SS-Maan Geet ka Anokha Pyar -Part 13(last):Page 62 - Page 17

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Thank you every one for all you wonderful comments … ,loved reading them … How was the update let me know ……….. hope you like it …

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1 particular scene of dev is a request by my friends mona & Reena they wanted to see this scene in the episode … as we could not get it in the episode that day … it is shown in here in the SS … that small scene is dedicated to Mona & reena … on whose request I wrote it here …. It will me mentioned at that particular scene coz I don't want to reveal it right now …. I hope even you all enjoy that scene too …

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Before we continue … these will be the short forms we will be using

(Geet Maan Singh Khurana )GMSK

(Maan singh Khurana)MSK "aka"(Sardar Balwant Singh)SBS…

(Dev Singh Khurana)DSK or FAKE MSK ….

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Part 7:-

Maan was busy that day after his meeting with his geet & then his chat with DSK in the morning ….

Tejji sent MSK or SBS … on some work out … GMSK is waiting for him in her balcony ... geet was remembering the romantic moments they both spent together & was smiling to herself & was wishing for him to come back ASAP … as she was missing him …

Coming to DSK or FAKE MSK …. his day was too hectic after his chat with MSK …. He was taken to the barn / stable to take care of the cows , buffaloes , goats,hens … he had to feed them ,clean them & then milk the cows & buffaloes & clean the shed take care of the hens … give them fodder pick up the eggs … as we all know DSK never did those …

Now starts DSK ka new job …

so first when he tried to milk the buffalo it kicked him with his hind legs & lucky was ROFL seeing DSK's plight … finally after a few kicks here & there he succeeds in milking the buffalo … then he is supposed to clean the stinking shed … it was stinking coz of all the dung & everything … he had to pick up the dung …

[Mona & Reena this scene of dev's face falling in cow dung is as per your wish… enjoy… the entire underlined part is as per your request … ROFL]

There was dung every where in the shed … while he went to pick up the dung his foot fell on the dung which was in his way … his foot slipped & he fell flat on his face … & his face landed in the cow dung … dev's face was totally covered in dung …. his spectacles his face …. Everything …. Dung all over his shirt & pant …

Dev trying to clean the mess of his face ... was wiping his face of the dung & cleans his spectacles …

Dev to himself …. - God … what is my mistake why am I suffering like this … I have to go & have a bath again … yakkk … yakk yakk … but first I will wash my face ….

Lucky was literally ROFL laughing at DSK condition …. Dev finds his way to the water what the buffaloes drink … he then washes his face with that water … dev now is careful & he picks up the dung & collects it in a basket …

DSK is then asked to make cakes with the cow / buffalo dung & after making cakes of the dung he had to paste them to the wall of the barn…

DSK who already had a bath in the dung … he wanted to throw up because of the stinking smell he was getting when he was mixing it & was remembering his fall … he wanted to run away from there … but he could not as he was bounded by his word to his bro MSK ….

He was having a tough time to make the cake because he was unable to make the dung cakes to stick to the wall …. Finally he succeeds in making the right consistency for the dung cake so that it can stick to the wall … never in his life would have DSK imagined that he would do this job … ROFL … (me 2 I too never in my life thought would actually write this sort of scene … I know you girls must be thinking that how much I hate dev … that I am removing all my hatred in form of these updates … you got me right I hate dev to the core & want him punished severely …)

DSK is now asked to feed them … he is supposed to mix their food in a big bowl … while mixing their food … DSK finally pukes …

Lucky asks him to clean up the mess he created & leaves & informs him that in 30 min he will be waiting for him outside …. DSK finishes his adventure in the barn … takes a quick shower with cold water cursing his fate & gets ready & is taken to their fields …. In the fields now dev is asked to plough the fields .

Dev – ok … fine … give me a tractor …

Lucky – tractor … he he he he he …. Sorry … you will get a pair of ox.

Dev – ox …

Lucky – yes …

Lucky points to the ox … dev while walking towards the ox …

Dev to himself – god … where did I land …. Which era this family lives in … they made me milk the buffalo … then make cakes out of the dung & made me paste it to the wall … made me clean the mess made by the cattle & by me … & my fall in that …. Chi chi babaji …

Thinking about it … he felt like throwing up …

Dev to himself - is this the way they treat a son-in-law … or they have some animosity towards me … kiss janam ka badla le rahen ho bhagwan …

Gods angel popping out of thin air …

God's angel – arey muurakh agnaani paapi … yeh tere pichle janam ka badla nahin hain … yeh iss janam ke paap hain jo tujhe bhugath ne hain ….

