Jeevansathi (RTMC ff) Pt 12 in Pg 54

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Sirani

@sirani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

amazing update!!! simply loved it :) do update soon

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

😛 😊 Both the parts were just too gud.
loved the vidai scene seems if i was imagining the scene.

The eye lock of sid & avantika was just awesome.
Loved the part.

Will wait for next Update .

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Forget to tell dat the character sketch was nice.
Just one thing dear,
in the character sketch there was that, after sum incident happen sid had become workohlic, just curious to know dat.will wait to know dat.
bye

Edited by Cuty16 - 14 years ago

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karuu

@Manipadma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

thank u so much for updating jeevansathi...i was eagarly waiting for this... I lov d cute scenes betn sid n avni...plzzz giv us more romantic scenes in next update 😛 😳 ...n hey i like the siggi on 1st page..rtmc r really luking like bride n groom 😉
N the most imp thing plzz plzzz update soon...i really like this ff... n thanxx 4 pm 😃...

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

awesome update...do cont soon

loved it

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

sooo...

sooo beautiful...

simply amazing part...

really heart touching...

loved the eye lock b/w sid n avni...

superb...

thnx for the pm...

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shruja

@shruja

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

thanks for updating after long time and long update too!!😉
😃very touchy n beautiful update!!🤗
liked bonding between avani's family specially scene of her n bro!!😭
thanks the beautiful journey till sid home n the eyelock part is top of cherry!! that was so cute n the sid asking to avni😳
so when will u next update?😉😛
😛waiting for that!!!😍