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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 309
inside d kitchen, maaneet r lost in each others eyes
outside d kichen, teji,jugnu mama,adi,lucky n lachi r wondering y d kitchen door is locked from inside
teji:oye darwaza kyun band hai?
jug:maanu was screaming. zarur koi problem hai
teji knocks d door
teji:oye maan! open d door
jug also knocks d door..
jug:oye maanu! andar kya kar rah ho?darwaza kholo. i'll come n save u
maaneet both come out of their trance. geet is scared n she whispers in maan's ears
G:maan! teji virji n jugnu mama are knocking d door. if they saw us now, what 'll happen. it's all because of u
M: me?
G:haan
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 310
teji n jugnu r still knocking @ d kitchen door. adi,lucky n lachi r watching silently.
maaneet r arguing inside
M:maine kya kiya?
G: y did u scream that loudly?
M: y did u punch me that hardly?
G: ab ye sab chodiye. bahar jane ke liye kuch sochiye
M: kyun? tumari dimag band hogayi kya? tum socho
G:mein kyun sochu?
M:kyunki tum kabhi sochthi hai nai
G:dust danav

teji&co hears d whispering sound from insided kitchen
jug: oye teji puttar! maanu ke sath andhar koi aur hai?
tej: haan mamaji. mujhe bhi yesa hi lagta hai
adi: par wo kaun hai?
jug:koi ladki ke awaz aarahi hai
tej:ladki?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 311
maaneet r still fighting inside(IS) d kitchen by whispeing. hearing d outside(OS) conversation, they stop their fight, come close to d door, put their ears on d door n overhear d outside convo.

OS...
teji:ladki?
jug: haan puttar! mujhe lagta hai ki roseyi me,maan aur wo ladki ke peech kuch kuch chal raha hai

IS...
maaneet r shocked

OS...
adi:mamaji! maan sir yesa aadmi nai hai

IS...
maan smirks n geet smiles

OS...
jug:oye bunty chup kar. i can hear them whispering inside. iska matab kuch hai...

IS
G:(whispers)maan! ab hum kya karenge?
M:(whispers)ficker math kar geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 312

OS..
lucky: o mame! if something something is going on inside, then y did maan ji scream?

IS..
M:geet! in ur entire family atleast lucky's brain works
G:chup

OS..
jug:nai lucky! i'm damn sure. some thing is going on inside

IS..
G:ye jugnu mama bhi na?he is thinking himself of a James Bond
M:ye tho Jugnu Band hai geet
G:ji

OS...
tej:u r RIGHT mamaji.something is WRONG
jug: oye teji puttar! y r u confusing?say clearly if it is RIGHT or WRONG
tej:u r RIGHT but something is WRONG
jug: what do u want 2 say?something is WRONG wid me?

IS..
geet starts to laugh n maan is lost in her
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet starts to laugh n maan is lost in her


Hai!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 313
OS..
tej:nai mamaji...
jug:sshhh.. now all of u listen carefully. they r laughing inside
all others silently listen to geet's laughter n say in chorus: u r right mamaji
jugnu mama smirks

IS...
geet immediately stops laughing. maan has again gone into romantic mood n carasses geet's cheek. geet is shocked

OS..
teji:par mamaji! wo ladki kaun hai?
adi:it must be geet only. what is d doubt in it?
lucky:oye bunty! meri behan yesa wesa ladki nai hai
adi: maan sir bhi yesa wesa aadmi nai hai

IS..
maan removes geet'a hairlock from her face n pulls her closer to him. geet is terrified
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome..missed quite a bit last night...but I am caught up now.. LOVED IT!!! 👏I read all the missed parts thoroughly. SO thoroughly that...

Tonya, I was getting concerned by episode 306..😲
Does writing Maneet stories cause amnesia??.. I wondered..
Is it writing about hot Maan or sweet Geet or is it the hot romance that causes it??
First the GEET CVS caught it and now my friend Tonya got it!!
First the GEET CVS made family disappear and now Tonya is doing it as well.😆

I was relieved by episode 308 when Tej and Lachi made an appearance again after being mentioned in episode 296. They were gayab for 12 episodes. Poor pammi🤣

Then I thought.. ah ha Tonya is pulling an Ektha!!
A shot of 10 minute walk along a 10 foot corridor.🤣🤣🤣

SO much happened between fearing getting caught and being caught.
Maan went quite..
Geet cried..😭
Maan asked the size of Geet's..😳
Geet Punched Maan in the stomach..🤢
She hit over the head with a pan..🤣
He kissed her hand..😳
And all this time Tej and Lachi where having a conversation on what I wondered??😆

See how thoroughly I followed your SS.. 🤗

All jokes apart... Tonya you are an amazingly thorough writer.. your work shows continuity all along the way... you never leave loose ends.. KUDOS to you for your perfectionism..👏



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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 314

OS..
tej:(shouts) oye tum dono chup
adi&lucky:...
tej: if it is not geet, then who is tht girl?
jugnu mama has forgotten what is happening there

IS...
G:maan! ye aap kya kar rahe hai?
Maan looks into her eyes
G:ye maan bhi na? whenever we r in some trouble he goes into romantic mood. mein kya karu is dust danav ke sath? i've already beaten him many times. but there are no signs of any impact

OS..
tej: boliye mamaji! ab maan ke sath kaun hai?
jug: pammi
teji almost gets a heart attack
tej:kya? pammi?
pammi comes from his behind
pammi: ji! did u call me?
teji is relieved
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Posted: 14 years ago
G:ye maan bhi na? whenever we r in some trouble he goes into romantic mood.

Tonya's Geet, please take some time and share your secret of maan+trouble=romantic with TV Geet.

So that the TV Geet can implement Maan+(trouble*trouble*trouble) = SR...
HAHA so that all the Geet Forum kudi's can rest in peace🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: naamteeg

And all this time Teji and Lachi were having a conversation on what I wondered



i too wonder d same dear. poor pammi! but don't worry yaar. Teji n Pammi had a love marrige. moreover our Lachi's husband Balwant Singh is there. he won't let anything go wrong.🤣

btw..welcome back dear. we too missed your funny comments.

143 sweetheart

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