God's angel – and 1 more thing … Now a days punishment policies have been changed … you will have to clear your sins & dues you have because of those sins in the same birth … not the next birth … samjhe …

Dev kneeling down – hey … bhagwan … please mujhe utaa lo …. I can't do this job … is this what DSK is left to …. No god I can't …

God's angel - but you promised your bro … that you would help him .

God's soul vanishes … Dev goes near the ox … holds the rope which is connected to the ox with his left hand & whip with his right hand & hits the ox with the whip …. as soon as he hits them with the whip to move …. He does not know what he landed himself to …. the ox run at jet speed …… making dev also run behind them …. Dev already toota phuta tha …. Poora toot gaya & he falls flat on his face … lucky who was watching him … was ROFL & was beating the ground as he was unable to control his laughter … dev finally he did not do a great job but was ok in it …

DSK is not MSk … so he cannot be perfect like our MSK in everything he does … Dev comes back & rests on his broken bed … he falls asleep as soon as he hits the pillow … as he was tired …

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In the mean While MSK calls dadima & asks her about karwa chauth & the rasams … dadima gives him instructions …

Dadima - how is geet …

Maan – she is fine …

Dadima – what about dev …

Maan – he is enjoying dadima …

Dadima – is it … maan how far were you successful in your mission patao Geet…

Maan – dadima … mission accomplished …

Dadima – then what is the delay … when will you all come back …

Maan – there are some screws to be tightened dadima … (maan meant geet's masi ki family … they need to be set right & then he also needs to take their consent & permission to take geet back home …)

Dadima – tighten some screws … maan what are you talking …

Maan – dadima it's a long story … after coming back to delhi … I will tell you this long story shortened … will keep you informed … bye dadima … take care of your health …

Dadima – you to take care maan bete … don't worry I will be fine … you take care of geet … bye …

Maan & dadima's conversation ends …

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Maan comes back to masi home … maan is now standing in the ground floor in front of geet's balcony & geet in her balcony … both are having eye lock … just then lachi enters playing with her choti & informs maan that tejji was waiting for him … lacchi misses maan & geet's eye lock & the looks these 2 were giving each other … lacchi leaves & maan sends flying kiss to geet … which geet catches …. & geet in turns gives him a flying kiss which he too accepts …

Maan leaves from there … tejji & maan both go out to do the shopping for karwa chauth … they finish the shopping & come home late in the night … everyone's already slept …

when they were shopping maan texts geet & informs her to keep the balcony door open & he will come later in the night & he also informs her that to sleep alone & not to allow any one to sleep with her …

It 's around 3:30 in the morning … maan takes a ladder & climbs into geet's balcony with the sargi in one of his hand … maan enters geet's balcony with the sargi … keeps the sargi on the table & then wakes up geet … they both hug each other … maan plants a kiss on her forehead …

Geet – maan … what made you come here at this hour …

Maan – why are you not happy to see me …

Geet - Aren't you tired & are you not feeling sleepy ….

Maan – when it comes to you … I don't care if I am tired or sleepy …

Geet – maan … it's not like that … what if some one spots you with me.

Maan – I have taken enough care … no one will watch us … by the way … you think that everyone in your masi house have no work & they will be roaming in the house like a ghost at this hour …

Geet – I don't know about other's but I doubt mamaji … he caught us so many times …

Maan laughing – kaun tumhara bhulakkad mama … he starts his search then in the middle it self he forgets what he is searching ….

Geet – so tho hain …

Maan - chalo … stop this topic first & eat this … before it's too late …

Maan pulls out some fruits from the sargi plate & hands over to geet … dadima asked me to give this to you on her behalf … eat this & start your fast … maan feeds geet apple , banana , grapes ,oranges ,mango with his hands & simultaneously geet also feeds him … they both eat the sargi & then hug each other once more & maan leaves …

As soon as maan leaves … pammi knocks the door geet thanks her babaji that maan was not caught & some one knocked after maan left … geet opens the door & pammi enters with some food for geet …

Pammi – here have this food ….

Geet – again … I have to eat …

Pammi looking around for maan …

Pammi – what again … you ate some thing just now … did Maan ji come.

Geet nods her head in a yes …

Pammi – where is he …

Geet – he left ….

