Maaneet.. A new beginning THread # 1 - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part!!
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Vickey just sat there.frustated.. gai bhains pani me. Ab phir se nai kahani shoro karne pare ge
that's awsome
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...vicky making nice plans 2 make both of them understand but circumstances r not supporting...precape is very interesting...maan jelous...cont soon...plz give long update dis time..thanks 4 pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome Vickey no please dont take pannga with maan and geet dono tum ko fool bana ke apas mein hi eak ho jayenge awesome part thank you for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
bechara vicky...
kitne pappad belne pad rahe hain phir bhi kuch nahin ho raha hain...
uski sari mehanat mein pani pher rahi hain..poor him i think uske brain ke excess working se bechara pagal ho jayega...
waiting for the next update to c of whom maan is getting jealous
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh god!!!!hilarious...rofl...😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thankyou for your support. here is the update a longer one.
PART 15:

Geet was still standing her hands over her mouth. When a guy came and tapped her shoulder.

What ? she said irritated by his frank behaviour

Vickey kept on oogling at the intruder.are ab ye kabab me haddi kaha se aya.phle hi kuch set nahi hora uper se ye tapak para.plz God ye di ka frnd na ho.

Hey babe' what happened . u see a bit tensed . need help? He said while advancing toward him.

Geet started to take steps back. Listen just get lost

Come on baby. A beautiful girl should not remain helpless

Vickey just could not control anymore. He ran towards them but before he could approach them he came to an abrupt halt. A manly figure just dashed passed him zooming through the crowd,towards geet.the guy had cornered geet to the wall by now.and was about to touch her face when a strong hand stopped his hand and pushed him backward.

Maan was just coming out of the washroom when he saw the exchange.He didn't like the guy at all and when he started advancing toward her , his anger new no bound. He pulled him and started punching him left and right. The security ppl came .and after taking statements from witnesses they left and took that guy with them.

That was heroic. Vickey was still standing there looking at his bro

U alright'?

Geet nodded. Tears brimming her eyes.

Shhsshhh. No tears' he said while cupping her face.

She couldn't control any longer and hugged him while sobbing uncontrollably

Maan did not know anything . his body acted on it's own.he engulfed her in a bear hug aswell.

Shhhssshhh. Stop crying

U don't

Know . he'll come back.. he' always'. Do..

She said while sobbing

No he won't. I'll make sure. No body 's ever gonna hurt u..

No u don't know him

U trust me

she nodded yes.

Than keep that trust . That's maan singh khurrana 's promise.

Hmmm

Now smile

She smiled through her tears.

Frnds? She asked reluctantly'

He looked at her or a while. And then broke into a smile.

Yeah frnds

Pakka wala

What's that

Mean you will never leave me.

Yes

You will never break our frndship

Yes

Even when I tease you

Ohkayy

Even when I drop something at you

Ahaahha. He said now laughing uncontrollably.Geet handa is one of it's kind

Geet joined in too.

They moved to the nearby table and sat. chatting while Vickey was just standing there mouth wide opened..omg did I just see what I think I am seeing. Omg..it was that easy.aiwi itni try ki mene. Chal vickey frndship is a step towards love.ab tu aram ker let's see k Chicago pohnchne tak baat kaha tak pohanchi..

But no it was not that easy. Within mints they were again fighting eventually both stormed off to different directions.

There u go.God ye kia chez hai dono.

Finally the boarding call was made.they started to get back on plane. They settled themselvs back in there seats.

It was 9 hr long flight. They were so tired. And seats could not even be reclined fully s they had to just sit there. Maan was irritated by now. It was difficult for him to sit in such tiny space. With no space to strech his legs or recline his seat. He was sleepy but couldnot sleep cuz of uncomfortable posture. After 2 hrs when he looked at his side to see why the chatter box was silent.but the sight was disturbing for him

Geet was sleeping on her seat cudlled up as a ball. It was easy for her to do so cuz of her petite structure.She was sleeping peacefully.Maan could not . He was for the first time in his life jealous of something.

He can't fall asleep while she is..

no she can't. if i can't than nor can she. Kuch soch maan kuch soch'ha idea

he adjusted the head bulb in a way that it's light would directly fall in her eyes and switched on the light from his remote. After a mint or two of discomfort geet woke up . Maan smiled .satisfied at his victory and turned his face away to hide it but geet had seen it.

she smiled inwardly so mr. maan singh khurrana does know how to do mischief. Hmm let's see

why did u turn the light on .

I did not

That's the bulb that is control by your remote not mine. And why is it in my direction.

I don't know.he feigned ignorance.

You don't know or u don't wanna tell.

Why wd I do so

So that I can't fall asleep

Why wd I want that. Finally I had some peace. Why wd I wanna disturb myself by waking up a monster.

Did u just call me a monster

Yeah so

U evil brutus

Yeah yeah yeah

U . she just advanced towards him to pul his hair but cuz of the airpocket fell on his lap.

They were lost in there eyelock when the airhostess came there and cleared her throat.

Indescent behaviour is not allowed in this plane.

What? Both said in unison surprised

She pointed at them and then they noticed the awkward position they were in.

Geet jumped back to her seat.

No that's not what u are thinking

Whatever just be careful that it don't happen next time.

Both sat there awkward and silent. And then geet decided to break the ice but maan was asleep

Wah ji mujhe utha k khud so re hai. Abhi batati ho me

She switched on tha audio songs on his screen and turned the volume to maximum.than she carefully came out out of the seats.

She placed the head phones on his ears and undid the mute button..

Maan woke up with a start. Geet just ran to the washroom laughing

PRECAP:

GEEETTT''.😡

please comment i will not update untill i get atleast 4 or 5 pages of comments.
Edited by ssch - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

I feel sorry for the people on the plane...i mean its non-stop entertainment for Vicky but the other bechares wont know what hit them

Im loving it

Good going :-)


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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveeed it, was an awesome update.Its becoming interesting as want to know who was the person whose behind geet.Hope to see soon maaneet falling in love with each other.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome , Superb Part Love It Maan and geet make Vickey Maan and his shaitani i love it he dont let geet sleep 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆Maan and geet both shaitan no 1 Vickey tu gaya 😆😆😆😆😆

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