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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

he kameya

what r u upto................... its scary............................... a small baby with a monster......................... omg.......................... what r u doing with our maaneet.............. but awants to go further with you to see what have u hidden in your mind................. do pm me also

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Read its again Its great to read and see he will give her only pain or love also ...she is scared and its possible bec of her age ....i wish there is some care and love also Involved in future ,,

Thanks a lot for this great subject love to read ...scary but Interesting ...

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

super .........nice one..........i have a feeling that u love to make maan ,villain ...........poor geet.......add me to your pm list..........after paradox , siski............hey by the way i liked it's title

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

congratulation for new ff darling
awesome and interesting concept.
awesome start.
feel sad for geet
continue soon

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

It almost makes me cry.
Poor geet. Cant believe she got married at the age of 11 :o
Interesting concept :)

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sana.saba7

@sana.saba7

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

euuuuuuuuuuu what maan have done with 11 years old geet

keyama you every time makes our maan bad .............😭

please makes maan as good hubby..........

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

wooooooooooooo SCARY but AWESOME start continue soon yaar and do add me to ur PM list😃

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BluntlySpeaking

@BluntlySpeaking

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

my god! i am shocked at this update ...r u OUT OF YOUR MIND???????? writing an FF involving the rape of a 11 yr old child???? this is even worse than your other FF "Remorse" where the heroine was abused/ raped and verbally assaulted by the so called hero...i also remember your comment on another FF which depicted Geet being raped by Maan and u stating that did not constitute a rape...now, after reading this FF, i say you have gone too far! ....U r NOT ALLOWED TO TAKE SUCH LIBERTIES IN THE NAME OF CREATIVITY!! there has to be a sense of responsibility when u write...IF is an open forum that can be accessed by one and all..do you know how many peodopiles , child abusers etc could be visiting this orum and be tittilated and encouraged reading your disgusting FF????

i take strong offense to the premise on which this FF is based and would ask that you delete this update and change the nature of this FF else i will be reporting it to the moderator.....and NO , i SHALL conveniently NOT ignore the FF and turn a BLINd EYE as i feel very strongly about this!!

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: indepgal
my god! i am shocked at this update ...r u OUT OF YOUR MIND???????? writing an FF involving the rape of a 11 yr old child???? this is even worse than your other FF "Remorse" where the heroine was abused/ raped and verbally assaulted by the so called hero...i also remember your comment on another FF which depicted Geet being raped by Maan and u stating that did not constitute a rape...now, after reading this FF, i say you have gone too far! ....U r NOT ALLOWED TO TAKE SUCH LIBERTIES IN THE NAME OF CREATIVITY!! there has to be a sense of responsibility when u write...IF is an open forum that can be accessed by one and all..do you know how many peodopiles , child abusers etc could be visiting this orum and be tittilated and encouraged reading your disgusting FF????

i take strong offense to the premise on which this FF is based and would ask that you delete this update and change the nature of this FF else i will be reporting it to the moderator.....and NO , i SHALL conveniently NOT ignore the FF and turn a BLINd EYE as i feel very strongly about this!!

exactly i was even scared to type. but thiis girl is in her dead bed now... i am praying for her. i can't belive this thing happens... & geet was mainly about social... where i am only showing glimps... you havent even read my full story yet... how could you come to conclution that this will be like this through out the ff. its based on it but i am changing it also... I don't thik i have the gut to type a child getting abused day & after day... thats why i am also taking leap... you could ask some of my readers.. i was shaking when i waas typing this... but they gave me the confidence...

& for this.. this story is true. she is 21 now. dead bed. only thing i am saying this is not nice. & i also added my myth like my any other ff...

i hope you understand & cooperate with me...

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libra25

@libra25

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

i totally second the author of the work.....
more so i feel the ff is more about child marriage and plight of girl child who is put through the ordeal.....
the guy is also 20 that is he is a minor as well......so rather than looking at it as an abuse bcoz it was started with the first night i would rather take an initiative to understand the issue behind it....
in my earlier post i had already mentioned that i will not be judgmental and wait for the story to unravel......

and as for crediting the writer i really appreciate her for picking up so sensitive issues and gel them in a form of story for ppl to read......
as mentioned that IF is an open forum then we must also understand that today nothing is difficult to reach as internet is available to anyone and everyone, for ppl who want to get instigated there is enough stuff available already....so a story will in no way be of harm...rather i would see it as an eyeopener for ppl who do not understand the plight of the victim.....
movies, even so many daily soaps address such issues on family channels.....they too are modes of awareness and realization to the society and not the cause for allowing more crime....

i support you fire and request you to continue....and not get disappointed by a few hitches and rather move ahead with more vigor and enthusiasm as i see many other readers are as well looking forward to it.......

all the very best!!!!👍🏼

Edited by libra25 - 14 years ago