Pammi – is it … chalo … achi baath hain … then I will leave … he has taken care of you before us … this shows how much he loves you …

Geet – yes … I know he loves me a lot …

Pammi – then what is the problem … speak to beeji ...

Geet – maan wants to win her & tejji veerji … he wants to take me home with respect …

Pammi – babaji … unki madad karenge … chalo … I will leave now … u take rest …

Geet – ok …

Geet gets dressed up & wants maan to have a look at her … she is looking for maan in the house … geet is wearing what maan bought for her as sargi maan bought 2 dresses for her one to wear in the morning & another to wear in the night … she wanted to know his opinion …

geet comes to know that maan is being sent out on some work or the other & he was quite busy since morning … it's afternoon ….

Geet is feeling hungry but is controlling her hunger … everyone is decorating the house … maan is also decorating the house …. Geet comes around … she spots maan & maan too spots her …. Both have an eye lock … maan is totally blown over by her beauty … geet's hair flying … she was looking gorgeous …

He quickly dissappears from their …. Geet was surprised as she saw maan a moment ago & now he disappeared …. But Maan he comes quietly from the back closes her mouth & pulls her behind a pillar & then pins her to the pillar … both have an eye lock ….

Geet – maan … what are you doing … that too in front of everyone …

What will happen if we get caught …

Maan – meeshti … everyone is busy … so don't worry …

Geet – don't worry … you don't know what will happen if they see you romancing me & pinning me to the pillar …

Maan – geet … come with me …

Maan quickly takes her to the terrace … without any one noticing … Once they are in terrace … Maan pulls her towards him & hugs her … geet too reciprocates his hug …

Geet – maan … what are you planning for tonight … how are you going to break my fast … did you think about it or not …

Maan – geet …. Don't worry … have faith in me … I will break your fast in front of your whole family as promised to you earlier …

Geet – maan I am feeling hungry …

Maan – then break your fast …

Maan pulls out an apple from his pocket …

Maan – yeh lo … have it …

Geet – maan I don't want to eat anything … I am fasting for you … I wanted to share it with you that I am feeling hungry ... that's all …

Maan – then what do you want me to do … bring the chanda mama down for you …

Geet – haan … you can do it naa … any how … you talk so much about chanda mama … every day & night & some times your love letters also have chanda mama talks so I thought that may be chanda mama will listen to you & might come now it self so that I can break my fast early ….

maan comes out of the hug …

Maan – geet are you making fun of my chanda mama (moon)talks …

geet looking at maan's face …

Geet – nahin tho … meri ithni majal … ki main Maan Singh Khurana ki moon talks ya astronomy classes ke gyan ke baren main kuch kahun.

Maan – what do you mean geet …

Geet – aur nahin tho kya … jab dekho tab … your talks always have moon … stars … sun … in them & ab tho aap ped paudho ko bhi shamil kar liya aap ke talks main & letter main … me & my brain are so small … some times I don't understand your moon talks … can't you make them simple & straight …

Maan – oh you find it difficult to understand … I thought you love the moon talks that's why I try to bring moon into the conversation …

Geet – maan … in the beginning everything looks nice & I loved the moon talks … but you keep on repeating the moon talks … now I am bored … listening to them … sometimes I feel sleepy also maan … because there are only talks from you & no action …

Maan – oh is it … my moon talks make you feel sleepy … & you want some action from me …

Geet – yes …

Maan – so you want action … I am ready for it now it self & what about you …

maan quickly grabs her hand & pulls her with full force towards him that she twirls around & comes face to face with him & then falls on him with her hands on his shoulders & with her hair brushing over his face …. maan takes her hair off his face with his left hand & is holding geet by her waist with his right hand & is now using his other hand to make geet get close to him by Pressing geet towards him so that she is very very close to him … now geet too coils her arms around maan's shoulders & maan holding geet tightly in his embrace … maan is closing in the space between them … next he is closing in the space in between their lips … he was about to seal her lips with his … Maan & geet hear that they are calling for SBS & GMSK …

maan – kabab main haddi … spoiled my mood … your family members naa can't even work them selves they always need SBS with them

Geet – maan before they catch us … come lets go …

Maan – first I will leave then you come after 5 min …

Maan leaves & geet follows him after 5 min … mamaji again spots them coming down the stairs one by one … & thinks that he needs to solve the case of MSK … before he goes crazy ….