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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Dude its me again!!!!! Hi!!!!!

and the saga continues... the sadness!!!😭😭 u know literally u need to be like me... write one day of torture and everything else make it happy preppy!!!! u know people will love u forever!!! and no one would wanna kill u!!!!!😳 u should try it!!! it will make it a very happy place!!!!😃 stress and violent free!!!!!!!😆

im liking this... watching it with maan and geet... its sooo much better!!!!!!!!!

okay next one

luv u babeji!😳

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Thanks for the PM.

Brilliant Jaz,...👏

no words to express how I feel when I read your awesome work...work of a great writer...

What a blast beginning of an another mind blowing story ...

excellent grip on the storyline...

Maneet r not together... assuming Maan is no more.

It's been 7 years no news of Maan??????

Very well concluded the chain of events took place during that one single day.

Geet is been disowned by her own family after the black day...

There is nothing we can predict what is coming next😕

Will eagerly wait for your next update to see how you would unfold the story.

Edited by Dilsay - 14 years ago

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

wow i think this was one of the best and longest updates i ever read

i can't believe they killed him!!!

But i don't think he died

can't wait for their reunion

i hope he comes back and takes geet right infront of the Handa men

con't soon plz!!

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Isha

@JilyPotter

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

First of all, thanks for the super mega long update...

and second of all from that message in the beginning i had a box of tissues handy just for crying, and i ended up needing them badly.

The beginning said it all, I hate the arrogance and the huge ego the family hold. No remorse i guess. And Geet is a fighter, a true fighter. I dont know how she did it.

The past seemed so joyful. the family actually seemed nice and simple but that was pretense i would say.

I absolutely love the bond between Sasha and Geet. Truly envious. Engagement to Arjun. I already hate the family. And the brothers, as clichd, are the hotheaded egotistic men who are spearheaded by the patriarchal father. wonderful. And i hate brij out of ALL OF THEM...

No one listens to her, i wouldnt even expect them to. I guess all the gals know the truth...

and it is Maan. I was so ecstatic at that moment but everything came down when i remembered the beginning...Urgh..these brothers...Low-life, mediocre, simple. they are so ignorant. Maan seems to sweet and kind.

And obviously brij raises handle and her pleas unanswered...Maan comes and all seems better...Sasha is just amazing. They are getting married. AWESOME...and they run away...and Sasha is pregnant even better...happiness doesnt last though...

they get married without a major hitches and they are so happy and than a stupid walk..Who walks when they know they are on the blacklist...( sorry, so angry at them).

I cried through the whole sequence cause i knew something was going to happen. All four men hare heartless and ruthless men. Hate them to the core. And they didnt even let her mourn. URGH...can i kill them!!!!!!!!

tossed his body...

Happy 7th Anniversary Maan...the tears started all over again...but this cant be the end...

Can i hope that Maan is alive cause the body was tossed. You know...amnesia or something...

Hopes Springs Eternal...

Anyways...Although extremely depressing and happy at moments it was PHENOMENAL!!!!!!

loved it and hated it...and sorry for the long comment...got carried away

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madhu.pmlist

@madhu.pmlist

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

OH MY GOD!! amazingly brilliant!!!! it was just really emotional yet never went overboard... u have got me hooked plzzz cont soon... i want maan!! 😭

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

thanks for giving such a long update

loved it

cant wait to read more

eager to see how will u carry the story

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

I refuse to believe he is dead...no way...

He was alive, some good Samaritan saved him and he lost his memory and he is going to come back now and reclaim his Geet...Pleaaaseee!!!

On a serious note, I am very curious why the story would start where it has...I mean where could it possibly go from here...If she is still living in the Handa mansion unlikely that she is married to Arjun now...so what will be the storyline? Her meeting someone new, who would help heal the wounds of past?? <Yes I know, You really have the worst readers- so impatient😆>

The update was really heart wrenching- the whole scene just flashed in front of my eyes!😭

Beautifully written!

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shalinisaran89

@shalinisaran89

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

awesome wrk...

feelin realy sad 4 geet as maan iz no more...

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

JaZ 🤗 ...

thank u sooo much for the super duper long and awesome update ... it was heart wrenching but beautiful ..

I hope Maan is alive and comes back to claim his wife ...

I want her to take revenge ... the so called "males " in the house donot deserve to be alive 🤬😡... mera bas chalay to in sab ko "Saw 4 style" maaroon 😈 ... they shud all be tortured to death ...

see the effect ur writing has on me ... 😆 ...

your every update is worth the wait .. so I dont mind waiting ...

love

Sana

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@roseinbloom

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

OK .. I am too dumbstruck to be able to write my feelings out right now ..

A whole range of emotions are being felt ... first is of course heartbreak, then there is depression, then there is extreme hatred and anger ... 🥺😭😡

How can such cruel families exist? Who don't see left or right without thinking of making life decisions for their own flesh and blood .. how can a father be so indifferent about his own daughter and her feelings ... well I guess I'm expecting too much from them right now ..

I know for a fact that Maan is not dead, he can't be .. he just can't .. without Maan there is no Geet and there is no Maaneet .. so Maan is alive haan! I refuse to believe he is dead and I wait for their reunion ...

I hope Maan comes to Geet with his head held high and take her away from that hell-hole Geet is living in -- right in front of the family's eyes.

I absolutely LOVE Sasha .. feel really sorry for her and that she had to sacrifice her love.. she couldn't be a better older sister to Geet .. as she seems to be the only one who completely understands her feelings and supports her ..

Really looking forward to how you unfold the rest .. seriously eager to find out .. although I'm mega depressed right now ..

Awesome update Jaz! Thankyou for such a lengthy and wonderful update :) 😃