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Posted: 14 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr
Imma comment after school :)

So, reserved <3

xoxo
Aanya

*EDITED*

Hey :) Sorry for the late edit, was busy with schoolwork :|

Coming to the update, it was AMAZING! :D Although it was sad, I adored it! Riddhima's hurt was shown beautifuuly <3 You managed to make it real and not too Meena Kumari [she was a Bollywood actress (old), famous for tragedies :D]

Pfft. He doesn't love her yet! YET being the crucial word here 😆 I liked how you portrayed his attitude towards the whole thing in contrast to hers! Fabulous job :)

All in all, the update was LOVEE :D

Continue asap!

xoxo
Aanya

Thank you sooo frickin much Aanya! <3 LOL I'm glad you liked it despite the fact that it was all sad! Thank god it wasn't Meena Kumari wala sad! 😆 And yesss, not YET but deff in the future :P Awwwie thanks sooo much love, I'll try to update asap!! :)

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Simmy003

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Posted: 14 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: shivi17
it almost made me cry... it was wonderfully written, and in this situation i am angry at armaan but i know he couldn't help it and he doesn't know the he has feelings for rids.. i recon rids should try to leave again and then ammy stops her in time and gets mad at her and ask her why and she yells "becos i love you god damit" even though its not his fault i feel like slapping ammy???

Thanks soo much love!! Awwie don't cry, it'll be okay :) LOL and don't be mad at Armaan yet, you can slap him later 😆 Hmmm I like your plan haha I'll bring em together soon! Till then, keep reading <3

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Simmy003

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Posted: 14 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: jiyaa
awesome part!
poor riddhima

Thank you so much!! <3 I knoww poor Riddhima, she'll be otay though :)

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Simmy003

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Posted: 14 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: vaishiksg
u knw ur this part made me remember band baaja barat scene.. where anushka n ranveer ( dun remember their character names.. ) make love n the next day same kind of thing happens as u hav shwed here.. or sum wats imilar.. teh situation is similar...

n e ways nice upd8...

Yepp, I remember that scene, but it's similar and different at the same time :) Glad you liked it, thanks so much! <3

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Simmy003

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Posted: 14 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: DRarmaanfan
awesome part!!
poor riddhima...feeling bad 4 her..
cont soon

Thank youuu <3 I know, I feel bad for her tooo :( But it'll be alright! I'll try to update asap!!! :)

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Simmy003

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Posted: 14 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: Sanaa629
ARGHHH!!! Armaan..!!! ARGHHH Riddhima..!! you complete NUT HEADS!!! I feel like frying both ur heads in a saucpan with full heat!!! Idiots..!! HOWWW can you not notice the amazing chemistry you share?? and HOWW can you not notice that to both of you..the kiss meant so muuchh??? How?? really how?? Please help me comprehend this wierd thing called a brain inside both of you..!!

Ok..enough of my lecture..soo..I lvoe how you portray the confusion..though i don't like it (AS in dnt like AR in confused state)..but i loveee how Riddhima reacted..veryyy realistically..!! She wasn't crying too much...and only cried properly when she got home..and then like probably I would..start blaming Nikki for making me think it's love..!! lolx.. But the part that broke my heart is when she stood at the place they kissed 'last night'..

AWWHHH!! =( =( =( =( =( I hope they sort things out..and REALIZE!! Idiots kahinke..!! ANd i have a feeling Armaan will realize only when Riddhima starts avoiding him..:S :S

PLease cont sooonnn.,.!!

Love,

Sanaa

🤣 Loved the way you started your comment!! I KNOW MAN! How can they not seee?!?!?! 😆 They will in the future though, after a whileee ;) Aww thanks I wrote anything that I came up with to portray that confusion! Lol glad it worked! Yepp, and she didn't cry over her heartbreak or anything, she cried cause she was mad at herself :) Ahaha I would blame Nikki too, damn you Nikki! 🤢

And I knowww, that bedroom part I did on purpose, to make everyone goo "awww" :P

Hehe you will have to wait till the idiots finally realize it! 😆

Sanaaa! Sushhh, chup re! I don't like your feelings! Don't tell people about what's gonna happen 🤣 Shut up! :P

Love youuu, and I'll try to update asap!! :D

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Simmy003

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Posted: 14 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: Riddss
nice parts
continue soon

Thanks soo much!! <3 I'll update asa I can! :D

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Simmy003

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Posted: 14 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: kashfull
aww i feel bad for ridz. she cried. even i felt like crying
i mean which girl would like it when the person ur in love with says that he didnt mean anything

continue soon

Awww don't be so sad! :) I know, no one would want that to happen :( But she'll be fine 😃 I'll try too write sooon :)

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Simmy003

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Posted: 14 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: AMMY12
Nice part.
Thanx 4 d pm.

Thanks so much! <3 You're welcomeee :)

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Simmy003

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Posted: 14 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: Riarai2346
hey hi
i hope you f9
thankx for the pm
the part was nice
i feel bad for riddhima i hope arman and riddhima get alng soon
lo
ria

Hey Ria, I'm fine :) Thanks so much love! <3 They will don't wowwy! :) You're welcomeee and keep reading :D