with love...maan (ss) part 32 updated pg 145 - Page 24

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Posted: 14 years ago
just lovely...🤗
maan me to mar jawa...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update ...

thnx 4 d pm...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely n cute yaar
loving maaneet cute n funny n small romantic scenes
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part
Im jus lving Maan
He is awesum
Lets c if he succeeds in finding out her likes n dislikes
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Posted: 14 years ago
loool maan is a joker! geet is probably v jealous :P
amazing update
really love this ff
i can see their love shall grow and blossom soon ;)
cant wait for the next part...what is maan gonna do :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

THANKS FOR COMMENTING


Part 14

maan: kya ladki hey geet...iska naam kya hey?

that's it geet came out of DDLJ magic and was fuming at maan who was drooling (pretending) over mandira...

maan started to smile within himself thinking about geet reaction...geet looked at maan...he was still drooling over mandira...geet couldn't take anymore...

geet: maan...maan...

maan pretended as if he is not listening to geet

geet: maan...maan

still no response from maan...geet opened the cap of water bottle which she brought to drink water...maan was enjoying the reaction he is getting from geet...

geet: maan

still no response...geet threw water from the bottle onto maan's face with a force...maan got shock of his life with the sudden act of his wife...geet switched off the television...made DVD into pieces...maan was still in shock...not knowing how to react...

geet: maan...agar dubara mein appko kisi ladki pe drool kartha hua dekha...iss baar pani nahi dalunga...

maan shocked with geet words...

maan: pani nahi? tho. kya dalegi geet? (with widened eyes)

geet: aapko hi patha chalega...when u will do this again...(with red eyes)

maan came out of the shock...came near to geet...tried to touch her...

geet: nahi maan...don't touch me...(with teary eyes)

maan taken back with geet words...he stood there confused...he thought it would be fun...but geet was hurt with his actions...

maan: geet...meri baath suno...

geet: nahi sunna hey mujhe appke baath...nahi sunna...she cried and left the hall...

maan(monologue): arey yaar...kya hogaya...mein apne haathon se sab kuch kharab kardiya...kithna achcha raath tha...sab kharab hogaya...iss mandira ki wajah se...maan tu bhi na...koi akalmand apne nayi biwi ki samne,,,koi dhoosri kadki taarif kartha hey kya...ab bhugtho...ab geet mere bathon pe kaise vishwas karegi...

maan went to geet room to pacify her...she was in room locked from inside...

maan: geet darwaja kholo ...plz

geet was silent...crying...

maan: plz geet...bas ek baar...darwaaza kholo

geet still silent...with every second maan was getting nervous...he was feeling as if geet is going away from him...

maan: plz geet...bas ek baar...plz...

geet was melting with every plea of maan...after many pleas...finally she opened the door...

Without wasting a fraction of second...maan hugged her...holding her tight...not letting her to leave


maan: plz geet...mujhse gussa math ho...i can't bear...mein bas mazaak kar raha tha...tumhari attention paane keliye...mujhe nahi patha ki tumhe ithna pain hoga...mujhe maaf karo...plz...mujhse baath karo...i can't bear ur silence...

geet stood there speechless...maan's embrace was itself sufficient to cool her...above that maan gave clear explanation before she could ask...she felt so special at that particular moment...

they broke from the hug...maan brought geet closer to him...looking into her eyes...

maan: geet...agar tumhe yakeen nahi...hey tho mein...

geet stopped maan by keeping her hand over maan's lips...



geet: kuch bolne ka zarrorath nahi hey maan...iam sorry...aapko galath samjne keliye...

maan felt relieved with geet words...

maan: geet tum chaho ya na chaho...yeh maan geet ka hey...aur aage bhi rahega...

geet got her answer...she looked at maan with teary eyes

maan: ab tho mujhpe gussa nahi hey na!

geet nodded her head saying "no"

maan: tho...(giving naughty looks)

geet: tho? kya?

maan: ab hum kya karenge?

geet understood maan's intentions...

geet: hum soyenge (giving same naughty looks to maan)

maan felt excited with geet words...

maan: hum soyenge!!!!!!!!!!!!!! saath mein...

geet: (smiled)...haan soyenge...lekin saath mein nahi...aap apne kamre mein aur mein mere kamre mein...

maan excitement gone with geet words...

maan: geeet ( like a child)

geet: issme bala mein ne kya kiya...mein ne kaha tha aapse...mujhe patane keliye...tho sab kuch aapke haath mein hey...i can't do anything...

maan: teek hey geet...tum mujhe challenge kiya na...dekhlo...iss haphthe ke andhar tum khudh mere paas avogi ...then kahogi..."i love u maan"...tayyar hojao...

geet smiled at maan's words...

geet: deklenge...lekin ab keliye...good night...(pushing maan out of her room)

maan: good night...geet...geet...ek minute...

geet: kya hey maan...

maan kissed her forehead...geet was lost in his kiss...

maan: i love u bolne ka practice aaj se hi shuru karna...good night

geet smiled at maan...and kept looking at maan when he was going to his room...

After that geet came inside her room...thinking about maan...she tried to sleep...but was not succeding in that...she started to feel maan everywhere around her...that moment she again wished to see maan once again...even though she closed her eyes...maan was there...when she opened her eyes...still she felt maan was sitting infront of her...

geet: maan...plz...ab keliye chod dho...mujhe sone dho...

geet smiled at her words...thanked babaji...for giving a husband like maan and slept peacefully...




to be continued...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow!!!! that was really close😉 bechara Maan😆 brilliant writing dear...
btw for the first time my comment came first
Edited by maanhar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg bechara maan...thank god geet ka gussa tanda ho gaya nahin toh sab kuch bigad jaatha...
loved the way maan manoafy geet...
ab maan ne challenge kiya hai toh zaroor kuch na kuch romantic toh hoga hi...
cant wait for the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow I asked for an update and I got one right away!! :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow there coming closer
now
love it
amazing update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thank yu so muchhh

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