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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 27

maan: geet i love u...

geet smiled and placed a soft kiss on his lips saying "i love u too"...

maan : geet...tumhe gift nahi chahiye?

geet: gift? kisliye maan?

maan: wahi...exam me top kiya hey na...uskeliye...

geet slid her hands around maan's neck naughtily

geet: gift tho subah aapne diya tha na...results se pehle...

maan looked at her seducingly...making geet weak

maan: achcha.woh wala gift...tumhe gift pasand aaya...agar aaya tho...aaj pura din aise hi gifts dene keliye tayyar hu...de dhu kya?

geet: nahi..nahi...subha diya tha na...kaafi hey...ab aap adi bhaiyya se milne jarahey na..tho jaldhi tayyar hojayiyie...

said these words geet freed herself from maan's strong arms...

maan sighed looking at geet and went to his room to get ready...after few min he came down...

maan: geet...geet...mein jaa raha hu...kaha ho tum?

geet came running from her room..

geet: oh ..o..maan..aarahi hu...mujhe kuch samaan karredhana hey..kya aap mujhe mall thak chod sakthe hey...

maan hugged her from behind...


maan: chod na kyu...mein bhi aatha hu tumhare saath shopping...

geet: maan...aap adi bhaiyya se milne jaa rahe hey na...aur waise bhi...aap nahi sakthey hey waha pe...

maan: achcha...aise kounsi jagah hey jaha maan singh khurana nahi aasaktha...

geet: ladies personal items shop...

maan looked at geet in confusion...

maan: woh kya hotha hey geet?

maan asked innocently...

geet : jaha...woh bechthe hey...

maan: woh? woh kya hey?

geet held her head not knowing how to make maan understand...she was too embarssed to say such words to maan...

maan was still looking at geet for an answer...geet finally told him what she wants to buy in his ear...on listening to that maan cheeks turn red due to embarassment...

maan: tho chale...tum apna shopping karke mujhe call karna...mein aatha hu tumhe lene...

geet nodded her head...when geet was trying to get out of hug maan gave another kiss to her turning her towards him...geet gave a fake angry look...

maan: geet...gussa math ho...afternoon tal rehna hey na...tumhe dekhne ke bina...isliye...sorry(holding his ears)

geet smiled...both of them left mansion...after leaving geet at mall...maan went to adi's flat...

When adi saw maan...he was too scared to face him...but maan talked normally to adi and made him feel comfortable...

maan: adi...kaise ho?

adi: teek hu sir...(lowering his head)

just then adi's mother came from outside...she greeted maan and went to kitchen to bring coffee...

maan: aakhir..tumhe hua kya hey aadi...why u took this decision?

adi remained silent not knowing whether to talk /not...maan understood adi's plight...he kept his hand on adi's shoulder as a friendly gesture...

maan: mein aaj ek boss ki tarah nahi...ek dosth ki tarah tumse baath karne aaya hu...aakhir hua kya hey...why did u take this decison?

adi couldnot control his tears...

adi: jab meri life hi mere saath nahi hey tho...jeene ka kya faidha hey sir?

maan looked at adi surprised...for first time adi is talking about life ...who never thinks of another word except office...

maan: saath nahi matlab...ko gaya hey?

adi: nahi sir...kisi aur ka hogaya...

maan understood that adi took that decision due to love failure...maan stood up...crossing his arms over chest...maan asked..."ladki ka naam kya hey?"

adi got scared...and looked at maan in shock...

maan: bolo adi...ladki ka naam kya hey?

adi: kya faida sir..woh mujhe pasand nahi karthi...isliye woh doosre admi ke saath shaadhi keliye maangaya...

maan: ek baath batha adi..tumne bathaya uss ladki ko apne dil ke baath

adi: bathane se pehle hi patha chala ki uska shaadhi tai hui hey

maan got really angry this time...but he remained cool and controlled himself thinking about geet...

maan: oh...ek ladki keliye...tum suicide karne keliye bhi tayyar hogaya...good...marke kya karpaoge...tumne jo himmat marne keliye dikhaya hey na...usme agar thoda himmat apne pyaar ko izhaar karne mein kiya hotha...aaj tak tumhara pyaar success hojatha...ek bath yaad rakho adi...pyaar karne keliye himmath chahiye...ab tumhi tai karlo ...ki tujhme mein himmath hey ya nahi...agar hey tho...pehle uss ladki ko apne dil ka baath bathadho...agar nahi hey tho...kabhi bhi tumhara chehra mujhe math dikhao...kyunki darpok log se mein nafrath kartha hu...

said these words maan left...adi started to think...finally a smile appeared on his face...

adi: maan sir sahi keh rahe hey...mein apne pyaar ko asani se nahi jaane doonga...

adi thanked maan sir in his heart for showing him correct path...

after purchasing required items geet called maan...but his phone was switched off...not knowing what to do geet came outside...just then maan's driver...ramesh came running towards geet...

ramesh: madam...sir ko kuch urgent kaam tha...isliye aapkelie ghadi bheja hey...

geet got disappointed as she expected maan to come...she sighed and got into the car...after sitting in car geet closed her eyes thinking about maan...she didn't notice in which way the car was heading...finally car stopped...geet opened her eyes and got down...she got shocked...

next-😲...😍...☺️


to be continued...


Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan's gifts to geet were very sweet 😳
Good that Maan knocked some sense into Adi
Precap sounds pretty interesting
I am sure MSK has planned something big
Continue soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update. wowww maan's gift to geet and she told him that was the gift was very good. then adi maan talk was sooo nice. i loved it. and the ending. what is maan uptooo. hopefully the most awaited one😉😉

thanks for pm and pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the upda+e..i think maan is planning to surprise geet..update soon..eagerly waiting for the next..
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
wat surprise has maan planned
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Posted: 14 years ago
i'm sure maan cooking something
for geet that why he send the car
maan amazing to nock some sense
to adi
lovely part
love it
update soonnn
thanks 4 pm

thank-you-desi-glitters-35

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Posted: 14 years ago
hhhmmm😳😳😳😳😳 Kya baat hai...MSK ka jalwa!!!!...hhhaaayyyeee😛😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb!
glad to see that adi took maan's words seriously!
i m sure maan has planned something big for his wife!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome n thnk u for PM

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