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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...
continue soon 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor maan!...us ko apna hi mazak bhari padh gaya😆
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was awesome...😳
loved it...
poor maan..dunno how much he has got to wait more...😕
do cont fast...⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank god geet ka gussa thanda hogaya. wondering what maan will do to make her confess her love for him??
pls continue soon:)
wonderful update:)
thanx for the pm:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
JUST AMAZING...❤️ ,LOVELY...
WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...

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Posted: 14 years ago

geet pouring water on maan ? loved it she i so posassive. maan challenging was 2222 goood

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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet ko toh Maan se bhi zyada gussa ata hai
Loved how she got jealous
It was fab
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Posted: 14 years ago
thx god maan manage to pacify geet.
cant believe she actually broke d cd into pieces
wonder wat would she do if he droll over other gals once again!!!
glad geet understood him n now starting to think of him..
thx for d pM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

THANKS FOR COMMENTING


Part 15

geet smiled at her words...thanked babaji...for giving a husband like maan and slept peacefully...

But maan was not at all getting any sleep...he just kept thinking how to make geet fall for him...

maan: ab neend bhi nahi araha hey...kaise ayega ? pari jaise biwi hone ki bavjoodh bhi akele sona padraha hey...maan thu soch...geet ko jaldhi patana hoga...warna...har raath akela hi sona padega...kal pura office mein rahunga...geet se kaise baath karu...oh...no...geet ke paas phone nahi hey...kya karu...kya karu...hmmm...yes adi...

maan without a second thought called adi...

Adi was sleeping peacefully dreaming about his dream girl pinky...his dreams shattered by a phone call...that too call from maan

Adi: ithne raath ko kaun ho saktha hey...

adi switched on the light and looked at phone...it was maan...

adi: maan sir...ithne raath gayi sir mujhe kyu phone kar raha hey...

maan: yeh phone utane mein ithna dher kyu karraha hey? (with anger)

adi: hello maan sir?

maan: adi...sorry to disturb u...

adi: sir...koi baath nahi hey sir...aap bathayiye...

maan: adi mujhe ek ghante ki andhar ek blackberry cell phone chahiye...can u do that...?

adi: ok sir...ek ghante ki andhar aapko phone miljayega...

maan: thanks adi...good night...

adi: good night sir...

adi made necessary calls...he again called maan after 1 hr...

maan: bolo adi

adi: sir mein apke ghar ke bahar khada hu...

maan: tum wahi raho...mein araha hu...

maan went outside without making any noise...so that geet sleep is not disturbed

adi: yeh lijiye sir...

maan: thanks adi...once again sorry for giving u trouble...

adi: aapkeliye yeh adi 24 hrs available rahega sir...its my pleasure

maan: ok then...tum chalo..thanks once again...

Adi left happily in his bike...once dreaming about his pinky...By the time maan got his phone...it was 4am

maan: geet kal subha tum pehle mera hi awaz sunogi

maan inserted one of his sim into the new mobile...he sneaked into geet's room...kept the phone on the table...and stood there looking at his wife...who was sleeping...looking like an angel...

6 am

maan was still standing in geet's room looking at geet...

maan: iss geet mein kya jaadu hey...isko kithna bhi dekhu...phir bhi dubara dekhne ka mann karraha hey...

maan smiled at his words...by that time...geet began to woke up...maan hid behind the door...(so that geet could not see him while talking on phone)

geet: (yawning and with sleepy eyes) babaji...(she prayed to babaji)...

maan dialed the number of geet new cell phone...suddenly the phone started ringing

i love u geet...i love u geet...i love u geet...i love u geet...i love u geet

geet startled with that sudden ringing of phone...

geet: yeh maan ki awaaz hey...yeh kaha se araha hey...

geet looked around and she noticed a blackberry phone on table...

geet: phone...yeh kaha se agaya...

She took the phone...it was displaying maan's name...

geet: maan?

geet answered the call...

geet: hello?

maan: meri pyaari geet...good morning...

hearing maan's words geet started to become restless to see maan...

geet started to look all over her room to find maan

geet: maan...aap kaha hey? (almost like a plea)

maan: kyu geet...mujhe dekhne ka man karraha hey kya...

yes she was desperate to see maan...but maan's words made her to show some attitude...

geet: nahi aise koi baath nahi...bas avyi poocha...

maan: achcha...tho teek hey...mein bhi nahi bathoonga ki mein kaha hu...

geet restlessness to see maan was increasing by each passing second...maan is teasing her and not at all coming before her...

geet: maan...aap kaha hey? (this time almost crying)

maan was enjoying geet restlessness to see him...he started to tease her a bit...

maan: agar tum mujhe dekhna chahthey ho...tho aanke bandh karo...aur apna haath dil pe rakho...tumhe khud patha lagega mein kaha hu...

Without thinking for a fraction of second geet did the way maan said...

maan who was watching geet ...got surprised...

maan(monologue): mere baath pe ithna yekeen kar raha hey geet...that she did what i said without any second thought...ab mazaak nahi..mujhe geet ke samne jaana hi hoga...

maan entered geet's room and slowly sat on the bed...without making any sound...slowly kept his head in geet' lap...

geet though her eyes were closed...was feeling maan around her...her heart beats were so fast...sensing maan very near to her...the mere touch of maan...sending chills all over her body...

maan looked at her loving wife who was enjoying his presence...maan smiled...

maan: ab tho ankhe kholo geet...mujhe dekho...

to be continued...
Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww.. that was sooo sweet..
maan gifted his dear wife a blackberry...
n i liked hw geet wntd 2 c maan 1st thing in d morning... n d ringtone was awesome..
but am upset u left it on a cliff hanger.. update nxt part soon.. 😊
Edited by luv_GurTi - 14 years ago

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