MG SS:Pyaar Kareoge Mujhse! ***Will Update Soon*** - Page 14

Originally posted by: Simran_14

loved it... 😃

Originally posted by: smallville

Awesome !!!
Update soon ...

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh

Deepti di ur story is just superb... It was awesome feeling great after reading all the parts and u know what i liked the Geet and Maan (oops! Why to seperate them) i mean Maaneet u presented... I loved ur style of naming all siblings with G i.e. GEET GAUTAM GAURI GUNN... And wow Geet is staying with Maan... It was really superb... And Geet worried 4 Maan and here too talking non stop wow! And Mamaji is awesome... I loved Maan talking to his mami... It touched me... Hope Gautam doesnt do anything wrong... Plz plz post the next part soon.. Me waiting... Lovely... :-)

Originally posted by: rajeev the best

deeps superb dear loved it..

Maan slowly touches her face with one hand (as other hand is bandaged)...

pulls her chin up looks at her lips... brings her lips near to his and...

they keep looking at each other... maan looks at rosebud lips... and brings his hand to touch her..

Maannn...

Both of them come out the the moment and in shock...

Geet suddenly says... main dekhthi hoon...

and she goes to open the room and Maan keeps looking at her...

Geet opens the door and sees Gautam...

Geet: Gautam tum bula rahe the kya Maan ko

Gautam: ji didi aur aup yahan pe kyua kar rahe ho???
aur yeh Maan kahan hai..

Geet: what is this Gautam... Maan ko bahi bol...

Gautam: kyun bolu.. kaun hai woh mera.. aur didi aap kuch bhi bolu main sab jaanthi hoon... and he enters the room...

Maan keeps looking at the young guy... who was staring at him rudely...

Gautam: ok.. Main Gautam hoon Geet didi ke bhai.. yahan pe jo bhi kuch ho raha hai sab pata hai mujhe...

aur agar mere didi ko rulaya tho main aapke saath kya karunga yeh mujhe bhi nahi pata...

aur khabardar... didi chalo aap mere saath uncleji bula rahe hai aapko...

Geet looks at Maan and Maan back.. in awe at the protectiveness shown by Geet's brother...

geet goes out with Gautam...

maan goes out to the door and hears so much laughter sop much chehel pehel in the house...

Geet goes down and sees mamaji on the floor with gunn and guari and they are fighting for something with mamaji laughing!!...

geet beta...

ji mamaji.. humare gunna aur gauri bhi na...thanks beta... itna khusi laane keliye is ghar mein...

yeh ghar sookha hua tha... tumne aakar pyaar se bhar diya...

Geet: mamaji aap bhi na...

Nakul comes and asks... ji memsahab...woh kya soup banana hai...

Geet looks at mamaji and nakul and says... nakul sahab...(nakul looks shocked)...aap mujhe geet hi pukariye ok.. aur aap mujhse bade hi ho aaur mere mein aur aap mein koi andar nahi hai ok..

Mamaji looks at nakula dn geet and says.. maine bola na.. nakul..geet meri savi ki chavvi hai... bilkul savi part 2...

Geet smiles...

aur soup main banatha hoon...

She makes the soup and paratta and takes it to Maan's room..

She goes and knocks..sees no response.. tries to open the room and sees maan sleeping...

keeps the food tray near the table and goes to wake up maan...

Geet goes and sits near the bed and brings her hand to to his hair...slowly caresses his hair.. and seeing maan waking up she gets up from the bed and and maan pulls her hand to him and geet falls directly on Maan chest on chest... with all her hair on his face...

Geet slowly tries to get up but her duppatta is stuck under him and both are tangled in such a way that neither of them ccan escape nor want to escapre..

Geet slowly nbring her hand to his stubble.. and looks at him and Maan brings his hand to her bare back... and slowly carresses it...

Geet closes her eyes feeling a jolt of excitement in her stomach.. Maan keps on caressing her ... Geet moves..and

Maan: aaahhh ouch...

Geet kya hua tikh hai aap?

Geet tries to get up and Maan too...says: woh main soup laayi thi...

Maan( teasingly): acha.. kal ki tarah.. yeh to nahi soch liya na.. ki ghar pe acha khana nahi miltha,...(she blushes)

Geet: kya... yeh main yahan ghar main banaya tha...

(Maan smiles hearing Geet say ghar...) keeps looking at her... Geet embarassed and moves towards the door saying

jo aapko abhi peena hai.. agar acha na lage tho bol dena ok????

Maan looks at her parattas on the tray and says... mujhe indian khane se zyaada italian dishes pasand hai...

Geet face goes down.. and sad. she says ok.. and gets up then turns seeing maan struggling with his left hand... and she comes and says de dijiye...main pilathi hoon aapko...

and he makes place for her to sit and she puts the pillow vertical and asks him to slowly lie on that and sit...

Geet comes near to him and sits and slowly blows the hot soup and maan seeing geet blowing with her lips feels a shock of desire to somehow kiss those delectable lips...

maan keeps looking at her face, around the face, her eyes.. seeing her blowing the soup and showing it towards him...

Geet calls Maan... yeh lo peelo...

and slowly she feeds him the whole soup...

maan was so busy looking at her and he didnt even know when he ate the paratta too... and geet was wiping his face and when she gets up..

maan says.. woh mujhe bhook lagi hai.. paratta bhi khilao...

Geet stunned... paratta tho aapne kha liya.. aur chahiye... aur aap keh rahe the ki aap italian khana hi khate hai...

bahut nakre baazi karthe ho aap...main lekar aathi hoon..

Geet smiles and get out of maan's room.. but her mind is full of excitement with maan's touch!!...

she goes down and sees gautam scolding gunn for tearing a paper and geet gets angry and calls out Gautam.. upar aao... Gautam...

Gautam comes up and maan sees him passing his door...and decide to follow him...

Gautam comes to Geet's room..: Gautam what is this.. tum aise kyun behave kar rahi ho bacha...how will gunnn feel when you keep scolding her for anything and everything.. gunn tumhe kitnma pyyar karthi hai... ur tumhe pata hai na woh tumhare gusse se bahut dartha hai.,..( Maan at geet's door hearing this)

aur young man... thats not the way to speak to elders.,..

Gautam.. who was facing down till now looks up and asks... elders.. what did i do now...

geet: tumne kis tarah maan se baat ki... i didnt like it...(hearing this maan smiles)

Gautam: mujhe woh acha nahi lagtha,,. jisne meri didi ko itna majboor kiya hua hai...

Geet: lekin Gautam aisa kuch nahi hai.. bacha.. please understand.. he is a very nice man... he will be a brother to you..

Gautam: i am goin didi.. and he goes out and sees Maan standing there... gives him a glare...

and goes out...

Geet sits on bed thinking.. suddenly gets up thinking maan wanted more food.. anmd goes out...

kamoiniii

nice update...waiting for fighting :)

Loool lets see how maan tries to convince mamaji that geet is not his wife. Loool mamaji telling geet that she can fill maan's house with kids. So sweet. I think first maan needs to been convinced about marriage.

Loool love how geet starts to talk before maan can say a word in. so sweet that geet brings food for maan.

Lovely part di... Hmmm Gautam a possesive bro thats nice... Loved when Maan ate the whole parantha and then asked parantha b khila do... And yeah di the siblings have cute names... Cntinue soon me waiting...

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