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Shimmerr thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok dear...

me still waiting😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l


i'm fine...
prep only ok...
when is the exam??

Its confusing...😕

on 2nd

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-

Its confusing...😕

on 2nd


u confused abt exam...😲...🤣
u still have 4 days...all the best...😆...👍🏼

Shimmerr thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Keya you love it to tortue us with waiting!!!!!!!!!!

Still here...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l


u confused abt exam...😲...🤣
u still have 4 days...all the best...😆...👍🏼

not abt the exam,but abt the subject

well,Thank u🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

not abt the exam,but abt the subject

well,Thank u🤗


its mobile computing ...right??🤔

lot of algo n derivation n all...technical...

ur welcome...🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

not abt the exam,but abt the subject

well,Thank u🤗


its mobile computing ...right??🤔

lot of algo n derivation n all...technical...

ur welcome...🤗

yesss

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Posted: 14 years ago
Remorse
Part 72



Maan "I want to cook worth your hand!"
Geet looked at him blankly. Out of her expression. She couldn't conclude exactly is this the same maan or another illusion. Illusion it is. His caring something she did not want to feel yet he was putting her in a situation where nothing could be brought back. I wasn't sure exactly what he was doing to me... I need time. I need to go way. I need some space to breath. I was not sure in which way he was lurking me in his trap... Not sure at all... Instead of kitchen he took me in to the bedroom...
Geet "that's not bedroom!"
Maan "pata hi!"
Geet "I need to cook!"
Maan "pata hi! I need to start where Left off!" geets cheek went pink. What was he talking abou. Something even her self could not alert to that. He gently took her in... Bedroom was clean now. Geet managed to tyde everything up but it seems like it will go in vain...
He gently puts her on the bed & himself on her. Maan gently strokes her cheek. Geet closes her eyes instantly. Not knowing how to react exactly...
Maan "your parents are coming next week!" geet nodes gently. "I have a big plan for them!"
Geet "I don't want them here!..." she replied honestly. Devs plan was still lingering somewhere in her mind & shorias death wasn't exactly a coincident! She needs to find the whole truth out soon! In no way she could put there life in danger for her! "I will tell you when to bring them"
Maan "why?" he wondered... But he could see some type of worry on her face. What was bothering her within. Something... Why she wasn't sharing it with him... Maan did not like that at all. Her worry... He knew well geet will not trust him. Her blind trust he broke it so brutally that nothing will ever repair but he can try. Thats all...
Maan "you not going to say why?" both looks at one another eyes... Lost along with thousand question... Geet nodes for a no...
Maan smiles.. He wasn't sure exactly why.. Was it because he understood that there are something bothering her or the fact she refuges to trust... Either way he just kissed her. There lips tightly locked together. He gently parts her lips with his. Nibbling. Passionate. The lower lip was so soft & gentle. It shivered underneath him. & same was in geets way. She did kiss him back... But thats how far it will go... She slowly slides her hand round his neck.
Maan "I love you..." geet smiles hearing those words as maan gently travels round her cheek the her neck to her collar bone. Geet slowly looks stretches her underneath him. His touch had shiver. A specially shiver. Maan slowly takes all her cloths leaving her bare. A shower of kiss flows at the back... Geet clenched her pillow with every touch.




Her every cell became alive under him. There was gentle redness on her skin. A small redness left everywhere where he sucked the skin. Geet stood on her knee when maans hand slides from the back on her bare stomach. Geets body stiffens. Showing maan what effect he had on her, he removed all the hair from the side. Kissing her cheek. Her shoulder line. He gently brush his lips along her smooth shoulder line. Holding her hand. Engulfing his finger with her. Geet moaned. Only to let him know to stop. But it went too far. It was beyond her control. Both lands back on the bed. Geet laid on her stomach. Silently. Shivering with his gentel touch... While maan couldn't stop kissing. Every flesh he could possibly see.

Maan slowly layes on his back bringing geet on top of him... Her hair covered there face. ...
Maan smiled. Smelling her sweet aroma... Then eventually twisted back.. Knowing gete would not do anything...
Maan "do you!" geet did not let him speak as her lips covered his. She parts her leg... Letting him...

