Maneet FF - GEETIKA (OLD THREAD 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 136 - Page 33

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
precap is also interestinggg
cont soon
thnx for d PM 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

that was fantastic...

sasha ki aur bajao band🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update.
cant wait for the nxt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was surely a wonderful update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello Everyone...I have been taken few scenes from GHSP serial and tried to present it in a different way. All I intend is to relive those moments.😊

Posting Part 18. Will check spelling/editing mistakes and missing elements one by one.

PART 18:

After the meeting, Geet was told by Maan to update more information in the "Mysore Project" report with important minutes of meeting happened today and give one copy each to him, Aadi and Sasha.

Geet walks into Maan's cabin with the updated reports

Aadi was present.

Maan was scanning thro the files kept on one of the tables arranged in the side of the cabin. But he is talking to Aadi at the same time.

Aadi...do the needful with the 3 meetings happened yesterday. Start working on priority.

Yyyesss Ss..Ss..Sir

Aadi...I wanted to ask you some thing...Did Geet take your permission before leaving early from office yesterday?

Aadi and Geet looked at each other with shock.

Ayooo bhagawane..Indha Maan Boothatha enna seiradhu? Ivalavu chinna vishayatha poi ivvalavu perusu padithi...Nethiku oru naal naan officelendu seekarama kalambi ponadhula naatuku enna nashtam aachu? (Hey Babaji...What shall I do with this Deer Devil? Its such a small issue which he is unnessarily making it complicated. So what if I had left from office early yesterday? Did this COUNTRY suffer a big loss because of that?)

Maan is still busy checking for files...Aadi...main kuch pooch raha hoon tum se.😡

Aadi didn't get the question actually. He is all confused and shivering. When did I give permission to Geet?

Geet pinches Aadi so that Aadi looks at her...Tell YES...and leave She says it softly so that Maan doesnt listen.

YYeess SS...SS...Sir...Geet had taken my permission...SS..SS..Sir...May I take your leave?

Hmm

Aadi leaves from there...taking a bigh SIGH

Now Maan got the required file and he turns to look at Geet. The file slips from his hand and falls on the floor.

Geet and Maan reach the file at the same time and during this process, Geet happen to touch maan's hand insidently but it was a soft touch which has a severe effect on him.

They both look into each other's eyes and seemed to have lost in that moment of life. Geet takes off her hand slowly and they both stand back their normal posture.

Haan Geet

Sir...I just came to give this updated report to you. Kindly go thro it and let me know if I have to make any further changes.

Hmm

Geet leaves from Maan's cabin and she goes to meet Aadi straight away. Maan is left behind thinking what just happened...and why is it happening again and again.

Aadi Sir...Sorry.😳

Hee...Hee...Geet...tum ne to mujhe marwa hi dala yaar. When did I give you permission.😕

Sir...Actually, boss asked me the reason for leaving early. Actually, I was upset and I left early. But I didn't show my Anger when Boss asked me this question. I replied saying I had personal work and I had informed Aadi Sir. That's it.

That's it? Tumhare saat meri bhi naukri katre main pad jaati.

Ayyo Bhagawane...I never expected he would remember this.

You dont know boss...he doesnt leave any trace of doubt and if you are cought in action...you are gone.🤢

Uff...BOSS is really impossible. Wonder why he always finds reason to schold. Anyways, this is updated report copy for your reference.

Sasha-Tasha in office cafeteria...

Tasha...you know something? MK is not MK

Saashaa...Mera matlab hain Ma'm...MK is not MK? Then who is MK?😕

SHUT UP Tasha...Didnt you see, how MK was praising Geet. MK scholded her yesterday and he is supporting her today...and even this Behenji doesnt seem to have been effected with MK's scholdings is all supporting her boss...And...And...Kal tak GEETIKA...Aaj GEET Bangayi!!! Kuch tho pak raha hain donon main.😡

Geet has no other choice. She had to meet Sasha and give her a copy of the report. She comes all the way to cafeteria to meet Sasha.

Sasha Ma'm. This is a copy of the report for your reference. I have checked it with boss and he says everything is fine in report.

Woh tho kahenge hi...Jab GEETIKA GEET ban sakthi hain tho report bi tik ho saktha hain. Sasha-Tasha look at each other and smile with a evil smirk.😈

Excuse me?😲

Let me tell you one thing...many girls joind this organisation with an intention to seduce Boss...they were kicked out of the job and I...I am the only person who has been here for last five years...I know even you are intending to seduce boss and I am seeing that you are doing it nicely.😡

Enough Sasha Ma'm. Firstly I am here for a job. I got it with God's blessings and I am doing full justice to it. I need not explain it to you how! Secondly...keep all your imaginations and dirty seducing thoughts to yourself. No body here is trying to follow it.😡

Sasha-Tasha mouth open wide.😲

Geet leaves from the cafeteria...Sasha all angry again and slamed her right foot on the near by wall and jumps with the pain.😆

Geet had enough time for the day...she again starts rearranging her files in her respective cabin. She had started this on the first day but couldn't continue.This took whole day out of her and its a must for her as she needs to go thro these files on daily basis.

