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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan-he is hurt too...
Yes, Geet was in pain,
But, everyone saw the same'.
Maan was suffering all the same,
But, it seems it was in vain'.

Yes, she went through hell,
But, that wasn't exactly making his heart swell!
All we know is he meant well,
But, withdrew into his remorses' shell.

Yes, he said those cruel words,
But, then, his own heart was blown into shards,
Her pain was what burned him,
After all, they were one within.

Yes, she was alone'.
But, all that time while he was home,
Without her he was as good as a stone..
In the crowd of people he was all alone''

Yes, she was waiting for him,
But, wasn't his life also grim?
He left no stone unturned to find her,
Failure to do so only brought despair'

Yes, fear plagued her mind,
Yes, she went through life's grind,
Yes, she was hurt, she was losing hope..
Yes, her situation was hard to cope'

But, he was scared, scared to death'
Each moment he feared for his beloved..
Unknown to her whereabouts and well-being,
He also went through agony unseen!!

Yes, she bore his princess alone,
Yes, she made her feel at home.
Yes, she faked his presence for her,
No doubt insecurities plagued her'

But, he was oblivious to her mere presence'
His most beautiful dream he could not fathom..
His princess grew without his blessings,
Can this pain ever lessen??

Yes she lived through it all alone'
Yes she waited and waited all along,
But, wasn't he also covered with grief??
Didn't what he go through seem enough??

Yes she came and expected his love,
But, how could he trust his stars above?
Yes, his denial was her abandonment'
But, weren't the 7 years he missed his punishment??

Yes, she has been hurt beyond words..
But, his heart is also stabbed by swords,
Yes, she has faith he will find her soon,
But he is terrified, terrified of losing his moon'

YES, I CURSED HIM AND SCREAMED PUNISHMENT..
YET, ALL I CAN DO NOW IS SCREAM ENCOURAGEMENT!!
A big big thankyou to all the people who liked he poems...who appreciated me...
thanks a lot...it feels awesome...
and of course...muski di...for posting them here despite my not being here...
love
Swati


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beautiful & super poem love it good job👏👏 swati
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey iam happy that this time iam not tooo late and wht a update yaar cant see Maan in pain love you Muskan for gr8 FF love you alot muhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1


Swati
it's beautiful, emotional poem.
perfectly portrayed maan's feeling.
thanks darling
for awesome poem

Rakhi di...
Thanks for always being there...
thanks for all the love and care...
till sometime ago...i didn't know u...
but now, u always help me through...
thanks for the appreciation...
thanks for the advice plenty...
thanks for the help...u make me feel happy!!😃
love you...thankyou...please keep your support with me
Swati
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

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beautiful & super poem love it good job👏👏 swati

thanks a lot for the appreciation...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow amazing gr8 update Muskan and iam happy that iam not too late this tym to comment love you alot gr888888888888888
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update.. am speechless.. geet's luv n faith for him is amazing... plzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hearting touching part i am in tears😭
if it is geets baby then it has to be maan's na!! i really cried for that line
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Posted: 14 years ago
Can't stop my tear 😭*sob*sob.* 😭 .
Superb update 👏 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very good update
Geets past is haunting him lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update but so sad maan is very sad n nw mk this time also away from her dad pls pls muskan bring them together fast nw its very painful dear pls unite the family

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