(MG) Two Angels FF Part: 6: 11/25/11 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: sindu555

priya ... give it a title .



i havent think about title yet..........but feel free to suggest 😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: mchopra

Priya: lo ji ek mystery solve nnahi hui ek aur suljhao..i will be waiting for more..



Sorry 😆......... i promise wont stretch mystery long..... thank you for comment 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting.... do add me to yr pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

A BIG THANK YOU TO EVERYONE FOR UR SUPPOT…… I HOPE I DON'T DISAPPOINT YOU ALL

The following 25 member(s) liked the above post: bhakbhartifan, apeksha_gupta, Maaneet_Deewani, scorpiodreams, mansijani21, manashi, melody_quest, kkaavvyyaa, nan_10, Ramhari, sakadafi, gcddfan, Shalve, MaaneetLuverr, Dilsay, silkyarora, -jia-, pickachu, sindu555, shah10, simi91, jyoti_l, muskanp, PrithviSanyo1, mchopra,

PrithviSanyo1: thank you rakhi

MaaneetLuverr: thank you so much

nan_10: thank you

Ramhari: thank you HIMA….. LOL can't afford to get sue… u see…. Yeah whole family is there…… wait till you sees what they have done…….. they surely are going to give everyone shock after shock

Pickachu: thank you…….promise will not stretch mystery longer

Muskanp: well I did put note there so you cant sue me……hehehe…….well about TWINS being evil……You have to wait and watch…….. lage raho with Maan drooling sessions……. Thank you for commenting……..its means lot

-jia-: Promise…….don't stretch mystery longer…….thank You for comment

shah10: thank you

simi91: katemasi……thanks for commenting

smallville: thank You

melody_quest: thank You

scorpiodreams: thank You

Dreamy_Mystique : thank you Reva

Dilsay: Thank You

Maaneet_Deewani: thank you…..thts y I put note …..asking her not to sue...lol

Gcddfan: thank you

Silkyarora: thank you

mona1992: thank you

jyoti_l: thanks Jyoti….well ur questions will be answer in next two updates

mansijani21: thank you

-dia-: thank you Dia

Shalve: thank You

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Disclaimer: I have read n still read many FFs on Maaneet…… if my story does reflect any of others writers work(s)……. It would only be UNINTENDED…….. I NEVER NOR I WISH TO COPY ANYONE WORKS….. BUT IF IT DOES PLEASE LET ME KNOW BEFORE TAKING ANY STEPS…….. THANK YOU 😳

PART:- 2

SHE didn't wait for car to stop complete before getting out of it……..SHE literally jump out…..n…….making her way toward main door of mansion…….or……..should I say running HER way from parking lot to main door……. SHE thought…. SHE heard someone one calling HER to stop……may be HER fried….. who was parking car…….but SHE was in no state to hear anything nor SHE care who was calling her……..bc SHE wasn't going to stop……..how could SHE ……. Definitely not when her mind was occupied by HER ANGELS (who are more related to DEVILS and certainly NO where never being ANGELS)……but they were HER's ……..NO…NO.. one can stop HER…. when something has to do with HER ANGELS…….she didn't care who was chasing HER……all SHE care was to see HER ANGELS ……Fit n Fine……Just one glimpse of them….…that's all SHE was thinking right now……just one glimpse…...n….rest SHE will deal later……nothing is more important than HER ANGELS…….SHE almost trip over many times……but that didn't stop HER……how could SHE ……SHE has to see HER ANGELS first…..SHE was calling out for them….silently praying to hear THEM call HER back….…guards almost caught up to HER…..yelling and screaming trying to HER to stop

SHE: MANSI ……..MEET…….almost scream entering dining hall area……… giving everyone shock of their life………SHE did stop….. When she saw what SHE wanted to see……..HER ANGELS…….. FIT n FINE……and…HER lips parted involuntary giving away a small relief smile….. While tears run down one after another on her cheeks

OMG-- was the only word someone manage to say..…some blink few times…..just to check if they were not dreaming…and….. Others couldn't even blink…..because even if they were dreaming they certainly didn't want to lose any chance to see HER..…the look on THEIR face was like they have seen dead person walking alive nearly after decade… no not nearly….it's almost a decade…….they all just barely began trying to compensate what was happening….. Before they could even fully recover from one shock……

Mansi and Meet: OOOHHHHH…….NOOOOOOOO………MOMMMMMMMMM 🤢 🤢……….THERE COMES ANOTHER SHOCK for everyone…..……when THEY heard TWINS calling HER….MOM…. and run toward HER…….. Leaving all of them back to square one again

PLEASE.....Do leave comments 😳........will be waiting for it ...... Do leave any suggestions....... Everything is WELCOME 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Im sorry..... i know its SHORT.........I have class and lots of HW😭......... but i promise to give you long update this weekend.........its PAKA Promise 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMDZ this is fricking awesome!

Please update soon and add me to your PM list

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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Priya sweety awesum updates
amazing ff
luved every bit of it
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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priya....😡...itni short update....

u just left me more confused...no no...some Q were answered....like she was dead but now came back....

but the twins recognized her...how?? from where??

will be waiting for u to update...

PS -- awesome update...👏....😆...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
you are building up the curiosity well.....so much to reveal....thanks for a shocking & small update😉

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