6:00 PM and Geet leaves from office on time. She goes to the Ganesh Temple.

Bhagawane...ennai mannichudu...nethiku naan romba kovatla irunden. Ippo ellame sari aayiduchu...romba nandri. (Babaji...sorry...I was really angry yesterday. Now the situation is back to normal and thanks for everything)

Dadima enters the temple... Geet was here yesterday at 5:30 PM. Now its nearly 6:30 PM. Assuming Geet would have come here and already left.

Dadima also finishes her prayers and she hears someone calls her...

DADIMA

She knew its Geet...she pretended she didn't listen and she slowly starts to leave from there.

DADIMA

Now, Dadima is little nervous...How will I meet Geet? Poor Girl has lost her job for sure.😕

DADIMA...DADIMA...Geet is all happy and swinging taking Dadima along...People present there start smiling at both of them.😆

Arre Arre Geet...Dheere Dheere...She takes long breath...Why is she happy and laughing so much?Kahin mere pothe ke wajeh se paagal tho nahin ho gayi hai? (😆)

Kaisi hain Aap? kya baat hain? 😊
Dadima...Main Bil kul tik hoon. Aap kaisi hain? You look worried to me...All fine na?😕

Haan bete...Dadima is worried what to ask her

DADIMA...I must say that you are a...SMW

SMW?😲

SUPER MIRACULUS WOMAN👏

Challo...Main hi bachi thi...A nick name for me too...Yeh ladki sach main gayi😆

You will not believe what happened yesterday. My boss paid a visit to my home yesterday. And..he told me SORRY😉

DADIMA couldn't belive what she just heard...this girl must be day dreaming for sure.

Aap mazak kar rahi hain na? 😕

Nahin Dadima...Sach main...THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA came to my home and he apologized for what ever happened yesterday...And my job is secured..no problem what so ever. Thank You Dadima...This miracle happened all because of you. ⭐️

Yeh ladki kya bol rahin hain...MAAN iss ladki ke ghar gaye aur Sorry bole...Yeh kaise hua? SORRY Shabdh tho unke dictionary main bhi nahin hain.🤢

Dadima is not able to understand whether she should laugh or cry.

Dadima turns towards Ganesh Idol and thanks God for securing Geet's job and now all her worries came to an end. See...I told you na...you have come to the door steps of this temple. All your wishes will come true.😊

Yes Dadima...This temple is really amazing and you are a SMW. 👍🏼

Now please tell me why are you so worried? If you are worried then what about me? who will give me strength whenever I am in trouble?😕

What reason to give her? I had a bad dream about you early in the morning that you have lost your job...that's why I was worried.

Dont worry Dadima...All fine now with regard to work. I'm back to normal life. And thank you once again for your encouraging words.

I didn't do anything beta...you have got what you deserve that's it.

They both talk for few more time and then leave.

Dadima is all happy meeting Geet and that too at this temple...which Dadima considers as a sacred place...Is God trying to indicate some thing? Ofcouse how can it be denied that Geet has all qualities for an ideal Bahu. Something special in her that's why Maan has apologized her and that too going all the way to her home. Till date many of the girls would try to make friendship with me with an intention to butter me and make their way to her Grandson. But Geet is not like that she is intending a genuine friendship. Moreover, Geet doesnt know that I am Maan's Grandmother...Let the sleeping dogs lie down for some more time.😉

Also, Daadi has been noticing changes in Maan's behaviour. Assuming all happening since the time Geet has joined KC. Hmmm...Patha tho lagana padega ki chakkar kya hain.😉

Precap: Me thinking...but promise to give a wonderful update next.😳
Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
my like button is not working ,but as usual awesome update . i am loving the pace of story ,so sweet of geet and smw and their talks. loved it.
Edited by acjanfeb1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow bhagwaan ne dadi ki ghanti baja di ab aayega maza aur dadi bhi maan mein changes dekh rhi hai wowowo waiting for more mast parts awesome dear love it..thank you for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww loved it n loved the way dadi was hell scared that maan would have fired geet n SMW's SMB is working very fast

P.S-SMW means super miraclous women right so SMB means super miraclous brain😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

wowww loved it n loved the way dadi was hell scared that maan would have fired geet n SMW's SMB is working very fast


P.S-SMW means super miraclous women right so SMB means super miraclous brain😆

😆...just got this SMW idea while editing actually...its working...😆
You are taking it further ...SMB...ofcourse...dadima's brain is one 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow i loved it yaar...awsome one !!!! do continue soon

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