MG-In love with enemy thread-3 updt@114 new thrd ! - Page 20

Originally posted by: febinyusuff

Reet,

looks like we will get an update soon..

Reva,

yaar please go through the update and let kn ow Reet your views on it..


waiting waiting waiting..

Love

Febin

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

sorry for reading the update n not commenting.

couldn't stop myself for not reading 😆

\i had a very hectic weekend n was looking up u'r ff from my phone.

i hate typing on that thing🤢

about the update ....awwww so far i've read it 3 times. luvd luvd luvd it.

luvd how they kept on going back n forth to eachother. as if they go away now, they'll nvr have one another evr again. shooo shweet.

thank u for using one of my songs. it was so much fun to go through all the recommendation. many of the idians songs ,i nvr heard before so thanx to u popping a question to u'r readers...i got to hear a whole bunch of good songs.

how do u manage to write this long of an update n so well flowing. it nvr seems disconnected from any part.👍🏼

not to make u'r life more hectic n miserable...can i ask u for a favor...can u use two differnt colors for the speech of maan n geet. i don't wanna guess wrong who said what on the most crucial points.

just a request...if u think , it'll take u forever to do that... then don't bother.🤗

so wait...the whole update was so sweet but geet just got engaged in the middle of all this. when will maan notice the big ring on her hands?? actually whn will she notice the ring on her finger😆

can't wait for the nxt part.

would luv to read sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much more.

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

Originally posted by: maanmishti

hey reet,

just read the update....................it was terrific.....it made me cry........the pain of geet and chief......i hated some part of the update........which was geet unconsciously said yes to dev.......yuckssss i hate dev.......anyways i will not worry abt it........even if she says yes to dev also i know she only belongs to chief..........she is a pure soul.......oh my god!!! when geet knows abt chief being maan and guru.....the heart the pain she went through was horrible........hope chief tells her everything and hold her tight and give all the love she wants from her dream man..........plzzzzzzzzz reet i dont want any misunderstanding between maan and geet......they r just perfect.......anyways waiting for next update.


Lucky me my interview went well......i got selected but we r working on pay packages........if they agree for my package i might join lets see they havent got back to me yet......fingers crossed.


waiting for next update..........update soon sweety😉

Originally posted by: -shamima-

First of all congrats for the new thread in love with enemy truly deserves it and it's one of my fav ff's 👏

Omd I an speechless after reading this update and I mean the way you composed the while thing beautiful. Awe adi is upset and has made himself hate geet as he believes she doesn't love maan and that she refused to recognize him which made this belief stronger and the fact that he saw her with dev irked him to think that she's living a happy life with dev while his chief is suffering the pain of geet not being with him. When adi called maan I really liked how you portrayed his emotions my eyes moistened at maans pain of hearing geet going to be someone elses but then he thought between himself of letting geet be happy with dev or being selfish and wanting her for himself but he put all things in prespective and made him believe that he had nothing to offer her if he married her. An awe chothu called informing about geets birthday thought that part was really cute and lightened the atmosphere of maans pain. Seriously maans monologue was written perfectly it was so him and had all the emotions in realistically.

Geets masquerade birthday party wow you surely have outdone yourself the way dev told her the flowers and bracelet wasn't from him but incognito she understood straight away that her chief is here and she wanted to get him before he left her again awe the need was portrayed nicely and then he came forward she recognized by his voice and need asurrance that he was there and not a dream so she stepped forward once a time and maan emotions during this was also the same and so when she realized that it was him she grabbed him so that he couldn't leave her and she kissed him conveying how much she missed him and craved for him and he responded the same. And awe geet not wanting to let go as maan is her need and she wasn't ready for him to go maan felt blissful as she answered his unsaid questions and showed her love for him without saying the 3 words and wow the way you wrote the part where he was going and she rushed to get him once it sunk in he was leaving awe that was a magical moment how innocently she asked him not to leave he that it melted him and he didn't want to leave her but he had to go relunctly and oh no geet was in her thoughts about maans word before his departure that she unknowingly said yes to devs proposal which she still is unaware of as before she could realise the goons attacked. I liked her thought when she was thinking that chief was always there when she was in trouble but where was he now but hence he came and rescued his love but have to much info making her out two and two together and I must be honest that was the best revelation the way you put the pieces together and awe how maan was stuck when she was figuring it out and then demanded a kiss which he had to give into and in that one kiss maan gave up anwas tired if hiding his identity and geet understood that this was his chief who was inspector maan swell as guru and awe her emotional breakdown is understandable as she is in the thought that he didn't trust her so hence the disguises but the reason is more deeper which I hope maan has a chance to tell her anyways you must know by now that I loved this update and can't wait to read more 😃 and a big hug to show my appreciation to your writing skill and how much I love this ff 🤗