Walking With YOU (MN).chp25...12/10..pg 143

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maria

@Maria.

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Beautiful update Fiza

i loved it

do continue soon

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mayuloveu

@mayuloveu

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#172

what a beautiful update. I love it

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Hi Fiza
u know what i missed part 4- i dont know how could i miss it...
tune mujhe PM nehi kya- right😡

phele mujhe mallom he nehi tha- lekin jab maine part 5 parne lagi - tou mujhe kuch samajh main nehi aya-- 😕so i rechecked it and have found i missed part 4
sadu kyun pm nehi kya mujhe????--- main tujhe dekh lungi😡😡
btw bahut he badiya update tha...
thoda bahut talkif huye ye parne main... yaar Urdu is so much tough... kya a thoda englsih ya bengali usekar sakte hai...😆😆

u know what i loved mayankz gift with chit... and his gift made nups happy...a sweet ans simple gift... hehehehehe the email convo was so funny...nups is really very innocent... By GOD mayank is too naughty... apni mangetar ki saath aisa flirt... mera nupur kinta ghabra gaya...

part 5

awww so Dia told that it was mayank and nups was in tension ...
use ye lag rahe thi ki kahi mayank saach main tou flirt nehi hai???? i can understand fiza...
nupur ne galad nehi socha... after allnuur usko dekha bhi nehi baatkarna tou door ki baat hai...
But thanx GOD misunderstanding nehi hua... i loved thier e-mail convo... so maynk was mesmerized by her innocence and nups was by his honesty... wah wah -accha hai...
oye hoye maaynk saw her... Fiza kaha ??? kaise????? i want to know it re...
Hayr bahut he accha update tha-dil khush ho jane jiase update...
i really loved it
muahhh jane- weldone----very beautifully written
keep it up
take care

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#174

Fiza bautiful update
adorable prt

loved how their relation developing

thanks for the pm

lov ya

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#175

Fiza, tu aur teri urdu

pata hai half an houe laga hai parne me

n m sure ekdin main teri urdu wajah sehi mar jaungi

par ek baat hai teri urdu kamal ki hai👏...by god⭐️

bt d update is so nice.😃

love their mails...there is so much purity in it...nupur too very nice and innocent just like mayank.😍

love them.❤️

mayur realation is alwz so pure, nice, swett, cute, innocent and worth watching.

par ab mayank to gaya kaam se...abhi k liye to problem postponed ho gaya...par baad me kya karega😛

bechara mayank...ab to musibat ho gaya😛

waiting for mayanks answer😉

love entire update.😃

beautiful.⭐️

amazing.⭐️

continue soon.😊

thanks for the pm.😊

❤️🤗

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#176

Aray wah Fizza ap na to kamal kar dia

kya kamal -e- khobsuurti say ap na dono ka ehsasat or mehsosat ki akasi ki ha

Beshak kisi bhi rishta ko aga barhanay ka lia ek dosra ko samajhna bohat hi zarori hota ha

Bohat acha laga parh kar

agji kist ka besabri say intezar raha ga

der mat kijiye ga

Shukria

Gul

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MysteryTarannum

@MysteryTarannum

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#177

Fizaaa...i really love this ff...as i am also a muslim so can connect with it really well as u hav written it in pure urdu will reply in urdu too...
Adaab...Fiza hume aapka ye FF bahot hi zyada pasand aaya aur jis tarah ke hamara muslim religion hai aur uske saare traditions aapne baqoobi likhe hai isme...hum mayank aur nupur ki guftagu(i hope d word fits here) ka zariya bahot pasand aaya...hume umeed hai ki app is FF ka agla part bahot jald update karenge...

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#178

superb update

jst luved the way, u portrayed everything

cont soon

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#179

Reserved... 😳

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Haan, aur shauhar say pehle aap ka rishta deewar say banta hai. Biwi aur shauhar ke rishtey ko waqt lagta hai, aur ahista ahista ek mazboot rishta banta hai. Lekin iss say pehle ek larki ki zindagi main kahin aur rishtey abnte hai, deewar-bhabhi ka aur aapke in-laws aur aise kahin aur... aur akhr main shauhar-biwi ka yeh risha waq leta hai lekin bohat mazboot hota hai..

As that is said, coming to the update...

As ususal bohat achcha likha aapne... Humein ek baat bohat achchi lagi, Nupur kuch bhi karne say pehle apni behn say ijazart manngi. Yeh bohat achcha laga humien, kyunke agar baad main koi bhi musibat ho iss baat par toh Nupur ka saath dene wali Dia hai...

Yeh e-mail ka silsila bohat achcha hai, koi is say ghalat samjh sakta hai lekin humein aisa nahi lagta. E-mail ke wajah say woh Mayank ko jaan sakti hai, samjh sakti hai. Aur jaise Dia ne kaha apne nazariye say unko dekh sakti hai aur apne baare main khud bata sakti hain.. Lekin yeh jaan kar achcha laga ke Nupur Mayank say khul kar baat kar rahi hai... Jitni ehmiyat Mayank ko is rishtey say hain, woh shayad ab Nupur bhi karti hain, pehle bhi karto hogi lekin ab woh us shaks ko janti hai jis say ussne puri zindagi guzarni hai...

Akhrri line humein chu gaiy...Mayank kitna achhca insaan hai shayad Nupur ab samjh paye ghi, sab kuch hone ke baad bhi woh Nupur ko abhi bhi yeh faisla karne ka haq deta hai... Yeh baat humein Mayank ki bohat achchi lagi, aisa insaa kaun nahi chhahe gha Nupur bohat khush kismat hai...

Bohat achcha likhti hai aap, aur aapk shukr ada karna chahte haim Urdu main likhe ka... I know demand shayad thora ziada ho, lekin aap nahi janti parh kar humein bohat khushi milti hai... issliye shukriya...🤗

-Laiba

Ps- Just wanted to clear twat I said, You and Neela have completly different style of writing, their both unique and the concepts are both very different. The onlu similarity I can see is thay you both write in urdu and that too quite different. I wasn't comparing and If you thought so then I'm very sorry...its not what I meant... 😊

Edited by princez_94 - 14 years ago