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Posted: 14 years ago

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68 The Hard worker 01

thread 1

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1106619

thread 2

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1258678

thread 3

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1334496

thread 4

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1380452

thread 5

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1430312

thread 6

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1470044

thread 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1514144/taming-the-wild-7-part-66-papas-here-pg-105

thread 8

https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1572156

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shaaz_91

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey
finally new thread............
wud b eagerly waitin 4 d next update😃
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m-g19

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Posted: 14 years ago

⭐️ 👏 congrats 👏 ⭐️

👏congrats ⭐️ congrats👏

👏congrats👏

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aisha_ranbir8

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey congratulation.................for new thread...................😊 ...take care ..............love aish..............

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madhuri

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Posted: 14 years ago

CONGRATSSSSSSSSS FOR 9TH THREAD ...............m sooooo happy...................aaaahhhhhh eagerly waiting for nexxtttt update........

plzzzzzz update soooon..... thread khatam hone se pehle.......

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peeehu

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Posted: 14 years ago

congratz di for the new thread !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

u wud be heeeps high!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Anushka

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Posted: 14 years ago

C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S Mansi :)

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nIhArIkA

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey congrats for new thread...:)

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Anokhee

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey.....

Im so sorry for not commenting earlier but by the time you sent me the PM, i was already out of town and so I read it only after coming back....

And I must say, it was a very well-written part. The vocabulary you used for the most intimate scenes was spell-bounding as it did not make any part of it look vulgar or cheap and a writer who can do that is obviously a good one. You put up a perfect scenario and a perfect picture for their first love-making. It was sensuous and sexy yet not cheap or pedesteial. It was definitely worth the wait. But thers something I wish to tell you which is obviously a personal opinion of mine. No offence intended of course. I just feel that you went a little over-board describing the complete lovey-dovey scenario. I mean everything was so grand and perfect and personally, I always love a pinch of imperfectness. I think it just gives a reality touch to it. But thats completely my opinion. Im sure you dont agree with it and you dont have to either. Its just that I would have liked it to be a little more realistic than a completely unreal fantasy.

But thats not the point. Your description of the love-making in detail makes me feel what a poor writer I am. LOL

Anyway, heartiest congratulations for the 9th thread. I swear you and Rachna are creating history!

Keep up the good work. Hope to see the next part soon.

Lots of Love,

Anokhee😃