I am only 18 so I thought umm

She smiled well vickey I am only 24 so yes u thought rite u can call me didi

Mtlb frnds

Frnds

He then excused himself on the count of phonecall and made a dash towards the boarding counter used his contacts to change the seat no of his bro so that he was sitting right next to geet. He patted himself for the work and took the boarding passes for both of them.

PRECAP :

18 HOUR FLIGHT AND VICKEY BEING CUPID.😳 WHAT SAY?

plz leave comments and press the like button.

any suggesstions about who's pic should i upload as vickey?😛

Edited by ssch - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
awesome ...

ya right ... luv vicky ... par woh kid waali mu u hvv to clear in nxt update ...

n no trouble n mu further ... 4m any1 especially dev ...

aree yaar ... plzzz ,... kahin to in logo ko easily milne do ... well yahan bhi dey hv suffered already enough by waiting 4 each other 4 so long ...

toh ab no more probs ... plzzz ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
wow awesome geet saw maan maan saw geet wowowo vickey i love him he is so sweet calling geet didi awww please update soon thanks a lot for pm and this part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
yippe happy happy
thank yu
wow so maan & dev
are brothers interesting
vicky such sweet guy
his already click with
geet
love it
wonderful update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thank yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
superb update...
thank u for not making her see dev...
hey yippe they met...per yeh kya pehle mulakat mein mu...nahin yaar...
thanks vikcy love u for playing the cupid dear...
i hope he is successful
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
ved ur FFcant wait for the next part x
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
Awesome update!!!
Luv cupid Vicky!!!
Hopefully his plan is successful :)

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