After 2 hours... Geet slowly opens her eyes.
Maan "tume mujce kabhi chor ke to math jage!" she smiles & slids her hand round his chest. Coming back to his embrace.
Geet "why would you think that!"
Maan " I feel like you will leave me!"
Geet "if I cant cope with everything then yes... Yes I will leave!" maan instantly pines her to the bed. "aisa kahbi soch na bhi math."
Geet "ku?"
Maan "because I will die!... I dont know how will I able to survive.. I dont know how will I show.."
Geet "show your love!... You dont know how to show your love!.. You dont know anything about love. You don't know anything about anyone... How could you express your love!"
Maan "I love you!"
Geet "you know nothing about me!... You know me for long tim yet you failed to understand your heart.. Then how could you love me?"
Maan "aisa math kaho!"
Geet "this is the fact... I am yours.. But you are not my!"
Maan cups her cheek... He tried again to read her eyes.. But there was nun... No question... Geet was not share how to react to him or in which way she should tell him that.. Nothing he claiming is not love at all.. Its attraction. Pure attraction...
Geet "what if 2moro you find out I am dead! What will you do?"
Maan looks at her in shock... Scared.. Scared of not seeing her like he did back in those years.. Thats true.. Month after month.. Year & after year.. They used to meet once... Back then... He was a fool.. Failed to understand his love.. But how will he survive if geet leaves him now... How will he?



next -Part 72
Part 73
Part 74

thanks for alll the love & support.. ok.. a
new story line will be introduced from heer...
lol.. i planned for 2...
well going for the second one.. you will see what is it...
hopeful this will take us to many new parts...
:)
&
i hope you all will find it interesting..
there are some hints...
so
:D
xxx

do comment...
xxx

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
first of all...me first...🥳...after such a long time......loving it...😃

now abt the update...it was...simply beautiful...👏...loved it...👏

i thought he was going to cook...😆...n i was hoping to c some romance in the kitchen...not that i mind what he did instead of cooking...😉

I need time. I need to go way. I need some space to breath.-- is this ur idea of the new story?? geet going away from maan n he letting her/...no way..i mean she might go away but maan will not let her n if she did ...he will just go mad looking for her,,,,...

n ye dev ka plan kab pata chalega?? n coz of that geet is still not sure what to do...n what he is upto??

shorias death wasn't exactly a coincident! She needs to find the whole truth out soon!==is this the 2nd part of the story also?? geet searching for the truth??

jab maan knows she will not say anything then he should not ask rather try to find out in his own way...he is MSK after all...but i think he has lost himself so much that he...that he...🤔...is not able to look beyond her...n if he not able to look beyond her then he should try to bring her back...the same old geet...he should talk to kesar abt it...to know his geet...

their lovemaking was,,,...☺️☺️...i know coz of restrictions u werent able to give us detail...😆..but it was good...n geet kissing him back...that was the best part...😳...at least she is also trying...or trying to know that is this her maan whom she loved so much n now he loves her...

maan still has the fear that geet will leave him...n she never said that she will always be with him...so i guess the fear will always be there...

geet still doesnt feel love from his side...i guess he has to try harder to make her realize that he loves her...she is his life...

n the Q that she asked him in the end...he has no answer...coz he never thought abt it...he never thought abt her leaving him...never thought abt death...never thought will he survive...??

i'm just waiting for their special world...where there will be no remorses...just them will their painful love...cocooned in their remorses n loving each other...


A SPECIAL WORLD...

a special world for u and me
a special bond one cannot c
it wraps up up in its cocoon
n holds us fiercely in its womb

its fingers spread like fine spun gold
gently nestling us to the fold
like silken threads it holds us fast
bonds like this are meant to last

and though at times a thread may break
a new one forms in its wake
to bing us closer and keep us strong
in a special world we belong...

--- by Sheelagn Lennon
Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Beautiful part...loved it!!!!

Passionate one,but still something is missing.

eagerly waiting for the new storyline,

looking forward to know how u r unfolding the story.

wonderful update!!!!

Edited by -dia- - 14 years ago

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