Jeevansathi (RTMC ff) Pt 12 in Pg 54 - Page 43

Originally posted by: lisalafaiya

yyyiiipppeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u updated nd amazing like usual yyyiiipppeee

Originally posted by: Freethinker

i must say i enjoyed reading it so much that i wanted it a bit longer...it was awesome, mindblowing update dear...i just loved reading it...eager for the next update...so clearly and wonderfully written...lov u

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

reso jii

wil edit soon.

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o me god, sacchi main kammaal ka ud tha, kamaal n dhamaal ka hona hi tha, coz mera fav ff jo h,

main iska wait karti ho, dil n jaan se.

so, now abt ud,

kinna sweet tha,

first, avni...shram jye rhi h, rukne ka naam hi nhi le rhi,

ooo...rukegi bhi kaise...first kiss jo tha madam ka aapne UNKE saath...

god, that prt described wonderfully, lovd it, juz mindblowing...

den, sidz ki halat tho aur bhi bori h,

best thng i lovd ws... he dont feel anything like dis for shagun too...i ws drumming ma computer table in happiness for dis...

and the bestest thing ws, he neva feel dis for anyone, evn gals who pounce on him...iske liye i ws jumping on ma bed...

n the most bestest thing ws... he feels his rite over avni,

sirf vhi choo sakta h avni ko.. sahi kaha,...

dis is love..

i noe u r excited ki maine iske liya kya reaction diya hoga...

well, jo mera most exaggerated reaction hota dat is -BHANGRA...

so i did bhangra for dis,

di u were sooperbo in description, lovely use of words...amazing creation of senses...

areyy, wah..

chalo kuch tho asar hoa meri naughty sangat ka sidz pr...

abhi sidz is no more nadaan...

aapni patni ko chedna la gya h ...

di, dat scene ws so romantic, until his laughter.

i knew kuch aisa ho jayega...

voh kya h na!, aapke dimaag jo chalta h, thoda thoda idea h mujhe...

pillow fight, mujhe bhi bhot psnd h, i lov pillow fight...

, phirr se bed pr girr gye, ...thoda privately girte tho.. acha hota

oops! mom ne dekh liya,

aunty ko vishwas h ki sid will return, mujhe bhi h..

but iska matlab yeh nhi ki main aunty ho :P

actually main tho sabki amma ho🤣

okay, jokes aprt..

sachhi, dil khush kr diya as usuall..

di aap voh tie wala scene bhul tho nhi gye na...

plz , likhna usse ok..

haye, js ki jitni tareef karo, utna kam h.

mujhe bhot psnd h js. bhot jyada psnd h js..

phjeww!... ek saans le lo,tab se nonstop, type kr rhi ho...

kahin keyboard na kharab ho jaye...

ud soon, lov u di, plz ud soon,

lov u di

Originally posted by: glossyglassy

lovely update di!

I love the way u potray their emotions! Excellent!👏

I found this really funny😆

"Jab bhi main Avantika ke paas hota hu meri saari self control jaise waqt dekhkar ghaas charne chali jaati hain."

The prank Sid played on Avani was very cute...

Good to see that the naughty Sid is coming back

i'm sure Avani will soon make him fall completely in love with her

I'm sure the onlooker was Sid's mother...

Waiting for the next update

If it's not's much trouble can u please Pm me when you update next

luv u...😃

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Just got ur PM...thanx

I read the update even before ur Pm...ab story itni amazing hai...how can readers wait?😉😆

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Thanx dear for such a lovely, cute, romantic nd awesome update.

I am sure dat person in last para is none other dan sid's mom

nd now i'll say d same "plz ud soon", u know na about my greediness to get d updates ;) ;)

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

beautiful update...:)

pls update soon..

Originally posted by: moonlight44

lovely

Originally posted by: samantha1987200

Hi

What a mind blowing update!!!! Loved it!!!! Loved the interaction bw Av and Sid plus Sid teasing Av😉

Plz continue soon😊

Love😊

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

so so so awesome update yaar
maza aa gya padhke :)