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Posted: 14 years ago

beautiful updates. u r a fabuls writer keep going

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waiting 4 geet to confess her love for maan!
continue soon!
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loved the update...
so maan is expressing his love to her...
but kya yaar u stoped it so v hv to wait for geet's response now...
pl cont soon
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awesome update bro😃
do cont soon...😊
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whoa..!! that was AMAAZZZINGGG...
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loveliest...it just touches heart...🤗
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Bth updates were awsum
Atlast Maan made her confess n she did in her nagry
Waiting for more romantic part
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aiwah!!!!!!!!!! fantabulous😳... plzz continue!!!!!! 😊
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Part 11

geet could not take anymore...she was losing...herself...maan is making her to fall for him...unable to take one more word from him...she just stopped his words by her hand on his lips...requesting with her eyes...to stop...

Geet: maan ...plz...ab bas kijiye...i can't take it anymore...

maan remained silent and started to listen her words...waiting for her answer...

geet slowly removed her hand...looking into his eyes...

geet: aap jho kehna chahthey hey woh mein samaj gayi...kyunki mein bhi aap keliye wahi mehsoos kar rahi hu...jo aap mere liye mehsoos kar rahey hey...

maan's heart filled with joy with that answer from geet...his hold on geet tightened more with that...

geet: aap ke saath rehna mujhe bahuth achcha lagtha hey...aap ke baathon mein apne appko kho jaathi hu...din raath bas aapka hi chehra humesha dekhna chahthi hu...
pal bar keliye bhi...aap se juda hone ka khayal bhi...mein jhel nahi sakthi...

maan became naughty with those words...with seducing eyes he moved his lips closer to her...

maan: tho? aage bolo geet

geet: lekin...?

maan was taken back with that word...

maan: lekin? lekin kya hey geet?

geet still looking into maan eyes...

geet: lekin...mujhe lagtha hey jho mujhme ho raha hey woh pyaar nahi hey...

maan got confused this time...one side she is saying that she want to be with him...and on other side she is saying it is not love...

maan: geet...kya tumhe mujh pe koi shaq hey?

geet: nahi maan...aap pe nahi...khudh pe...

maan: khudh pe?

maan's grip loosened on geet...geet took few steps back...turned back and started to stare at the moon...clouds were covering moon...just as her words covering her heart...

geet: haan! maan ...khudh pe...apne aap pe...

maan: mein kuch samja nahi geet

geet: maan...hum ek doosre ko sirf 3 din se jaanthe hey...hum abhi bhi ek doosre ke baare mein kuch nahi jaanthe...pasand...napasand...kuch bhi nahi...

maan: tho?

geet: aap mujhe achche lagthe hey...lekin achche lagne ka waja mujhe patha nahi...

maan getting confused with her words...

maan: geet!!!!! what are u trying to say...mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aaraha hey...

geet : mujhe lagtha hey ki...jho ehsaas mere dil mein ho raha hey...woh sirf ek attraction hey...more clearly...infactuation

maan: attraction...tumhe lagtha hey ki mere feelings bas ek attraction hey...

geet: nahi maan aapka nahi...meri...

maan was totally confused this time...

geet: maan aap 25 saal ke hey...mein 18 saal ki hu...aap mere age pass kar chuke hein...ab apko samaj mein aatha hey ki love kya hey...aur attraction kya hey...lekin mujhe nahin...

maan now understood what geet said...

maan: aakhir tum kya chahthe ho geet?

geet: maan mein aapse pyaar karna chahthi hu...dil barke...for my entire life...lekin jo feelings ab mujhme ho raha hey...iam not sure ki woh pyaar ki wajah se...ya attraction ki wajah se...mein iss confusion se humara rishtha...shuru karna nahi chahthi...kyunki agar yeh attraction hey tho...humara rishtha zyaada din thak nahi rahega...woh mein bilkul nahi chahthi...mujhe appke saath zindagi bar keliye chahiye ...isliye...

maan : isliye?

geet turned back to face maan...she moved closer to maan...sending chills all over his body...slid her arms around his neck...brought her lips close to his ear...when he was expecting a kiss...geet said...

geet: make me to fall in love with u...maan

maan shocked with that open challenge from geet...on one hand it was getting difficult to control himself when she is so much closer to him...and on other hand she is throwing open challenges on him...making him more and more thirsty for her...

maan: yeh kaisa sharath hey geet?

geet: agar mujhe paana hey tho...pehle mere dil ko jeethna hoga maan...tayyar ho jayiye...mujhe patane keliye...

Saying these words geet left happily...to her room...thinking about maan...

maan smiled at geet words...he thought...yes though she was bit childish in her thooughts...what she said was true...her idea of starting relation with true love really touched him...

maan: geet ab tak mujhe laga ki tujh me bachpana hey...lekin aaj mujhe samaj mein aaye ki uss bachpana ke peeche...ithna matured thoughts hey...u r making me to fall in love with u again and again...kya kya chupa hey abhi bhi tum mein...harroz mujhe ek nayi geet dikh rahi hey tujhme...daadi...ur great...mere liye aise ladki chuna...
kuch ho ya naa ho...tumhare saath zindagi bahuth dilchasp hoga geet...

u are already in love with me...bas uska realization baki hey...woh bhi karvadhunga...bahuth jaldh...mrs...maan singh khurana...

Suddenly it started raining...maan started to enjoy each and every drop of rain...today he felt so special...

geet in her room was smiling herself thinking about maan and her challenge...

geet: baarish...kya maan terrace pe tho nahin hey?

geet ran to the terrace with umbrella in her hand...got angry with maan...

geet: maan yeh kya bachpana hey...zhukam lag jayegi...chaliye andhar...

maan: aaj mein bahuth khush hu...geet...mujhe enjoy karne dho...

geet: yeh kaunsa tareeka hey enjoy karne keliye...chaliye andhar...

maan: nahi geet...tum bhi aao na...saying these words he stared to pull geet...

geet: nahi...mujhe nahi aana hey...

but his force was great...that geet totally gave up and landed on his chest...

rain was drenching them completely...slowly maans hands started to embrace geet...bringing her closer and closer...untill there is no space left for air...between them...the cold air now not at all bothering them...the warmth they are creating in each other...making them to move closer...closer...and closer...

to be continued...
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Awesome updates
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