Maaneet.. A new beginning THread # 1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#561

plzzzyaar wapis a b ja ab

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maneet-56

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Posted: 14 years ago

#562

hum updates k begair nahi soye ge

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@geet-10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#563

ya agree with manet-56

plz update na

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Krishna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#564

Ten pages of comments, check! Where's the update? It's been more than one hour too! Please update soon!

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Samra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#565

UPDATING RIGHT NOW

I CAN'T GIVE YOU A SLEEPLESSS NIGHT

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Samra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#566

omg i never thought k i can get that response too,

love you all for this

thankyou so much esp, minal.. ana. and krishnaluv... and i am sorry k aik ghanta thora ziada lamba hogya. but here is the update

enjoy reading and don't forget to comment

Part 30;

They entered the room together.

Geet tum yaha

Nai mera bhoot hai

thanks tum mere liye ai

Your welcome bro

Maan glared at him

Geet just turned his face to other side

Vickey inhai kaho k apna mu band kare or chup chap so jae yaha koi inse baat nahi kar raha

Bro aap k pass kan hai to sun liya hoga

Vickey

Vickey vickey karne ki zarorat nahi hai. Apne karname daikhe hai jo usko baat kar rahe ho

Vickey tum mere sath bahir chal k baitho In k pass baithna hi fazool hai.

Vickey kahi jane ki zarorat nahi hai mujhe kuch baat karni hai

Me aap dono k chakkar me nahi ara jis ne jisko jo khna hai khud kaho me caf jara ho bohat bhook lagi hai. Ate we aap dono k liye bhi kuch laita aoga. Tab tak enjoy

As soon as vickey left geet got up to go.when maan pulled her hand

Mera hath choro

Jab tak tum mere baat nahi suno gi tab tak nahi choro ga

Bolo

I am sorry

No need. I have forgiven the furniture fiasco

I lied to you

I know

What' you knew .. but

Can we leave this. I am a doctor I thought you would know k fake injuries nazar ajae ge mujhe

I am sorry

Don't you dare say a single word now. Get to sleep or I will injure you for sure

In the evening. When maan got discharged they came to the car geet driving maan infront and vickey in back seat

Geet was still not talking to him but maan being maan was still trying

They were going when her cell rang she put it on speaker.

Ji ma

Baita tu ghar nahi ai abhi tak sham hogai hai

Ha ma wo mujhe phone karna yad nahi raha

Kia hua puttar ji sabthk to hai na

Ha ma wo mere aik frnd hai na wo bemar hogai hai to me usko hospital le k gait hi abhi aati ho thoru dair me

Kia hua konsi frnd pinky

Nai ma aap nahi janti use Kaplan me bani thi maansi

Maan coughed

Geet gave him a deathly glare

Ha ma maansi. Wo kia hai na wo kafi darpok hai to andhere me dir gai or uska pair phinsal gya aur wo garhe me gir gai

Ab thk hai wo

Ha ma

Acha ma me bad me baat karo ge bye

She hang up

Vickey was grinning from ear to ear

Maan picked up geet's purse and threw it at his face

As they reached home geet dropped them home and left for her home

Vickey took maan to his room

Bro aap aram karo me khana mangwata ho

No I am not hungry I am gonna sleep tum jao

You sure

hmm

Vickey left

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hum tum aik kamre me😉😉😉😉😉

the rule is same more comments earlier the update

guys minal /maneet 56has teamed up with me so together we are creating this fiction team. so that we can give you regular and full of fun updates. as she says she is my assisstant so you better listen to her tooo😉

Edited by ssch - 14 years ago