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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
lovely concept...
loved the character sketch...

that guy has somewhat lost his mental balance...a psycho...
dev n geet engaged...lets c what happens what she meets maan...
waiting for u to begin the story...
now since anjum is dead...maan might suspect something n go after it...
lets c what u have in store for us...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

PROMO 1.. for PART 1 coming in 10 days

'So your the leader of that gang huh, lets see how you touch me' Geet screamed at the man with a stick in her hand. He was busy rubbing his head.
'aah what?' He asked confused.
'I'm not scared of you, let me tell you I have a blackbelt in karate' Geet showed her moves. Maan just smiled at her antics. Not only was she innocent and cute but she was headstrong and damn beautiful.
'Are you mad? My head' He cried out in pain on his knees.
'Your head, I've only hit you on the head, next i'll hit you where it hurts if you try to touch me again' Geet said raising the stick above his head.
'Are you mad?' He asked again looking at the fiery girl standing over him whlist he was crouched down on the floor. Just then a car arrived. The man who was Maan's driver got out.
'Sab ji,' The driver exclaimed 'are you alright' He went to see him. Maan yelled in pain. The driver got up and stood infront of Geet.
'What are you doing?' He asked confused at her.
'oh so your also part of the gang! Should i give you one as well?' Geet threatened with the stick near the driver's face.
'wow your amazing, sabji saved you from those goons and this is how you repay him' The driver explained the facts to Geet. Realisation hit Geet as she widened and then squinted her eyes. She dropped the stick on the floor.
'Kya' She meekily stated. Maan looked at her amused at her expression. From a tigress to a mouse in mere minutes. 'You saved me from the goons' She asked looking at Maan. He gave a annoyed look which showed how irratated he was and got up.
'Yes, I did a big mistake that i saved you' He said pointing at her irratated. 'Now someone save me from her' He told to the driver. Guilt then hit Geet.
'woh I'm sorry' Geet fumbled with words. Maan just looked to the other side. 'I hope it didn't hurt. Maan looked at her amused. He doned a sarcastic smile
'You hit me with a stick and then ask if it hurt. Of couse it didn't why would it hurt me' He said sarcastically. Geet looked at him guiltily and lost and then Maan screamed at her
'Paagal hogayi ho, off course it bloody hurts' He said touching his head again.
Geet fumbled and didn't know what to say and she stated what she thought
'you had a knife in your hand and i thought you were the leader of those goons' Geet looked at him with hope that he will forgive her.
He looked at her and walked up to her annoyed and stated
'from what angle do i look like a goon?' Geet looked at him from up and down and then said
'Urm yeah its true.But the point is that even goons do fashion now adays and so i thought' She said and then picked up a bottle of water and asked him to drink it. He looked at her irratated.
'Leave me alone please, I was in the middle of an important phonecall and you you' he threateningly pointed at her. Geet gulped.
'Come on lets go' He said to the driver. The driver looked at Geet and asked
'sir what about her' He turned around and looked at her. She looked hopeful
'is there a mental institution nearby we will drop her there' He replied sarcastically smiling at her.
Geet's mouth turned into an 'O' She then deserved that.
'Okay i said i'm sorry what else should i do? fall to your feet' She asked.
'You know i wouldn't mind' He smiled at her. Geet looked at him shocked.
'urhh just please drop me at the taxi stand I will go home from there' Then realisation hit Geet.
'My money my bags oh my god' Maan looked at her amused. 'Kya ladki hai' He thought
'Excuse me where my stuff' She asked poking Maan.
'How am i meant to know' He asked.
'Oh great, the goons have it. If you had to save me could you not save me with my stuff?' Geet asked.
'Oh I've had it. I;m going my way you go your way and pray we never meet again' He went and sat in his car and gestured the driver to come.
'If you want to come then come other wise just stand there' He told her. Geet reluntantly got in the car.
So Here begins the JOURNEY!! of Maan and Geet...
Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Hey nice update...cant wait for ur update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Aww that's lovely. I thought geet is going to do sumhing silly like hug him once she realized that he was the savior but not the goon.
Geet of ur ff is very innocent. Luvd maaneet's first interaction.
Update soon. Wud luv to read more.
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
superb as usual
is defo gonna be interesting journey
cont soon
thnx for d PM 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Haahaa geet is funny. Oh my god Maan has saved her from goons & she was hitting him. Crazy girl. Hey waiting for update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
lovely promo 😛
funny...can't wait for more updates...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
awesome promo.plz rite the 1st part soon n thnks 4 pm plz add me 2 ur regular pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
awesome promo...
wah kya mulaqaat hai...
Maan Geet meet fantastic...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
awesome update
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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