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Posted: 14 years ago
THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

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Part 10

her whole body is sweating and shivering...until she saw him...he removed his hand from her mouth...
geet: ( with a shocked expression) : maan!!!!! (in a very low voice...almost a whisper)...

maan kept his finger on her lips and said " sssh"

geet kept looking into maan's eyes...she was lost...totally...she was under spell...the spell of most dangerous eyes...and could'nt notice that maan's hands were on her waist...in no time...maan was lifting her in his arms...but she was lost in his eyes...she didn't say a word after that...just looking to his eyes...

maan slowly walked carrying geet in his arms...looking into her dark brown eyes...untill they reached the terrace of mansion...

Geet who was till now lost in maan's eyes...came back to reality...and just saw around...she was in maan's arms...she became restless...

geet: maan plz...mujhe neeche utharo...

but maan made his hold tighter...making geet more weak...to control an urge to touch him back...

geet: maan plz...she started to plead...

geet's plea...started to initiate naughty thoughts in maan...

geet: maan...chodiye na...

maan just kept looking at her lips without saying a word...sending chills all over her body...she closed her eyes...being unable to resist his intense looks

maan took few steps forward...placed down geet...and just disappeared in darkness

geet with a sudden jerk looked around...was it an imagination...no...she is on terrace...maan's perfume is still in the air...so maan was here for real...now where had he gone...

her eyes started looking for him...they are craving for just one glimpse of him...she started to pray that it should not be a dream...for that particular moment she want to forget herself...forget everything...and stay there in his arms...her castle...her eyes were searching in that darkness...unable to find him...they are showing their helplessness as tears...flowing tears...flowing continuously...her knees became weak...not in a position to take any more pain of this distance from him...she sat on her knees...defeated by her own emotions...crying and craving for just one glimpse of him...

in that darkness...suddenly light appeared...whole area became bright...and in a state of shock...she looked around...whole area was filled with roses...amidst of which she was sitting...
she looked up...to know what was happening and there he was in white ...like an angel...

her eyes failed to blink...her lips refused to speak...her senses were not in her control...she was in his spell...she just kept staring at him

maan moved slowly towards her...made her to stand holding her shoulders...brought her closer...

she was lost...in his eyes again...her heart was jumping with joy...tears were not at all stopping...her legs failed to move as if they know that they reached their destination...

maan gently placed his hand on her cheek...

maan: geet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

geet closed her eyes feeling his touch...melting by his touch...

maan: geet anke kholo...(with a seducing voice)

geet slowly opened her eyes...

maan: geet kya tumhe abhi bhi lagtha hey ki humare beech kuch nahi hey?

geet lowered her head not knowing what to answer...she remained silent...

maan: bolo geet...

she was silent...her tears were not at all stopping...

he took her hand and kept it on his heart...

maan: geet...kya iss dhadkan mein...tumhe kuch mehasoos nahi ho raha hey...?

geet hand shivered...the moment she felt his heart beat...her heart raced...an unknown happiness started to fill her...

maan made her to look into his eyes...in which geet was already lost...

maan: geet...kya in ankho mein tujhe kuch nahi dikh raha hey?

geet was lost in his eyes...she saw his pain for her...which melted her heart at that instant when she realized it...

maan: bolo geet...mein tumhare liye kuch bhi nahin? (with a pain in voice)

geet could not take anymore...she was losing...herself...maan is making her to fall for him...unable to take one more word from him...she just stopped his words by her hand on his lips...requesting with her eyes...to stop...


to be continued...






Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome,fabulous update but too short plz continue soon can't wait...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update ... cant wait for the next part ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update
love it
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thank yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice updat. Finally geet is going to say something to maan and I like the way maan is showing his love to his lovely wife. Thanks for pm me.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update. felt like reading more. pls update soon:) waiting eagerly for the update:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally caught up with all of your updates...wow please do continue. Loved all your updates!!! Finally geet ko ehsaas ho gaya maan ke liyai...beautiful!!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
😛 loved it...

Geet is falling for Maan 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago


That was simply dreamy 😍
The way Maan gently broke her shield was superb 👍🏼
Arrangements in terrace was ⭐️ 😳

Loved it & thanks for pm ... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
ooh daling geet is damn cute...loved all her monologue.. its sounds really sweet n funny
loved d way maan is expressing his luv towards geet..
plz add me into u pM list...
eager to read more..

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