~ Phir Milenge ~ Maaneet FF- Jan 3rd-Prt 34-Pg 115

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~ PHIR MILENGE ~

By: Raisy ;)


Hey Guys...I never did an FF before, it's my 1st time and I'm really excited! Well this is the 1st part so tell me how it is. If it's good, I will continue and if it's not then I'll take it off 😆 This 1st part is small because I wanted to get everybody's feedback (criticisms are very much appreciated 😃 ) before I continued.

Kehte hai na..Jo hotha hai, ache ke liya hotha hai? Sahi kehthey hai!

Maan and Geet...two individuals with opposite sides of attraction. Their state of mind from one another is very different. Maan is known as the rich, popular, "Hero" type college dude whereas Geet was considered a typical "DML" (Down-Market Loser) just like all the other "regular" aur "average" college students. Ladkiye Maan ke peeche peeche chalthi thi and Maan just loved the attention! However, Geet as I said...was different. If girls loved Maan...Geet hated him and so did Maan.

Bohath he alag thay ye dono...Geet apne duniya mein rethi thi aur Maan apne. But little did they, these differences and bhath bhath pe jagra will eventually land them in a place where they never ever thought would be possible!!!

This is Geet and Maan's...Phir Milenge Journey.

PART 1:

Rano- Geet...Oye Geet!!! Pata ne he ye ladki kaha chali gaye! Vaise toh bathai bohath bari bari karthi hai, Pata nahi Mumbai mein kaise rehegi. GEET!!!

Meet Rano, Geet's mom! Bohath pyar karthi hai apni ladli ko. Geet stays with her mom and her Dad is in Mumbai handling the business there. Since Geet wanted to do her college studies in Mumbai, her dad suggested she stays with him until her graduation. Obviously at first Rano immediately declined but with alot of convincing aur thodi asoo...maan gaye! Maa Beti Dehradhoon mein rehthi hai but since Geet's father needed to expand his business lines...he moved to Mumbai.

Geet- Uff Maa!!! Shoor kyun macha rahi hoon? Mein actually farmhouse gaye thi...Wanted to say bye to Raj one last time before I left.

Geet had gotten Raj for her 8th birthday when he was just a baby colt. People considered him an ordinary horse but for Geet, he was his bestfriend!

Rano- Packing nahi karni kya? Ya phir tu yahi apne Maa ke saath rehna chathi?!!! Rano's smile suddenly widens

Geet- Nahiii!!! Mujhe jaan hai

Rano tries to best not to drop a tear but fails when Geet gives her a tight hug.

Geet- Maa please stop crying varna mein nahi ja paoungi! Aur vaise bhi papa hai na. Maa Please!!

Airport:

Geet- Bye Maa..Miss you loads and take care of yourself now aur rohna mat aur Raj ka kahyal karna aur...

Rano- UFF!!! Bas meri maa..mein samaj gaye.

They have their little hugging moments once more and Geet takes off!

Precap-Dream Destination...MUMBAI! Geet aur Maan Ki Pehle Takar..Uh-Oh! 😆



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.ayesha. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res for now
will be back to edit soon
yay.... u are writing yaar wow
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nice start plzzz continue and add me to the pm list ...

love
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love the beginning do continue :)
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lovely do add me in ur pm list
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love it lovely update pls cont soonnnnnnnn pls do pm me thank yu so much congo congo new FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting!!!!
Continue soonnn.
Add me in ur pm list.



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wow..amazing .
cant wait to read more.
do continue plz
add me to yr pm list
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice beginning Raisy , update soon 😃
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Great start....Looking forward to reading more.....

Thoda bada sa update de do please...😳

PM please
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