~maitri~ maaneet FF THREAD 2 UPDATED 1may - Page 79

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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful part. loved it.
loved maaneet scene and conversation.
aww maan seducing geet at the airport .
geet's blushing , maan know his effect on geet.
hay deshi khana kahke dole shole ho gaye maan ki and credit goes to geet.
loved this name machchar pehelwan🤣
geet will compare Ballu with Maan
mana thinks it's better to eat those paratha.
poor maan 🤣
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
muskaan i really like their friendship...:) wondering wat wud be the flashback😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hahaha poor nakul what start of morning🤣 geet ne sabki neend kharab kar di ...

what part 16 was so so short😔 ... but it was awesum nd i loved it ...geet has changed ...naah actually both have changed ... maybe she knws now better he is not macchar pehelwaan ...😆 nd she is not at all innocent now 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
Are you starting a new thread?
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it...mechar pehlwan was hilarious...loved the funny part...update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb part...loved it to the core.
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet comparing our maan wiz ballu...this will b so worth reading...continue soon...i loved this part...amazing...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part... Maan seducing Geet at airport...hehehee
But why this part was so short... How do U expect us to give long comments for such short parts!!!! Just kidding!!! I know U write 3 FFs with diff concepts...so it maybe difficult for U... Its OK!!!
Flashback was hillarious!!! Lovd Geet's poking Maan... I don't want her to go back to Mumbai so sooon...Cont sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago

~maitri~
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he rested his chin on her shoulder..tumne kya socha.. he was loving to see her blush
she pushed his forehead with her fingers & dipped her shoulder, still blushing.
The final call for the passengers was made. Geet bit a upper lip .so ..
so it is.. it .. he sighed
she weakly smiled & nodded & turned to leave.
She walked few steps halfheartedly.. dodo he said it in tears. She turned to meet his teary eyes with own burning to pour. He caught her just as she reached the entrance, catching her arm & whirling her around. Won't u hug me.. he mocked still with tears in his eyes & hauled her into his arms. He held her plastered to him from knee to chest. He squeezed her closer, she yielded to his sudden act as furiously as he did. She hit his chest.. I miss u. he released her abruptly & cupped her face. His thumb rubbed the tears away & he placed a long deep peck on her forehead. I miss u too.

Somehow she had lost the ability to breathe & it didn't matter. She felt dazed, mired in unreality.. this was the man she loved.. there couldn't be any more fooling herself. She knew her vulnerability to him. She had warned herself the danger of letting herself fall in love with him. But it was long lost. She couldn't have control herself anymore infront of him, especially the way her body reacted to him. She fretted herself the pain.. she cherished their togetherness, falling in love more & more without any pain. But now it was way too hard to deny the pain of parting him, it just poured out of her eyes, she didn't say word.. simply turned & walked pass the gate. He stood silently glaring as she walked to the security gate & got in.
he drove back with a very strange feel in his heart. The pain in her eyes was something he had seen before & now he understood it differently, still not sure wat he understood was right. He was still struggling to understand his new emotions for her. He was not sure wat was it about her that he felt so attracted to her. Their feelings were not so shallow to fall for her skirts & sarees... but yah she looked killing!! he removed his shirt & threw it on the bed. He turned around & checked himself... damit..dodo is making me feel conscious... dam!! only she could. ..he laughed at his plight.. he actually bend his arms.. & pressed his biceps.. machar phelwan!!! no.. ways..

she sat in the flight crying... she had denied herself these tears all past 8 years.. they had to flow.. & they did. Se had been strong all these years... since she knew they were friends just friends... & she didn't want to spoil all this over her feelings. But after being in his arms.. feeling differently.. knowing that he felt differently .. now denying these tears didn't help..her heart refused to deny her its secret now. She felt she couldn't have held herself back any further. But she had to ..knowing Maan how he handled his relations.. how emotional & confused he gets ?she was taken to the day when he had his first broke up with his girl friend Soniya in th eend of 2nd semister.

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She was watching her fav cartoon programe, holding ballu in her lap & combing him & trying to tie a pony for him while eating her snack. Maan came back home with a long face. She offered him the apple she was eating, he walked pass her ignoring the offer. He slammed the door shut of his room.
Ballu isse kya huwa.
He looked at the door & then her
oye aaj tho Soniya ka bday plan kiya tho na issene
ballu nodded
phir itni jaldi kaisen aagaya
even ballu wondered now.
Kuch gadbad hogeyeen kya?
She knocked the door. He didn't answer.
Genie
he covered his head in the pillow
genie!!!
genie!!!
Maan was really upset. They had been together for 3months. He thought every thing was so beautiful between them & then all this that too on her bday. He had been planning this for so many days. She was really special. He wanted to sulk running away from his heart break.
Genie
dodo go away...
genie..main aur ballu andhar aa rahen hain
dodo..shoo...

she sneaks inside the room carrying ballu in her hand.
He throws the pillow at her.. go away..dodo... I don't want to talk to u
mujhe bhi tum se baat nahi karni

he was even more irritated, she didn't seen to understand his pain.
she slowly climbs the bed, he pulls the spread over him & turns the other side. She jumps & straddles on his back. He was taken by a shock.
Dodo wat r u doing on my BACK.. he yells
mujhe aur ballu ko horsy ride karni hain
dodo let go of me...mera mode kharab hain

she totally ignores him.. & lifts ballu & make him sit on Maan as well. She puts her dupatta around maan's neck & holds it like, she is riding a horse.. chal mera ghode tick tick.. she waks his back...
Maan jerks them off..she lands on the floor hurting her elbow. He closes his eyes in frustration of hurting her now. He immediately lifts her. She was all with her big tears crying like a baby now.. ghode ne gira diya...
ballu .. yeh ghoda nahi hain.. yeh kachar hain.. booo...😭😭😭


Precap
Maan manofying Geet.. or was it Geet cheering him up!!!

-PREV PART 16-
thanks a lot for the warm welcome to maitri
love u all a lot
please please comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Me waiting



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me second i was toh waiting but got the update it was vry vry nice started on a naughty note and ended on a funny one the horse riding part was vry funny . Yeh ghora nahi khachar hai ... Lol th was hillarious
Edited by 20tullip2000 - 14 years ago

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