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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

hey cngrats for new thread...

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Asmita Mitra

@ashi89

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

plz plz pm me the real update plz...i requested u once again...plz pm me the actual part...im 22 n eligible to read d part....so plz!!!!!😔🥺

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mansibharti

@mansibharti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Anokhee
Hey.....

Im so sorry for not commenting earlier but by the time you sent me the PM, i was already out of town and so I read it only after coming back....

And I must say, it was a very well-written part. The vocabulary you used for the most intimate scenes was spell-bounding as it did not make any part of it look vulgar or cheap and a writer who can do that is obviously a good one. You put up a perfect scenario and a perfect picture for their first love-making. It was sensuous and sexy yet not cheap or pedestal. It was definitely worth the wait. But thers something I wish to tell you which is obviously a personal opinion of mine. No offense intended of course. I just feel that you went a little over-board describing the complete lovey-dovey scenario. I mean everything was so grand and perfect and personally, I always love a pinch of imperfectness. I think it just gives a reality touch to it. But thats completely my opinion. Im sure you dont agree with it and you dont have to either. Its just that I would have liked it to be a little more realistic than a completely unreal fantasy.

But thats not the point. Your description of the love-making in detail makes me feel what a poor writer I am. LOL

Anyway, heartiest congratulations for the 9th thread. I swear you and Rachna are creating history!

Keep up the good work. Hope to see the next part soon.

Lots of Love,

Anokhee😃

hey anokhee so you finally read the part... sorry by the time i read your pm you were already away... its comforting to know that it didn't turned out to be cheap erotica scene.. this is what took so long for me to write trust me it wasn't easy.. and about your touch of reality thing, i guess you are right there. i think i got carried away.. this is really turning into a fairy tale, imperfection does make things look real, at some point of time i was thinking of the same thing but by then i had spent so much time that i couldnt do anything about it.. i guess there are few more things that you might find unreal in the coming updates.. abhi aise hi kaam chala lo yaar i will try to rectify it in my next story...😃

nd sweetheart you are in my top favourite writers, and considering there are only 4 you can see you beat too many to get here.. always loooved your writing, never underestimate it. 😊

and the next part.. well give me a week's time by then whatever i have written i'll put that up... and do pray that this thread sees more than one update this time 😆

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mansibharti

@mansibharti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ashi89
plz plz pm me the real update plz...i requested u once again...plz pm me the actual part...im 22 n eligible to read d part....so plz!!!!!😔🥺

dear you fall short on the required posts criteria.. you should have minimum 75 in your account.. 😊

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naureen

@Norz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

congrates mansi🥳

do update super fast this time 😉

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qt4ever

@qt4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Wowee!
New thread!
congrats di
lekin is bar jaldi jaldi updt karna
pichli thread ne to 300 pgs cross kie the
ye wali 600 na kare!

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

I'll be waiting, hope my nerves don't show,
You will make the right choice, this I know!
So if someone tries to distract you,
Tell them to go away,
Cause you have us waiting for you!

Mansi, as long as you don't make me wait another 300 pages... I am here to stay! 😆

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mansibharti

@mansibharti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: night13
I'll be waiting, hope my nerves don't show,
You will make the right choice, this I know!
So if someone tries to distract you,
Tell them to go away,
Cause you have us waiting for you!

Mansi, as long as you don't make me wait another 300 pages... I am here to stay! 😆

hey, you know i really like these short poems of yours.. 😃the first one on the previous thread is my favourite, normally i am not a poem fan but i like these small doses keep bringing them...😃

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sania

@saniashzadi

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

hey mansi

congrats fr new thread....

plzz tell when we r going to hve its first update??? r we have to wait till 300 pages😆

al the best fr this thead...congrats once again

love

sania

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

congrats mansi for the 9th thread of TTM...........

i am sure must be feeling proud of ur self right now.........................
i hope we will get a great update soon...................

thanks for the last pm and plz update soon

lods of love
nruti