Taming the wild 9 New thread link on last page

⭐️ 👏 congrats 👏 ⭐️

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Hey.....

Im so sorry for not commenting earlier but by the time you sent me the PM, i was already out of town and so I read it only after coming back....

And I must say, it was a very well-written part. The vocabulary you used for the most intimate scenes was spell-bounding as it did not make any part of it look vulgar or cheap and a writer who can do that is obviously a good one. You put up a perfect scenario and a perfect picture for their first love-making. It was sensuous and sexy yet not cheap or pedesteial. It was definitely worth the wait. But thers something I wish to tell you which is obviously a personal opinion of mine. No offence intended of course. I just feel that you went a little over-board describing the complete lovey-dovey scenario. I mean everything was so grand and perfect and personally, I always love a pinch of imperfectness. I think it just gives a reality touch to it. But thats completely my opinion. Im sure you dont agree with it and you dont have to either. Its just that I would have liked it to be a little more realistic than a completely unreal fantasy.

But thats not the point. Your description of the love-making in detail makes me feel what a poor writer I am. LOL

Anyway, heartiest congratulations for the 9th thread. I swear you and Rachna are creating history!

Keep up the good work. Hope to see the next part soon.

Lots of Love,

Anokhee😃